***Najane Ashk...***

by Meena on February 04, 2005, 03:40:15 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #30 on: February 05, 2005, 05:13:33 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "Meena"
nicee!!!!

is dunyia me aye hai sab ko kush karne ke liye,
gam lene aur kushiyan dene ke liye,
tume kaise de  de woh cheez jise pala hai bachpan se,
zakhm koi buniyat nahin kisi se nata chodne ke liye!  :wink:


Hmmmm,
Sabko ho sab kuch dete, hame gam hi tum dedo,
Jiski tamanna tumse hai, hame sanam wo tum dedo.


gum koi khairat nahin jisko tumare hawale kar doon,
yeh woh ghav hai jo jism se chipke hai,
gored kar unne kaise phir se hara kar doon?
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Meena
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«Reply #31 on: February 05, 2005, 05:14:12 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
nicee!!!!

is dunyia me aye hai sab ko kush karne ke liye,
gam lene aur kushiyan dene ke liye,
tume kaise de  de woh cheez jise pala hai bachpan se,
zakhm koi buniyat nahin kisi se nata chodne ke liye!  :wink:



wah1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1   sabhi  login  ne bahot  accha  likha........bahot  khoob...


Bas Ek Udassi Hai Dheemi Se
Bas Ek Be'dard Se Thakan Hai
Jo Zindagi Ke Adhure Pan ko
Hadon Se Agay Barha Rahi Hai..................................(nm)


wah waheed ji!

 :D
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dolly
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«Reply #32 on: February 05, 2005, 06:23:59 PM »
Nice MEENAJI...WAHEEDJI....yeh dard yeh ghaav .....iss duniya se na jaane kab jaayenge..  sad5

Meenaji i dont know meri yeh post aapke thread ke acc. hai ke nahi....bt yahin likh rahin hoon....


Kabhi apni hi hansi par  aata hai gussa…
Kabhi saare jag ko hansaane ka jee chahta hai…

Kabhi rota nahi man kisi ki maut par…
Kabhi yunhi aansoon bahane ko jee chahta hai..

Kabhi achha lagta hai aakaash mein udna,
Kabhi kisi ke bandhan mein bandh jaane ko jee chahta hai..

Kabhi saari duniya ka saath bahut bhaata hai…
Kabhi khud ko bhi bhulaane ko jee chahta hai….

kabhi maangti hoon naya jeevan..
kabhi isko hi mitaane ko jee chahta hai...(NM)
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #33 on: February 05, 2005, 06:26:48 PM »
lol
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Meena
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«Reply #34 on: February 05, 2005, 06:26:53 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Nice MEENAJI...WAHEEDJI....yeh dard yeh ghaav .....iss duniya se na jaane kab jaayenge..  sad5

Meenaji i dont know meri yeh post aapke thread ke acc. hai ke nahi....bt yahin likh rahin hoon....


Kabhi apni hi hansi par  aata hai gussa…
Kabhi saare jag ko hansaane ka jee chahta hai…

Kabhi rota nahi man kisi ki maut par…
Kabhi yunhi aansoon bahane ko jee chahta hai..

Kabhi achha lagta hai aakaash mein udna,
Kabhi kisi ke bandhan mein bandh jaane ko jee chahta hai..

Kabhi saari duniya ka saath bahut bhaata hai…
Kabhi khud ko bhi bhulaane ko jee chahta hai….

kabhi maangti hoon naya jeevan..
kabhi isko hi mitaane ko jee chahta hai...(NM)


wah dolly sis!!!!!!!!! its such a beautful poem!!!!! brillient! esp the last 2 lines!

 :D
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dolly
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«Reply #35 on: February 05, 2005, 06:45:33 PM »
yea.....i also liked it v much....thanx.....!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #36 on: February 06, 2005, 04:28:22 AM »
Wah..Bohat hi khoob likha hai aap sab ne..beautiful....

