nakami aur barbaadi k siwa kuch na mila

by kaushikbhawna008 on June 03, 2008, 08:11:37 AM
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aaj dil se TUJHE bhul jaane ki koshish ki
haan aaj meine gam mei muskurane ki koshish ki

chala gaya hai TU hamei tanha chodkar to kya
hamne aaj kisi ka saath nibhane ki koshish ki

rutha rutha WAQT mila hamko sehra mei sare aam
aaj fir hamne waqt ko manane ki koshish ki

purnima ki raat mei jis tarah jagmagata hai CHAAND
aaj hamne b teri yaadon k saath jagmagane ki koshish ki

jis tarah mehkata hai GULSHAN bahaar k mausam mei
apni zindgi mei b hamne aaj bahaar laane ki koshish ki

TERE nakshe kadam par chalkar hamne b dekha
hamne b aaj kisi se dillagi karne ki koshish ki

hua na kuch b HASIL aur jakhm khud ko hi de bethe
jo teri tarah hamne kisi ka dil tod jaane ki koshish ki

"BHAWNA" ko nakami aur barbaadi k siwa kuch na mila
e-"KAUSHIK" jab b hamne tujhe bhul jaane ki koshish ki
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2008, 09:00:12 AM »
bhulane ki koshish aakhirkaar nakamyab hi hui.....
such hi likha hai aapne.... jise hum chahte hai wo gar bewafai bhi kare to bhi hum chah kar bhi uske saath waisa nahi kar paate..aur karen bhi to gum bhi khud hi uthate hain....aise dil bahoot pakiza hote hain..
nice poetry
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2008, 09:42:01 AM »
Very Touching..
Nicely written.. KaushikBhawna.. Applause

I had written Something before on same theme.. Have a look
Ek Koshish.. Tujhe Bhoolne ki..
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2008, 09:53:35 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 03, 2008, 09:42:01 AM
Very Touching..
Nicely written.. KaushikBhawna.. Applause

I had written Something before on same theme.. Have a look
Ek Koshish.. Tujhe Bhoolne ki..



shukriya mahiya ji and bekarar ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2008, 09:54:29 AM »
Bhawna

Very very nice ! Applause Applause Applause

nakami aur barbaadi k siwa kuch na mila ...very nice title and equally powerful contents !
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2008, 05:07:19 AM »
thnx rajbir ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2008, 07:02:53 AM »
  Very Nice  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2008, 03:35:17 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob Bhawna
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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2008, 05:02:42 PM »
Bohot Khoob Bhawna !!
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2008, 05:10:12 PM »
kaushik ji bohot achchha likha aapne.
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2008, 09:28:15 AM »
shukriya pooja ji ,ehsas ji,  celmira ji and sayyid ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2008, 12:29:17 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on June 03, 2008, 08:11:37 AM
aaj dil se TUJHE bhul jaane ki koshish ki
haan aaj meine gam mei muskurane ki koshish ki

chala gaya hai TU hamei tanha chodkar to kya
hamne aaj kisi ka saath nibhane ki koshish ki

rutha rutha WAQT mila hamko sehra mei sare aam
aaj fir hamne waqt ko manane ki koshish ki

purnima ki raat mei jis tarah jagmagata hai CHAAND
aaj hamne b teri yaadon k saath jagmagane ki koshish ki

jis tarah mehkata hai GULSHAN bahaar k mausam mei
apni zindgi mei b hamne aaj bahaar laane ki koshish ki

TERE nakshe kadam par chalkar hamne b dekha
hamne b aaj kisi se dillagi karne ki koshish ki

hua na kuch b HASIL aur jakhm khud ko hi de bethe
jo teri tarah hamne kisi ka dil tod jaane ki koshish ki

"BHAWNA" ko nakami aur barbaadi k siwa kuch na mila
e-"KAUSHIK" jab b hamne tujhe bhul jaane ki koshish ki



wah! wah! bahut khoob bhawnaji..bahut hi khoobsurat aur jazbaati poetry likhi hai aapne..bahut ache. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2008, 05:55:31 AM »
shukriya khwaish ji
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