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yun is qadar na chaho hamko
dil hai yah aksar nadaani kar jaata hai
yah dikahata hai aksar khawaab wahi hamko
jo kabhi sach zindagi mein ho nahi paata hai
chura leta hai yah neend aankho ki
fir beqarar ho ke rulaata hai tadpaata hai
kaun samjah paaya hai yahan dard mera
jo bhi aata hai bas ek zakham aur de jaata hai
kyu jaalte ho aas ka deep apne dil mein
yah deep aksar zindagi mein andhera hi bhar jaata hai
mat raha karo yun udas udas meri yaado mein
aksar yah udas dil hi zindagi tanah kar jaata hai !!
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2007, 04:20:52 AM » |
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yun is qadar na chaho hamko
dil hai yah aksar nadaani kar jaata hai
yah dikahata hai aksar khawaab wahi hamko
jo kabhi sach zindagi mein ho nahi paata hai
chura leta hai yah neend aankho ki
fir beqarar ho ke rulaata hai tadpaata hai
kaun samjah paaya hai yahan dard mera
jo bhi aata hai bas ek zakham aur de jaata hai
kyu jaalte ho aas ka deep apne dil mein
yah deep aksar zindagi mein andhera hi bhar jaata hai
mat raha karo yun udas udas meri yaado mein
aksar yah udas dil hi zindagi tanah kar jaata hai !!
O Ranjana.. badi hi baariki se mohobbat ke dard ka ahsaas karwya hai aap ne
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2007, 06:19:30 AM » |
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shurkiya paani ......aapne iske jazbaato ko samjha
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2007, 06:26:46 AM » |
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mujhse kaha hai aaj mere dil ne
ki chaand ko chahao jee bhar ke
par uski tamana yun kiya na karo
woh ho nahi sakata kisi ek ka yahan
yun har pal usko besabab yaad kiya na karo
na kaho apne dil ki baat yahan kisi se
yahan pal mei afsaane ban jaate hain
yun kar ke bhrosa har kisi par tum
yun raaz apne dil ke diya na karo
pee lo yahan har dard ko dil mein
par uska jikar apne geeto mein kiya na karo
rona bhi ho toh chupke se rona yahan
uski bahaaon mein sambhalne ki umeed mein jeeya na karo !!
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2007, 07:02:37 AM » |
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chand ko chahna koi bhul nahi hoti
zindagi phoolo.n ki sej nahi hoti
hoti hai mohabbat sabko poonam k chand se
par jo chahe usse amavas mein wo aashiqi sabse nahi hoti
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2007, 12:52:46 PM » |
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Ranju di... Bahut achha likha hai aapne... Dono nazm bahut achhi lagii...
Phoenix... Wonderful Reply by you...
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2007, 01:36:30 PM » |
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SHUKRIYA SHIKHA ....BAHUT KHOOB NITTU .....GOOD REPLY ..
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2007, 01:51:13 PM » |
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yun dil mein koi aas ka deep na jalaao
yun fir hame zindagi ka sach na baatao
rahne do mere dil ko yun hi tanha udas sa
fir se koi pyaar ka geet na ab dohaaro
chalata nahi yun koi saath har pal kisi ke
jin rasato ki na ho manzil woh phoolo se na sajaao
jaante hain hum ki zindagi ki haqiqat hai kya
in badrang hoti meri parchaai ko rango se na bharmaao
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2007, 02:56:21 PM » |
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kaun samjah paaya hai yahan dard mera
jo bhi aata hai bas ek zakham aur de jaata hai
behad umda line hai ........touching 1 and true. |
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2007, 06:14:28 PM » |
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bohat khoob ranjana ji,awesome.
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2007, 11:32:44 AM » |
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bahut acche ranjana jeeeee
bahut accha likhti hai aap
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2007, 10:08:23 AM » |
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shukriya fahi ..nidhi ,,ankur ..
mil na saki koi khusi tere daaman se
toh kyu dard se hum bhar jaaye
tere diye zakahm dete hain sakun
meri zindagi bikhre inhi se
aur fir inhi se kuch sambhal jaaye !!
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2007, 12:08:29 AM » |
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Very Nice Ranjana & Nice One Phoenix...
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2007, 10:15:39 AM » |
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dil -e-nadaan ko yahi tasali hai mere
ki wah akela hi is duniya mein barbaad nahi hai
sab hai yahan ajnabi dil se ek duje ke
par kahne ko yun saath chalte hamsfar kai hai
hai ek naqaab sabke chehare par koi chipka hua
har shaqs mein baste yahan vajood kai hai
bhaag rahi hai zindagi na jaane kis ki talash mein
sab ke dil mein chiapa hua ek sehera sa kahi hai!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2007, 05:29:20 AM » |
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yun is qadar na chaho hamko
dil hai yah aksar nadaani kar jaata hai
yah dikahata hai aksar khawaab wahi hamko
jo kabhi sach zindagi mein ho nahi paata hai
chura leta hai yah neend aankho ki
fir beqarar ho ke rulaata hai tadpaata hai
kaun samjah paaya hai yahan dard mera
jo bhi aata hai bas ek zakham aur de jaata hai
kyu jaalte ho aas ka deep apne dil mein
yah deep aksar zindagi mein andhera hi bhar jaata hai
mat raha karo yun udas udas meri yaado mein
aksar yah udas dil hi zindagi tanah kar jaata hai !!
ranju
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