Nafraton se mohabbat karte hain

by @kaash on June 17, 2009, 07:30:51 AM
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Jane zamane me vo log kaise rahte hain,milte hain khuloos se par nafraton se mohabbat karte hain, Dil me zahar itna ki khud ki bhi khushi manzoor nahi,hanske doosron par khud ko aur khokhla karte hain  Shak itna ki aaine me khud ko hi galat kah baithe,doston so rooh ki kasmen leke doston ko jhhootha kahte hain Mohabbat ka sila ishq ko yun dete hain wo,nakaam hone pe khud ko sharaab me dubo lete hain    Pyaar  me unhe dene se zyada pane ki chaah hoti hai,bholi mohabbat ke saath masoom jazbaton ko bhi badnami ka sila dete hain Zindagi me unse bhi kaisi shikayat 'kaash' vo bhi apne hain,kabhi janenge vo bhi har seene me dard raha karte hain
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 08:40:17 AM »
Wah kaash Bhai.. Lajawab Lafzon ke sath Lajawab Peshkash Hai aapki... Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob.. Daaad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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shab
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 08:44:22 AM »
   KAASH JI AAPKA JAWAAB NAHI
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 11:33:13 AM »
kaash dear likha hai toh aapne bahut hi khoobsurat hai .......magar mere dost iska presentation dhang se nahin hai ........agli baar please is baat ka khayal rakhiye taaki logonko padne mein asuvidha na ho.......aap itna behtareen likhte hain phir aisi baarek galtiyaan mat kariye....keep it up the gud wrk
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 12:49:25 PM »
Jane zamane me vo log kaise rahte hain,milte hain khuloos se par nafraton se mohabbat karte hain, Dil me zahar itna ki khud ki bhi khushi manzoor nahi,hanske doosron par khud ko aur khokhla karte hain  Shak itna ki aaine me khud ko hi galat kah baithe,doston so rooh ki kasmen leke doston ko jhhootha kahte hain Mohabbat ka sila ishq ko yun dete hain wo,nakaam hone pe khud ko sharaab me dubo lete hain    Pyaar  me unhe dene se zyada pane ki chaah hoti hai,bholi mohabbat ke saath masoom jazbaton ko bhi badnami ka sila dete hain Zindagi me unse bhi kaisi shikayat 'kaash' vo bhi apne hain,kabhi janenge vo bhi har seene me dard raha karte hain

LAJAWAAB LIKHA HAI..
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2009, 12:59:10 PM »
Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji  icon_thumleft
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2009, 05:24:23 PM »
Very nicely written Kaash...

Keep writing Usual Smile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2009, 07:52:22 PM »
Wonderful creation Kaash ji,very nice. Applause Applause Applause
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