nazm : ghar tera baba aaya --- zarraa

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«Reply #15 on: September 14, 2013, 05:25:51 PM »
Quote from: ufaq on September 13, 2013, 11:07:52 AM
umda nazm hai.......achchha lagaa padhkar.....dili daad.

Waqt dene ka aur pasand karne ka shukriya Ufaq ji
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«Reply #16 on: September 14, 2013, 08:19:24 PM »
Quote from: saahill on September 13, 2013, 11:16:31 AM
bohut khub zarra ji

Shukriya Sahill ji ....
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«Reply #17 on: September 14, 2013, 09:09:43 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 13, 2013, 01:56:38 PM
AAnkhen nam ho gayeen

Mehsoos karne ke liye shukriya Saini sahab
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«Reply #18 on: September 15, 2013, 02:42:36 AM »
kaat kar roz-e-qabeeh* ghar tera baba aaya
kis’se pariyon ke meri gudiya sunaaye kaise

Zarraa ji, dil ko chhune wala kalaam hai apka
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«Reply #19 on: September 15, 2013, 01:50:08 PM »
Aqsh ji .... Behad mashkoor o mamnoon hoon apne jis jazbaat se is nazm ko parha, mehsoos kiya aur pasand kiya .... Apki hauslafzaayee ka bhi behad shukrguzaar hoon

Quote from: aqsh on September 13, 2013, 02:28:16 PM
tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Kya kahoon aapki is nazm ke baare mein zarra ji.. aankhein toh nam ho gayi.. jaise jaise aage padhte gayi rongte khade ho gaye... bahut bahut dard bhari peshkash rahi.. is khoob kalaam ke liye hazaron hazaron daad..
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«Reply #20 on: September 15, 2013, 02:23:41 PM »
Quote from: mkv on September 13, 2013, 05:26:04 PM
speechless

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«Reply #21 on: September 15, 2013, 02:51:48 PM »
bahot khooooob tareef se baala  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
par Allah se dua hai ke wo is tarha ki muflisi aur pareshani se ham sab ko bachaye rakhey aameen.
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«Reply #22 on: September 15, 2013, 09:23:14 PM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 13, 2013, 09:50:23 PM
simply excellent,sir

Thank you for the kind words MB ji
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«Reply #23 on: September 15, 2013, 10:31:07 PM »
Quote from: Ram Saraswat on September 15, 2013, 02:42:36 AM
kaat kar roz-e-qabeeh* ghar tera baba aaya
kis’se pariyon ke meri gudiya sunaaye kaise

Zarraa ji, dil ko chhune wala kalaam hai apka


Saraswat ji ... Aap ka sahriday dhanyavaad ki apne is nazm ko tawajjo di aur saraahaa
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«Reply #24 on: September 16, 2013, 01:00:52 PM »
Quote from: Iqtedar on September 15, 2013, 02:51:48 PM
bahot khooooob tareef se baala  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
par Allah se dua hai ke wo is tarha ki muflisi aur pareshani se ham sab ko bachaye rakhey aameen.

Shukriya Iqtedaar sahab ... Aur aapkee dua pooree duniya ko lage .... Tah e dil se shukriya
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