~Nazar Aata hai~

by pankshivam on January 27, 2009, 10:03:05 AM
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Ab har taraf jane kyun tera tassvur nazar aata hai,
Aankhe chahe jise rokna vo khwab kyun guzar jata hai...

Taqleef me dil ki dard hai toh sukun bhi paya hai,
Jane kyun dil ka ashiya teri nafrat se tutata hai aur muskan pe savar jata hai...

~Pank~
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pankshivam
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2009, 10:48:02 AM »
Wah Bohat Khoob Shivam Sahab.
Shukriya Shihab Sahab
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cara
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2009, 11:16:11 AM »
kya baat hai ..pankshivam ji.......

ab har taraf jaane kyun tera tassvur nazar aata hai,
annkhe band kar leta hun,toh khawab mein bhi nazar aata hai.

kaisa hai yeh dard tera,dil tordta bhi hai aur sakun bhi de jaata hai.
is toote dil ke asshiya mein,andhera toh hai,par roshni bhi nazar aati  hai.
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2009, 12:45:17 PM »
Bohat Khoob Pank and well supported by Shihab and Cara..... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2009, 12:48:11 PM »
NIce One, Pank Bhai,.
Majid Bhai,.
Cara Ji,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2009, 05:23:39 PM »
Dard.e.Dil Jab Bhi Badne Laga Hai To Aise Mein
Ek Umeed Ka Diya Jal Jal Ke Bujh Jaane Laga Hai.

Sadiyan Guzar Gayi Hain Yun To Tujhse Bichhde Hue
Phir Kyun Har Jagah Mujhe Tu Nazar Aane Laga Hai.


Bahoot Khoob Shihab Sahab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mehfir me bhi aaj tanhayi ka safar hai,
Raho me ujalo ki andhero ka jahar hai...

Parchayon ki tarah chalti hain uski yaaden sath mere,
Vahi yaaden aaj toh meri sham-o-sehar hain...

~Pank~
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2009, 05:32:14 PM »
Ab har taraf jane kyun tera tassvur nazar aata hai,
Aankhe chahe jise rokna vo khwab kyun guzar jata hai...

Taqleef me dil ki dard hai toh sukun bhi paya hai,
Jane kyun dil ka ashiya teri nafrat se tutata hai aur muskan pe savar jata hai...

~Pank~

Simply Good... Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2009, 05:33:35 PM »
Dard.e.Dil Jab Bhi Badne Laga Hai To Aise Mein
Ek Umeed Ka Diya Jal Jal Ke Bujh Jaane Laga Hai.

Sadiyan Guzar Gayi Hain Yun To Tujhse Bichhde Hue
Phir Kyun Har Jagah Mujhe Tu Nazar Aane Laga Hai.



Wah wah Majid brother.. bahut khoob  Applause..
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2009, 05:36:02 PM »
kya baat hai ..pankshivam ji.......

ab har taraf jaane kyun tera tassvur nazar aata hai,
annkhe band kar leta hun,toh khawab mein bhi nazar aata hai.

kaisa hai yeh dard tera,dil tordta bhi hai aur sakun bhi de jaata hai.
is toote dil ke asshiya mein,andhera toh hai,par roshni bhi nazar aati  hai.

bahut khoob Cara.. Aap toh bahut accha likhti hai..
Accha laga padkar Cara 


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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2009, 05:38:40 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Shihab Sahab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mehfir me bhi aaj tanhayi ka safar hai,
Raho me ujalo ki andhero ka jahar hai...

Parchayon ki tarah chalti hain uski yaaden sath mere,
Vahi yaaden aaj toh meri sham-o-sehar hain...

~Pank~

Applause  Applause Pank ji... bahut khoob again  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2009, 05:49:13 PM »
kya baat hai ..pankshivam ji.......

ab har taraf jaane kyun tera tassvur nazar aata hai,
annkhe band kar leta hun,toh khawab mein bhi nazar aata hai.

kaisa hai yeh dard tera,dil tordta bhi hai aur sakun bhi de jaata hai.
is toote dil ke asshiya mein,andhera toh hai,par roshni bhi nazar aati  hai.
Nice One Caraji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya

"Mere dard me tera khayal baki rahega,
Teri khamohi ka aalam bhi mera fasana kahega...

Hai seene ki halchal teri ummid me sans leti huyi,
Aaj khush hai dur hokar tu,par kal mere dard ka silsila teri aankho se bahega..."
~Pank~
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2009, 06:35:02 PM »
Bohat Khoob Pank and well supported by Shihab and Cara..... Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Ghayal SAhab
NIce One, Pank Bhai,.
Majid Bhai,.
Cara Ji,.
Shukriya Jaanasheenji
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«Reply #12 on: January 27, 2009, 06:57:40 PM »
Applause  Applause Pank ji... bahut khoob again  Thumbs UP
Shukriya Rojaji
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«Reply #13 on: January 27, 2009, 08:03:26 PM »
 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob pankshivam..

very nice lines doston... Thumbs UP
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pankshivam
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«Reply #14 on: January 27, 2009, 08:21:46 PM »
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob pankshivam..

very nice lines doston... Thumbs UP

Thanx Honeyrose ji
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