***Najane Ashk...***

by Meena on February 04, 2005, 03:40:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2005, 05:45:50 PM »
thank u,sab apki sangat ka hi asar hai. Winking
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«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2005, 05:47:15 PM »
lol arre nahin re, tum shuru se achi thi na!  :D  keep it up kuddiye!
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«Reply #17 on: February 05, 2005, 07:25:52 AM »
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thank you dosto!!!!!!!!!

gud work creator ji and gum ji!

 :D


Thanx Meena ji,

Hum toh tere har aansso ko apne palko pe rakh lete,
Par kya karte tumne humko ista sa bhi haq na diya... :cry:


haq pochne se nahin par ehesas karne se mitla hai,
saath dene ka wada jo karte hai, bohot door kada milta hai!!!!!


Hmmm
Ehsaas e haq se hi toh kal ek bat kahi maine,
Kya mila mujhe phir bhi siva ruswaiyon ke..
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thycreator
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«Reply #18 on: February 05, 2005, 07:30:56 AM »
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wah meena..

aetbaar na karna tu kisipe pyaar me
dhadakna chhod deta hai dil kisike intezaar me


Nishita ji....hum nahi mante..

Pyar mein gar aetbaar na karoge toh kya milega,
Ek duje par vishwas ka deep phir kaise jalega,
Ye bhi sach hai ki intezaar mein dard o dukh hote hai,
Bina mehboob ki aas ke ek dil bhi kaise dhadkega..
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thycreator
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«Reply #19 on: February 05, 2005, 07:33:26 AM »
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wow meena.......thats really nice.And humtum,amit,pandit you r all also 2 good......

"Ashq aaye hon jaise unki yaad dilane k liye,
 ham kab se baithe hain unka pyar pane k liye,
 ek nazar ham par bhi daal ke dekhiye,
 zindagi kurbaan apki ek nazar pane k liye."


Gud one nidhi,

Yahi toh gam hai ke pyar intezaar karne se nahi milta,
Aage badh ke izhar karo, sochne se patta bhi nahi hilta.
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Meena
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«Reply #20 on: February 05, 2005, 08:35:48 AM »
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thank you dosto!!!!!!!!!

gud work creator ji and gum ji!

 :D


Thanx Meena ji,

Hum toh tere har aansso ko apne palko pe rakh lete,
Par kya karte tumne humko ista sa bhi haq na diya... :cry:


haq pochne se nahin par ehesas karne se mitla hai,
saath dene ka wada jo karte hai, bohot door kada milta hai!!!!!


Hmmm
Ehsaas e haq se hi toh kal ek bat kahi maine,
Kya mila mujhe phir bhi siva ruswaiyon ke..


well....

ruswayion me mere pyar ko pehechan na sakha,
samne kade te hum aur hume tu pehechan na sakha!
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thycreator
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«Reply #21 on: February 05, 2005, 08:40:22 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "Meena"
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Quote from: "Meena"
thank you dosto!!!!!!!!!

gud work creator ji and gum ji!

 :D


Thanx Meena ji,

Hum toh tere har aansso ko apne palko pe rakh lete,
Par kya karte tumne humko ista sa bhi haq na diya... :cry:


haq pochne se nahin par ehesas karne se mitla hai,
saath dene ka wada jo karte hai, bohot door kada milta hai!!!!!


Hmmm
Ehsaas e haq se hi toh kal ek bat kahi maine,
Kya mila mujhe phir bhi siva ruswaiyon ke..


well....

ruswayion me mere pyar ko pehechan na sakha,
samne kade te hum aur hume tu pehechan na sakha!


Hmmmm.
Tum samne the mere phir bhi toh kitne dur the,
Hath badhaya tha maine,tumne badke thama nahi.
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: February 05, 2005, 08:48:31 AM »
oh ho....

kaise tham lete haath hum tumara,
ke haath ki lakreeon me aag ke shole jalte hai,
kahi zakhm na mile tujhe humse aye dost,
ek doosre si hi tumse baat him karte hai!
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Meena
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«Reply #23 on: February 05, 2005, 08:51:42 AM »
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wah meena..

aetbaar na karna tu kisipe pyaar me
dhadakna chhod deta hai dil kisike intezaar me


Nishita ji....hum nahi mante..

