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kaat kar roz-e-qabeeh* ghar tera baba aaya
kis’se pariyon ke meri gudiya sunaaye kaise
sub'he-dum dekh ke khursheed** sa tera chehra
tere baba ne kaha din ye bhala guzrega
tune aaNkhoN meiN liye aas jab us se poochha
aaj kya shaam ko wo tere liye laayega
us ne baahoN meiN tujhe le ke kaha gudiya meri
aaj aaooNga to dikhlaaooNga khir'hkee se tujhe
ke sabhi chaaNd sitaare haiN khareede maiN ne
aur thaalee meiN falak ki haiN parose wo sabhi
in ko mat dekh tu lalchaayee huwee nazroN se
chheeN le noch le chakh le haiN sabhi tere liye
bas yahi soch ke baba tera nikla ghar se
aur badshakl zamaane meiN qadam daal diye
peeth pe parhte hukumraanoN ke chaabuk the jidhar
aur kaanoN mein jahaaN-waaloN ke tanz-o-taane
dil men ik baar to ye aaya utha de wo bhi sar
jaane kya soch ke khaamosh raha tha wo magar
din dhalaa haare hue paaoN utha kar baba
dil meiN ik bojh liye ghar ki taraf laut chala
us ko tha achchhee tarah yaad subeh ka waada
par use poora kare to bhi kare kaise bhala
ab wo kis muNh se kahe tujh se o gudiya meri
chaaNd taare sabhi mut’thee meiN teri bhar dooNga
dil meiN tere jo kisi shay ki bhi hasrat ho uthee
is se pehle tu kahe pooree use kar dooNga
tujh ko jo koh-e-garaaN*** sa hai lage baba tera
aaj darwaaze pe wo kitna thaka sa hai kharha
khel haule se tera baba pareshaaN hai bahaut
kuchh n ab maaNg ke yooN bhi wo pashemaaN**** hai bahaut
jo tu maaNgegee tera baba wo laaye kaise
chaaNd taare teri thaalee meiN bichhaaye kaise
dil ke armaan sabhi tujh pe lutaaye kaise
apni aaNkhoN meiN tere khwaab sajaaye kaise
tujh se ab nazreiN tera baba milaaye kaise
gar bahaane bhi banaaye to banaaye kaise
kaat kar roz-e-qabeeh* ghar tera baba aaya
kis’se pariyon ke meri gudiya sunaaye kaise
- ZARRAA
*roz-e-qabeeh = ugly day
**khursheed = sun
***koh-e-garaaN = heavy (big) mountain
****pashemaaN = ashamed
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2013, 10:46:40 AM » |
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Zarra saheb ,bahut khoob . aapki is nazm ne ashkrez kar diya .
Bahut dard naak andaaz mein zindagi ki masoom khwahishon aur
unki adam-takmeel ki kaifyaat ka bayaan kiya hai . Aapko is
takhleeq par tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.
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umda nazm hai.......achchha lagaa padhkar.....dili daad.
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bohut khub zarra ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2013, 01:56:38 PM » |
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AAnkhen nam ho gayeen
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Pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Nashwani ji |
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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2013, 09:50:23 PM » |
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kaat kar roz-e-qabeeh* ghar tera baba aaya
kis’se pariyon ke meri gudiya sunaaye kaise
sub'he-dum dekh ke khursheed** sa tera chehra
tere baba ne kaha din ye bhala guzrega
tune aaNkhoN meiN liye aas jab us se poochha
aaj kya shaam ko wo tere liye laayega
us ne baahoN meiN tujhe le ke kaha gudiya meri
aaj aaooNga to dikhlaaooNga khir'hkee se tujhe
ke sabhi chaaNd sitaare haiN khareede maiN ne
aur thaalee meiN falak ki haiN parose wo sabhi
in ko mat dekh tu lalchaayee huwee nazroN se
chheeN le noch le chakh le haiN sabhi tere liye
bas yahi soch ke baba tera nikla ghar se
aur badshakl zamaane meiN qadam daal diye
peeth pe parhte hukumraanoN ke chaabuk the jidhar
aur kaanoN mein jahaaN-waaloN ke tanz-o-taane
dil men ik baar to ye aaya utha de wo bhi sar
jaane kya soch ke khaamosh raha tha wo magar
din dhalaa haare hue paaoN utha kar baba
dil meiN ik bojh liye ghar ki taraf laut chala
us ko tha achchhee tarah yaad subeh ka waada
par use poora kare to bhi kare kaise bhala
ab wo kis muNh se kahe tujh se o gudiya meri
chaaNd taare sabhi mut’thee meiN teri bhar dooNga
dil meiN tere jo kisi shay ki bhi hasrat ho uthee
is se pehle tu kahe pooree use kar dooNga
tujh ko jo koh-e-garaaN*** sa hai lage baba tera
aaj darwaaze pe wo kitna thaka sa hai kharha
khel haule se tera baba pareshaaN hai bahaut
kuchh n ab maaNg ke yooN bhi wo pashemaaN**** hai bahaut
jo tu maaNgegee tera baba wo laaye kaise
chaaNd taare teri thaalee meiN bichhaaye kaise
dil ke armaan sabhi tujh pe lutaaye kaise
apni aaNkhoN meiN tere khwaab sajaaye kaise
tujh se ab nazreiN tera baba milaaye kaise
gar bahaane bhi banaaye to banaaye kaise
kaat kar roz-e-qabeeh* ghar tera baba aaya
kis’se pariyon ke meri gudiya sunaaye kaise
- ZARRAA
*roz-e-qabeeh = ugly day
**khursheed = sun
***koh-e-garaaN = heavy (big) mountain
****pashemaaN = ashamed
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2013, 12:26:26 PM » |
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Hassan sahab .... Is nazm ke ehsaasaat ko apna bannane ka aur hauslafzaayee karne ka tah e dil se lakhon baar shukriya... apki rehnumaayee se barha sahara milta hai
Zarra saheb ,bahut khoob . aapki is nazm ne ashkrez kar diya .
Bahut dard naak andaaz mein zindagi ki masoom khwahishon aur
unki adam-takmeel ki kaifyaat ka bayaan kiya hai . Aapko is
takhleeq par tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.
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on eTI community..
