Naam__________________Baadal

by baadal102 on December 31, 2008, 03:10:21 PM
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Ruk ruk ke mai hamesha chalta raha,
Har sehar mai apne kaatil ko dhundta raha,

Hua hai jab se nazron se ojhal wo,
Jaise her dua ko mai taresta raha,

Nahi raha jeewan mai kuch ek us ke siwa,
Jis naam ke sahare mai humesha chalta raha,

Na jaane kis bheed mai kho gaya wo,
Nazron mai jis ki pyar hamesha mai dekhta raha,

Kabhi manjoor na the ashq mari ankho mai,
Zalim na jaane wo tanha chor kanha jaata raha,

Sayad ibbadat mai us KHUDA ki koi kami the,
Jo umar bhar ka gum sine mai dafan ker gaya,

Har sehar mai apne kaatil ko dhundta raha,
Ruk ruk ke mai hamesha chalta raha..............



Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2008, 03:38:53 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on December 31, 2008, 03:10:21 PM
Ruk ruk ke mai hamesha chalta raha,
Har sehar mai apne kaatil ko dhundta raha,

Hua hai jab se nazron se ojhal wo,
Jaise her dua ko mai taresta raha,

Nahi raha jeewan mai kuch ek us ke siwa,
Jis naam ke sahare mai humesha chalta raha,

Na jaane kis bheed mai kho gaya wo,
Nazron mai jis ki pyar hamesha mai dekhta raha,

Kabhi manjoor na the ashq mari ankho mai,
Zalim na jaane wo tanha chor kanha jaata raha,

Sayad ibbadat mai us KHUDA ki koi kami the,
Jo umar bhar ka gum sine mai dafan ker gaya,

Har sehar mai apne kaatil ko dhundta raha,
Ruk ruk ke mai hamesha chalta raha..............


Baadal

Ati sundar...... bahut accha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2008, 04:25:23 PM »
bahoot khoob baadal ji
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2009, 07:45:30 AM »
thanx a lot
sonia ji

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pooja ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2009, 10:27:10 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 01, 2009, 09:02:33 AM
Bohat khoob badal but have u written this i mean is this your kalam b'coz i have seen the same poetry in mehfil-e-shayri posted by some Rahul.

i am sorry sajid ji lakin aap to jaante hi hai mujhe ki mai kisi or ke words use nahi karta, hope kisi or ke vichar hum se milte ho, u  always check the time & date of orignal post.
hope u see there the time & date acctually http://baadal102.blogspot.com/


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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2009, 11:37:15 AM »
Bohat Achche Baadal Bhaijaan,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Sachchi Pardhkar Achcha Laga,.
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2009, 12:35:37 PM »
sajid ji bahut bahut sukria jo aap ne mujhe wo link diya. i am verry thankful to u. lakin aap ko apna comment delete nahi karna chahiye tha. so plz comment delete ker ke hume ruswa na kare. again thanx a lot sajid ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2009, 12:36:43 PM »
Thanx a lot J@@N JI
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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2009, 12:39:41 PM »
 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob baadal ji...
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2009, 12:50:47 PM »
Naam "Azeem, Ka Tu Badnaam Karde,.
Subhaa Ko Iski Gham Ki Shaam Karde,.

Muskuraana Iska Achcha Nahi Lagta,.
Gham Dekar Rona Iska Aaam Karde,.

Umar Bhar Na Bhulaa Paaye Tujhe Ye,.
Baar Baar Yaad Kare, Aisa Koi Kaam Karde,.

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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2009, 01:11:40 PM »
thanx a lot honey ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2009, 01:12:36 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 01, 2009, 12:50:47 PM
Naam "Azeem, Ka Tu Badnaam Karde,.
Subhaa Ko Iski Gham Ki Shaam Karde,.

Muskuraana Iska Achcha Nahi Lagta,.
Gham Dekar Rona Iska Aaam Karde,.

Umar Bhar Na Bhulaa Paaye Tujhe Ye,.
Baar Baar Yaad Kare, Aisa Koi Kaam Karde,.

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«Reply #12 on: January 01, 2009, 01:34:17 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on January 01, 2009, 01:12:36 PM
bahut khoob J@@N JI dil se daad kabool farmaayen


Shukriya Baadal Ji,.
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«Reply #13 on: January 02, 2009, 05:29:57 AM »
sajid ji namsakaar, bahut bahut sukria jo aap ne mujhe mare text chori ki baat bataye, issiliye mai kuch ker paaya finally sachai ki jeet hue. the site give me the right place.
check it out
http://www.shers.in/shayari/mehfil-e-shayari/ruk-ruk-ke-mai-hamesha-chalta-raha-73166/



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«Reply #14 on: January 02, 2009, 06:55:18 AM »
bohut khoob baadal ji
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