Naseeb

by apnaa_koi on April 19, 2005, 06:58:21 PM
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apnaa_koi
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Naseeb
Jisko bundth kar rakha tha iss dill ne itni gayraii_se,
Woh chute gayaa...
Kyun key uskay naseeb hi thi kissi aur key liye
Likin choord gayaa vo apne yaard satanay kayliye
Zindagee bher jalaanay kayliye
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2005, 04:41:08 PM »
Quote from: "apnaa_koi"
[you]Naseeb[/you]
Jisko bundth kar rakha tha iss dill ne itni gayraii_se,
Woh chute gayaa...
Kyun key uskay naseeb hi thi kissi aur key liye
Likin choord gayaa vo apne yaard satanay kayliye
Zindagee bher jalaanay kayliye


very  nice................apnaa_koi.........welcome  to "Yoindia"
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2005, 09:12:01 PM »
Huzoor...
 
Shukariya adaa kerthi houn...  Yeh meray avval-avval sheroun mein say hain, tu bohat acha lagaa key apko passand aye...

Vesse tu apsay seek rahe houn... apkaa lickaa kalam akser laa jawaab hotha hai... sharam se arthi hai key apnay iss naa cheez kay kalam per naraz daalii... kabhi kuch theek naa lagay yan licka ghalat ho, tu zaroor baata diyaa karo...

Apnaa_Koi
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2005, 02:52:27 AM »
u 2 kooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllll
apnaaaaaaaaaaaaaa   jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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sonia_babe
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2005, 05:49:15 AM »
nice 1 apna_koi......it's true

ki apne apne naseeb hote hai
koi mite hai hume
to kisi ko hum kote hai

wha say yaar
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2005, 12:23:16 PM »
Bohat khoob apnaa_koi.........................
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2005, 03:39:30 PM »
Aryaan, Sonia_babe, Fakharenaveed...

Shukaria aap saab kaa, acha laga tha hai key meraa licka apko pasand aya...

Apnaa_koi
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2005, 12:45:02 PM »
Well said Aapnaa Koi..

And Well said All...


Mayray Naseeb May Tu jo Nahee,
Mujhay Nazar Tu phir Kuy  Aagyee..

Mayraa Nasseb Ko Badal Day Tu, Aaya Khuda,
Mayraa Nasseb Tu Sawar day,

Mujhay Tu Uskaa payar day,
Mujhay Nazar Jo Aa Aagyee..


"

Ques....
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #8 on: April 23, 2005, 01:40:33 PM »
Ji Shukaria... Arz kerthi houn

Nazir kiya milli unsay,  khuda say baat kernay baite gay
Saajda kiye, payar ke dua maangnay biate gay

Apnaa_koi
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2005, 01:48:31 PM »
"
Magaa Tu Humnay Khudaa Say Tujhee Ko Tha..
Magar Humany Meley Badnaseeb Tu Kay Karay..

"

Ques...
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2005, 02:15:45 PM »
Kiyaa Baat Hai... achaa lagaa

Dua mein harth uthay bhi, tu janaab nay us naa cheez ko maanga
Jiss kay paas kud kuch nahi, uss ko apnaa banaa naa chahaa

Vo naa milli, yeh khush naseebii thi unke
verna zindage guzarthi badnaseebii mein unke

Apnaa_koi
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2005, 09:44:26 AM »
Well said Aapna Koi....

"
Vo naa milli, yeh khush naseebii thi unke
verna zindage guzarthi badnaseebii mein unke
"

Ques....
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pandit
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2005, 10:27:28 AM »
main ajanta hoo ki tujhe apna nahi sakta,
par baat ye bhi sach hai ki tujhe bhula nahi sakta.
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2005, 12:55:14 PM »
Shukaria Ques Ji...

Pandit Ji... Acha lagaa


Bhul Bhulaynay key baat kerthi ho
Muji apnaa nay key baat kerthi ho
Dolii jarahe hai ghar say
Ab arker dill key baat kerthi ho...

Apnaa_koi
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2005, 12:59:43 PM »
Good job everyone ...
Keep writing all of you ...


Hazaaro hamdard milte hai,
Karm ke chand milte hai,
Bura jab waqt aata hai,
Sab darwaaze bandh milte hai ......
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