Pyar mein gar aetbaar na karoge toh kya milega,
Ek duje par vishwas ka deep phir kaise jalega,
Ye bhi sach hai ki intezaar mein dard o dukh hote hai,
Bina mehboob ki aas ke ek dil bhi kaise dhadkega..


nicee!!!

kisi ke aas ke pani se yaha koi deep nahin jalta,
kisi kisi ko hi intezaar-e-meheboob hai phalta!
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thycreator
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«Reply #24 on: February 05, 2005, 08:55:39 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
oh ho....

kaise tham lete haath hum tumara,
ke haath ki lakreeon me aag ke shole jalte hai,
kahi zakhm na mile tujhe humse aye dost,
ek doosre si hi tumse baat him karte hai!


Hmmmm...

Kehte ho humko dost aur phir paraya bhi ho karte,
Tumhe kya malum tere zakhm mujhe kitna hai tadpate,
Tham lo aaj bhi haath mera, hai tumse iltza meri,
Tere zakhm bhi mere hi hai,kyu samajh nahi pate..
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thycreator
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«Reply #25 on: February 05, 2005, 08:57:20 AM »
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wah meena..

aetbaar na karna tu kisipe pyaar me
dhadakna chhod deta hai dil kisike intezaar me


Nishita ji....hum nahi mante..

Pyar mein gar aetbaar na karoge toh kya milega,
Ek duje par vishwas ka deep phir kaise jalega,
Ye bhi sach hai ki intezaar mein dard o dukh hote hai,
Bina mehboob ki aas ke ek dil bhi kaise dhadkega..


nicee!!!

kisi ke aas ke pani se yaha koi deep nahin jalta,
kisi kisi ko hi intezaar-e-meheboob hai phalta!


Hmmm,
Tumne chaha hi nahi mere sath ka ek deep jalana,
Hum aas ka pani nahi lahoo e jigar dete...
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Meena
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«Reply #26 on: February 05, 2005, 08:59:33 AM »
nicee!!!!

is dunyia me aye hai sab ko kush karne ke liye,
gam lene aur kushiyan dene ke liye,
tume kaise de  de woh cheez jise pala hai bachpan se,
zakhm koi buniyat nahin kisi se nata chodne ke liye!  :wink:
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Meena
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«Reply #27 on: February 05, 2005, 09:02:53 AM »
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nicee!!!

kisi ke aas ke pani se yaha koi deep nahin jalta,
kisi kisi ko hi intezaar-e-meheboob hai phalta!


Hmmm,
Tumne chaha hi nahi mere sath ka ek deep jalana,
Hum aas ka pani nahi lahoo e jigar dete...


well said!!!

deep jalane se roshni to milti hai,
par  umr bar hawa se dushmani bhi hoti hai!
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thycreator
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«Reply #28 on: February 05, 2005, 09:03:00 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
nicee!!!!

is dunyia me aye hai sab ko kush karne ke liye,
gam lene aur kushiyan dene ke liye,
tume kaise de  de woh cheez jise pala hai bachpan se,
zakhm koi buniyat nahin kisi se nata chodne ke liye!  :wink:


Hmmmm,
Sabko ho sab kuch dete, hame gam hi tum dedo,
Jiski tamanna tumse hai, hame sanam wo tum dedo.
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«Reply #29 on: February 05, 2005, 09:04:20 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
nicee!!!!

is dunyia me aye hai sab ko kush karne ke liye,
gam lene aur kushiyan dene ke liye,
tume kaise de  de woh cheez jise pala hai bachpan se,
zakhm koi buniyat nahin kisi se nata chodne ke liye!  :wink:



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