Nahi iska naam apmaan hai tawayaf bhi ek insaan hai

by @kaash on August 02, 2009, 10:52:22 AM
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doston prastut kavita me maine
Tawayaf par likha hai ki vo
insaano se bilkul alag nahi
ye shabd kahin se bhi kharaab nahi
vo bhi hamare samaaj ka banaya hua
aur samaaj ka hi ek ang hai.
isme maine apne yahan ki senior kaviyatri
Nira ji ki kavita se inspire hokar likha hai
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/sub-yeh-kahte-hain-main-tawaaiif-hoon-t46944.0.html
kis tarah se unhone ek dard ko mehsoos kia
aur likha jiski tareef nahi ki ja sakti
maine bhi ek koshish ki kuch likhne ki
ye prayaas unki poem ko dedicate karna chahta hun
aur ye kavita unhe tha aap sabko samarpit
asha hai prayaas ko sarahenge




vo bhi ek pyari si pari thi
apne babul ke bagiya ki kali thi
uska bhi bachpan hansta khelta
uske dil me bhi armaano ki ladi thi


hamesha sabko khush rakhti sabhi ko pyaar deti
kabhi dil kisi ka dukh jae to maafi maang lia karti

vo jab bhi roti to bahot sahne ke baad hi roti
vo jab bhi roti phir bahot der tak roti rahti

bholapan shuru se hi usme racha basa tha
masoomiyat ka rang uske chehre me basa tha

vo laad pyaar khoob pakar bhi bigdi nahi
padhai likhai me bhi kabhi pichhdi nahi

babul ki aakhon me maa ki saason me uske sapne the
unhone pyari bitiya ka khyaal swapn sareekhe rakhe the

uske dil me bhi ma baap ke armaan poora karne ka sapna tha
par use ye soch kar dukh hota ki use ek din is aagan se bichhadna tha

sabkuch acha chal raha tha ki jane vaqt ki kaise aandhi aayi
jo tod gayi khwaabon ka gharonda,aur use mili ek tanhaayi

vo tanhaayi jo uski kabhi saathi kabhi dushman ban jaati hai
vo tanhaayi jisme doobkar use beete palon ki yaad bahot aati hai

ye kaisi tanhaayi jisne use tavayaf ka naam dia
par isi tanhaayi ne use sabse ladne ka haq aur utsaah dia

isi tanhaayi se usne jana ki tawayaf bhi ek insaan hai
isi tanhaayi ne ye mana ki uske dil me bhi rahta bhagwaan hai

samaaj ke chand logon ke dwara vo chhali to gayi hai
par phir bhi usne dil se kabhi kisi ko thokar nahi di hai

jab bhi vo udaas aur behad tanha ho jati hai
kabhi babul kabhi maa ki yaad me kho jati hai

jab bhi uska dil kisi se beintaha dard pata
use ghar ke aangan ka vo ped bahot yaad aata

aksar uska dil tanhaayi me bhi hasne lagta hai
bachpan ki shararaton ko yaad kar dil khone lagta hai

Tawayaf ek majboori sirf majboori ka naam hai
tawayaf shabd hargiz nahi koi daagh ya nishaan hai

vo bhi hamari tarah aur kai dafe hum se bhi achi insaan hai
kitne pandit pujaari kai baar peeche rah jate aur vo pa jati bhagwaan hai

Tawayaf bhi ek insaan hai
nahi iska naam apmaan hai
Tawayaf bhi ek insaan hai


vo pyari si pari thi hi nahi hai bhi
apne baabul ki bagiya ki kali thi hi nahi hai bhi


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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 11:06:21 AM »
Bahut dard bhara kavita likha aapne Kaash ji,nice thoughts
very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 04:40:59 PM »
Yash Bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiii...... Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai Dost.. Bahut Hi Gahari Aur Unchi Soch ke Sath Likha Qalaam hai aapka.. Great Work..!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2009, 09:06:36 AM »
Bahut khoob Kaash Ji
Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2009, 09:51:53 AM »
KYA BAAT HAI   KAASH JI......


YEH PIYA HUA UN INSAANO KA JAAM HAI,JISE PEEKAR KHUD KIYA ASH HAI,AUR UNKO KIYA BAD-NAAM HAI,
NAHI ISKA NAAM APMAAN HAI,TAWAYAF BHI EK INSAAN HAI.
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poppoetry
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2009, 11:16:01 AM »
bahut achhi aur gehri soch k saath likha hai aapne kaash ji....sahi mayno mein aapne sach ko aainaa dikhaya hai...gar har koi in baaton ko samjhe to har kisi ko yha ek jaisa aadar mile....bahut achhe Kaash ji
              Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2009, 12:57:29 PM »
Very nice creation Kaash Ji, commendable work  Applause Applause Applause
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2009, 01:22:09 PM »
Dear Yash bro,

Thanks for bringing to my notice this wonderful creation through your PM.

A commendable work Applause Applause Applause

Mujhe koyi bhi jab kisi social issue par likhta hai toh bahut acha lagta hai...keep writing Thumbs UP
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poppoetry
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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2009, 05:40:30 PM »
Shukariya Pooja ji,aapne kavita aur prayaas ko saraha
aapke alfazon ke lie aapka shukariya,sahi kaha aapne
kuch aap bhi likhti,well thanks a lot for yr nice words.

samaaj me unhe aadar aur sneha ek din milna hi hai
jo majboor hoke banti hain tawayaf vo hoti kisi ki behna hi hai
zaroori nahi ki hum unke lie kuch karen ya karne ki sochen
Khuda se to unhe apne aatmsammaan ko sammaan milna hi hai


ye bhi bahut khub kha aapne kaash ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Sager4u
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2009, 02:52:14 AM »
Bahut khoob kash ji, kuch likhne ki koshish kar raha hun.
Sahti hai wo dard itna lekin ek aah b nahi karti,hote hai dil me arma kitne har arma roj chakna choor hai karti,logo ki nazar me buri banti,logo k taano ko suna karti,lekin kisi ne ye na socha ki kis majboori k karan ek mahila veshya hai banti.
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2009, 02:59:23 AM »
Bahut khoob @Kaash ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2009, 07:02:50 AM »
bahut achche yash bhai yeh kavita na sirf taalyon kii hakdaar hai balki yeh sochne par bhi majboor karti hai........aise hi likhte rahe yash bhai
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ishu_singh10
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2009, 06:09:47 PM »
nice one ..... occasion17
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ishu_singh10
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2009, 06:09:48 PM »
nice one
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