Nashemann jitne banaye........

by manjum on March 03, 2011, 03:47:53 AM
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manjum
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Nashemann jitna banaye ujad dale gaye.
Khud apne hi ghar se ham nikale gaye.

Bahut Gurur hai tumko to ye sun lo,
Ek na ek din sitam karne wale gaye.

Patthar ki muraton se takra ke zakhm khaye,
Apne kadam na hamse sambhale gaye.

Aarju ke khun se dil ki kahani hai likhi,
Kisi marham se na dil ke chhale gaye.

Apne palkon main kanteto chubhne hi the,
yese sapne agar in main pale gaye.

Sakhtiyan apne dil par na "mann" kar sake,
Na uske andaz hamse dekhe bhale gaye.

manjum "mann"

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Tamnna
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2011, 05:21:46 AM »
manjum mannji very nice..... good very good.

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aap bahut hi achha likhti hain......
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manjum
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2011, 05:53:10 AM »
shukriya tamnnaji....
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 05:57:49 AM »
bht bht khoob manjum ji.....
toooooooo..... goooood......
i lyk 4th one alot...
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manjum
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 05:59:36 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya manzilji... aapne pasand kiya... shukriya..
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 06:57:04 AM »
ufff Manju aaj aapko kya ho gaya.
ek se ek khatarnaak post.
kya tareef kiya jaye bhala.
seedhe saade shabdo me--
lajawaab
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manjum
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 06:58:48 AM »
shukriya niralaji.... ye to aap sab ki tarife jo kuch likhwa letin hain warna bas ek koshish hi hai......
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 12:21:40 PM »
Bahut Khub Manjum JI
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 08:36:28 PM »
Nashemann jitna banaye ujad dale gaye.
Khud apne hi ghar se ham nikale gaye.

Bahut Gurur hai tumko to ye sun lo,
Ek na ek din sitam karne wale gaye.

Patthar ki muraton se takra ke zakhm khaye,
Apne kadam na hamse sambhale gaye.

Aarju ke khun se dil ki kahani hai likhi,
Kisi marham se na dil ke chhale gaye.

Apne palkon main kanteto chubhne hi the,
yese sapne agar in main pale gaye.

Sakhtiyan apne dil par na "mann" kar sake,
Na uske andaz hamse dekhe bhale gaye.

manjum "mann"



GUD ONE MANJUM
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manjum
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 03:32:08 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rishiji......
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manjum
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2011, 03:33:06 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khamoshji....
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2011, 07:06:07 AM »
wo gaana yaad aaya ise parhkar--pesh hai
""
apne hi girate hain nashe mann pe bijliyan--
gairon ne aakar fir bhi usse thaam liya hai--
dushman na kare dost ne wo kaam kiya hai--
umra bhar ka gham hame inaam dia hai---
""
be happy re
""
thanx
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manjum
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2011, 07:12:08 AM »
hunnn bahut acha gana hai....

gairon ne aake fir bhi ise tham lia hai....

ban kar raib baithe hain wo jo habib the.
yaron ne khub farz ko anjam diya hai....

umra bhar ka gham hame inam diya hai.....
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nirala
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2011, 07:19:52 AM »
hmm tum bhi kamaal ho.
kitni baat kaha khusi ke geet likho sunti hi nhi.
kattiiii--:(
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manjum
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2011, 07:32:48 AM »
are katti mat lijie..... acha kisi aur ka likha khushi ka geet chalega??
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