Nashemann jitne banaye........ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: March 04, 2011, 07:37:35 AM »

aacha likha he manju ji .........

actually theme behtareen rahi is post me.aur us per chuninda lafj jo kaam liye he unhone char chand laga diye......maja aa gaya ji

ese hi likhtei rahiyega........

kuch waqt pahle isi theme ki ek poetry se mukhatib hua tha uski chand lines pesh kar raha hu.....apki post ne wo yaad dila di.....

"LOG BE-MAOUT MARNE WALE HE
ASTINO ME SAAP JO PALE HE

KABHI SAJTI THI MAHFILE JAHA
AAJ US HAVELI MA JAALE HE"


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Re: Nashemann jitne banaye........

«Reply #16 on: March 04, 2011, 07:48:03 AM »

shukriya metrixji... bahut bahut shukriya... apka ki aapne itna dhayan se pada.... ek koshish ki thi bas....

aapne poetry shair ki wo bhi bahut khub hai... shukriya...


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vipul kumar

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Re: Nashemann jitne banaye........

«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2011, 10:01:29 AM »

Bahut khuub Manjum ji.
Umda khayalat hai..


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manjum

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Re: Nashemann jitne banaye........

«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2011, 10:10:05 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya vipulji.... sath rahie...


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Re: Nashemann jitne banaye........

«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2011, 10:43:18 AM »

Quote from: manjum on March 03, 2011, 03:47:53 AM

Nashemann jitna banaye ujad dale gaye.
Khud apne hi ghar se ham nikale gaye.

Bahut Gurur hai tumko to ye sun lo,
Ek na ek din sitam karne wale gaye.

Patthar ki muraton se takra ke zakhm khaye,
Apne kadam na hamse sambhale gaye.

Aarju ke khun se dil ki kahani hai likhi,
Kisi marham se na dil ke chhale gaye.

Apne palkon main kanteto chubhne hi the,
yese sapne agar in main pale gaye.

Sakhtiyan apne dil par na "mann" kar sake,
Na uske andaz hamse dekhe bhale gaye.

manjum "mann"

Waah Waah Waah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Manjum Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash!!!


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manjum

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Re: Nashemann jitne banaye........

«Reply #20 on: March 05, 2011, 10:57:55 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....


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