Naraj__________Baadal:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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Kuch iss rah pe aaj hum pahoonche hai,
Ki kuch dost hum se naraz baithe hai,

Kaise batauen unhe dastaan jindgi ki,
Ki kya kya hum sah ke chup baithe hai,

Nahi the hum kabhi aise kisi ki nazar mai,
Lakin aaj hum khud mai gunehgaar bane baithe hai,

Bahut nibhaya saath jindgi mai yaaro ka,
Fir bhi laakh ilzaam hum liye baithe hai,

Luta dene ka jo jajba tha hamesha dil main,
Aaj us toofan ko sine mai dabaye baithe hai,

Kaise manauen or samjhaun yarro ko apne,
Jo hum se be-wajeh naraz hue baithe hai,

Kash padh late wo humari majboori chehre se,
Jise hum hansi ke piche chipaye baithe hai,

Kaise batauen unhe dastaan jindgi ki,
Ki kuch dost hum se naraz baithe hai...........

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2008, 01:58:01 PM »

wah kaya baat hai baadal ji, bahoot he achi kavita likhi hai apne... good work, ek ek line apne app poori tarah se apki bhawnao ko samjha rahi hai... bahoot khoob


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baadal102

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2008, 02:01:06 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 19, 2008, 01:58:01 PM

wah kaya baat hai baadal ji, bahoot he achi kavita likhi hai apne... good work, ek ek line apne app poori tarah se apki bhawnao ko samjha rahi hai... bahoot khoob

thanx a lot pooja ji,aaj bahut dino baad mujhe apni koi kavita poori hue se lagti hai,batane ki jaroorat nahi,sab samajdaar hai yanha. bahut bahut sukria pooja ji

Baadal


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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2008, 02:14:43 PM »

Nice One Baadal Ji,.


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saloni bharani

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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2008, 02:23:23 PM »

nice sharing baadal ji
but ya to bato kon sa dost naraj batha hain aap sa
saloni


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baadal102

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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2008, 02:31:51 PM »

thanx a lot J@@N ji

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Saloni ji

Baadal


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k.shael

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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2008, 06:57:25 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI,
AAPNI FEELINGS KO AACHE SE BATAYA HAI,

SHALLY.

NARAZ KOI BEWAJAH KISI APNE SE HOTA NAHI,
PYAAR HO JISE TUMSE WO U HI TUMHE CHODTA NAHI,

DUKH DE JAATI HAI KUCH MAMOOLI SI BAATEIN GEHRA
WARNA U HI KOI HASTI KHELTI DUNIYA KO APNE HI
HAATHON SE TODTA NAHI...


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2008, 07:13:57 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 20, 2008, 06:57:25 AM

BAHUT KHOOB BAALDAL JI,
AAPNI FEELINGS KO AACHE SE BATAYA HAI,

SHALLY.

NARAZ KOI BEWAJAH KISI APNE SE HOTA NAHI,
PYAAR HO JISE TUMSE WO U HI TUMHE CHODTA NAHI,

DUKH DE JAATI HAI KUCH MAMOOLI SI BAATEIN GEHRA
WARNA U HI KOI HASTI KHELTI DUNIYA KO KOI APNE
HI HAATHON SE TODTA NAHI...

Nice presentation Shally Ji


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k.shael

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2008, 07:16:12 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 20, 2008, 07:13:57 AM

Nice presentation Shally Ji

SHUKRIYA RAJESH JI,

SHALLY.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2008, 07:17:18 AM »

U R Welcome Shally Ji


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baadal102

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2008, 01:15:34 PM »

thanx shally ji


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diya786

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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2008, 01:26:34 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI
BAHUT KHOOBSURTI SE AAPNE APNE EMOTIONS KO PRESENT KIYA HAI
BAHUT SACHAI HAI ISMEIN
KAHIN NA KAHIN SE MERI ZINDAGI SE MILTI HUI
SHUKRIYA... notworthy


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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2008, 11:02:30 AM »

U Are Welcome Baadal Ji,.
And NIce One Shally Ji,.


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baadal102

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2008, 11:59:42 AM »

thanx a lot diya ji

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J@@N JI

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Re: Naraj__________Baadal

«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2008, 12:29:49 PM »

Naaraaz Humse, Kyun Hua Hai Baadal,.
Kyun Tu Mere Aangan Mein Barasta Nahi,.

Bujh Jaati Meri Pyaas, Agar Wo Aajaata,.
Main Teri Barsaat Ke Liye Yun Tarasta Nahi,.

Tu Kar Ghaman Apni, Barsaat Ki Taal Par,.
Main Kaise, Karoon, Mera To Dil Bhi Dhadakta Nahi,.

____________________________-Jaanasheen-


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