nazm : raat bhar .... zarraa

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raat bhar thandi thandi hawa jo chalee
soz-e-gham se charaaghaaN ye dil ho utha
lab pe aane lagee khud-ba-khud tishnagee
koyee naghma bhi hothoN pe khulne laga
kis qadar ghaibat-e-yaar khalne lagee


(soz = burning, ghaibat = absence)



yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq
haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye
kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye
ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN
jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN
dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq


(rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate)



kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye
kis ko aawaaz deti haiN khaamoshiyaaN
kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de
kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN
nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe
kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN


(sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance)



 - ZARRAA
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2013, 11:33:41 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Zarraa ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2013, 11:35:40 PM »
yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq
haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye
kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye
ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN
jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN
dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq


(rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate)



kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye
kis ko deti hai aawaaz tanhaaiyaaN
kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de
kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN
nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe
kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN


(sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance)

wah wah wah Zarra jee
khoob bahut khoob
aahista-2..dil me utar gayee aapki ye nazm
kisi naajuk gulaab ko haathon me lene par jo ehsaas hota hai vahee feeling.
dil daad qubool karen is khoobsurat nazm par.
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2013, 01:11:20 AM »
bahut khoob , zarra saheb . khubsurat nazm likhi hai .
kai baar parhi aur har baar dil se tareef nikli .
bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2013, 01:15:21 AM »
tareef se baala, umda aur aala - waah waah waah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2013, 02:05:51 AM »
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, excellent, bahut bahut khoob Zarra jee, maza aa gaya padh kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2013, 12:07:33 PM »
beautiful waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2013, 12:34:59 PM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2013, 12:57:13 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2013, 01:42:22 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah zarra ji.. bahut hi umda nazm se nawaza hai aapne... dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh nazm.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad...likhte  rahiye..
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2013, 05:21:34 PM »
waah waah bahut bahut aur bahut khoob zarraa ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2013, 10:45:22 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2013, 11:33:41 PM
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bahut bahut khoob Zarraa ji....!!!

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Hriday ji ....
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2013, 12:00:21 AM »
Mukesh ji ... Meri khushkismati ki apko ye nazm pasand aayee aur apki nawaazish ki apne itne sneh se ise parha aur itne dil hausla afzaayee ki .... Bahaut bahaut shukriya janaab !


Quote from: mkv on August 22, 2013, 11:35:40 PM
yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq
haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye
kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye
ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN
jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN
dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq


(rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate)



kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye
kis ko deti hai aawaaz tanhaaiyaaN
kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de
kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN
nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe
kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN


(sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance)

wah wah wah Zarra jee
khoob bahut khoob
aahista-2..dil me utar gayee aapki ye nazm
kisi naajuk gulaab ko haathon me lene par jo ehsaas hota hai vahee feeling.
dil daad qubool karen is khoobsurat nazm par.
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2013, 02:08:03 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 23, 2013, 01:11:20 AM
bahut khoob , zarra saheb . khubsurat nazm likhi hai .
kai baar parhi aur har baar dil se tareef nikli .
bahut mubarak ho.

Hassan sahab ....Aadaab .... Aapne waqt diya aur is qadar hausla afzaaee ki us ka Intehaayee shukrguzaar hoon.
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«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2013, 01:15:02 PM »
Quote from: Iqtedar on August 23, 2013, 01:15:21 AM
tareef se baala, umda aur aala - waah waah waah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Apka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon Iqtedar sahab
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