Yaad kabhi  tujhko aaye guzra huwa zamaana
Tujhko Qasam wafaa ki aansoo na tu bahaana  

Milna hi do dilon ka dar-asal hai judaai
Ulfat ke rang-o-gham se rishta hai yeh puraana

Ro ro ke keh rahe hain armaan machal machal ke
Duniya mein naam-e-ulfat ashkon ka hai khazaana

Aye bubul-e-gulistan tum yun na muskuraao
Posheeda iss khushi mein gham ka hai taraana

Ho jagah koi woh Ya_Rabb, jahan chaand ho na taarey
Na tau darr ho bijliyon ka, ghar ho na aashiyana

Apni yaaro jahan mein bas aarzoo yehi hai
Karne wafaa hain aaye, kar ke wafaa hai jaana
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #37 on: February 06, 2005, 04:31:51 AM »
good job aryaan!

Jo Saaz Se Nikli Hai, Woh Sada Sab Ne Suni Hai
Jo Saaz Pe Guzri Hai, Woh Kisi Dil Ko Khabar Hai
*nm
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Aryaan
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«Reply #38 on: February 06, 2005, 04:38:21 AM »
Thanx  myheart_ursonly....n nice one...
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thycreator
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«Reply #39 on: February 06, 2005, 09:37:57 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "Meena"
nicee!!!!

is dunyia me aye hai sab ko kush karne ke liye,
gam lene aur kushiyan dene ke liye,
tume kaise de  de woh cheez jise pala hai bachpan se,
zakhm koi buniyat nahin kisi se nata chodne ke liye!  :wink:


Hmmmm,
Sabko ho sab kuch dete, hame gam hi tum dedo,
Jiski tamanna tumse hai, hame sanam wo tum dedo.


gum koi khairat nahin jisko tumare hawale kar doon,
yeh woh ghav hai jo jism se chipke hai,
gored kar unne kaise phir se hara kar doon?


Hmmmm.......thik hai...
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thycreator
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«Reply #40 on: February 06, 2005, 10:00:08 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Nice MEENAJI...WAHEEDJI....yeh dard yeh ghaav .....iss duniya se na jaane kab jaayenge..  sad5

Meenaji i dont know meri yeh post aapke thread ke acc. hai ke nahi....bt yahin likh rahin hoon....


Kabhi apni hi hansi par  aata hai gussa…
Kabhi saare jag ko hansaane ka jee chahta hai…

Kabhi rota nahi man kisi ki maut par…
Kabhi yunhi aansoon bahane ko jee chahta hai..

Kabhi achha lagta hai aakaash mein udna,
Kabhi kisi ke bandhan mein bandh jaane ko jee chahta hai..

Kabhi saari duniya ka saath bahut bhaata hai…
Kabhi khud ko bhi bhulaane ko jee chahta hai….

kabhi maangti hoon naya jeevan..
kabhi isko hi mitaane ko jee chahta hai...(NM)


Too gud dolly ji..... tongue3
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dolly
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«Reply #41 on: February 06, 2005, 10:53:08 AM »
thanx Amitji!!!!!

 tongue3 Huh?Huh?? :?:
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dolly
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«Reply #42 on: February 06, 2005, 10:54:55 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Wah..Bohat hi khoob likha hai aap sab ne..beautiful....

Yaad kabhi  tujhko aaye guzra huwa zamaana
Tujhko Qasam wafaa ki aansoo na tu bahaana  

Milna hi do dilon ka dar-asal hai judaai
Ulfat ke rang-o-gham se rishta hai yeh puraana

Ro ro ke keh rahe hain armaan machal machal ke
Duniya mein naam-e-ulfat ashkon ka hai khazaana

Aye bubul-e-gulistan tum yun na muskuraao
Posheeda iss khushi mein gham ka hai taraana

Ho jagah koi woh Ya_Rabb, jahan chaand ho na taarey
Na tau darr ho bijliyon ka, ghar ho na aashiyana

Apni yaaro jahan mein bas aarzoo yehi hai
Karne wafaa hain aaye, kar ke wafaa hai jaana


woww!!! Bahut achha likha aapne Aryaanji..Bahut khoob!!
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dolly
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«Reply #43 on: February 06, 2005, 10:58:14 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
good job aryaan!

Jo Saaz Se Nikli Hai, Woh Sada Sab Ne Suni Hai
Jo Saaz Pe Guzri Hai, Woh Kisi Dil Ko Khabar Hai
*nm


Nice one ....Amit!!
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Meena
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«Reply #44 on: February 06, 2005, 11:05:19 AM »
very nice aryaan ji and heart!!!!!!!!

 :D
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