nazm : raat bhar .... zarraa

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«Reply #15 on: August 24, 2013, 01:31:07 PM »
superb mind blowing WAH Wah
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«Reply #16 on: August 24, 2013, 02:13:37 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on August 23, 2013, 02:05:51 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, excellent, bahut bahut khoob Zarra jee, maza aa gaya padh kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.

Janaab Intehaayee shukrguzaar hoon aapkee qadradaanee aur zarranawaazee ka ... Daad aur rau donon ke liye ek baar phir se shukriya Iftakhar sahab
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«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2013, 02:14:41 PM »
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waah waah waah zarra jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne..EKdam dil me utar gayi apki ye rachna..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #18 on: August 24, 2013, 02:37:45 PM »
good one
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«Reply #19 on: August 24, 2013, 04:03:07 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on August 23, 2013, 12:07:33 PM
beautiful waah waah

Thank you Sir !
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«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2013, 05:00:32 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on August 23, 2013, 12:34:59 PM
bahut khoob Applause Applause

Shukriya nandbahu ji
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«Reply #21 on: August 24, 2013, 06:26:25 PM »
Quote from: zarraa on August 22, 2013, 11:04:56 PM
raat bhar thandi thandi hawa jo chalee
soz-e-gham se charaaghaaN ye dil ho utha
lab pe aane lagee khud-ba-khud tishnagee
koyee naghma bhi hothoN pe khulne laga
kis qadar ghaibat-e-yaar khalne lagee


(soz = burning, ghaibat = absence)



yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq
haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye
kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye
ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN
jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN
dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq


(rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate)



kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye
kis ko aawaaz deti haiN khaamoshiyaaN
kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de
kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN
nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe
kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN


(sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance)



 - ZARRAA

bohut bohut umda ghazal kahi hai apne ZARRA JI AAPNE
bohut khoob. ek RAU bhi.
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«Reply #22 on: August 24, 2013, 07:41:06 PM »
Quote from: prashad on August 23, 2013, 12:57:13 PM
very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you very much Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: August 24, 2013, 10:58:38 PM »
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN

wah bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: August 25, 2013, 12:19:30 AM »
Quote from: aqsh on August 23, 2013, 01:42:22 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waaaaaaaah zarra ji.. bahut hi umda nazm se nawaza hai aapne... dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh nazm.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad...likhte  rahiye..

Aqsh ji ... Is nazm ko waqt dene ka aur use mehsoos karne ke liye apka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #25 on: August 25, 2013, 02:13:09 AM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 23, 2013, 05:21:34 PM
waah waah bahut bahut aur bahut khoob zarraa ji.. Usual Smile

Applause Applause Applause Applause


Touhid ji ... Nawazish apki ... Bahaut bahaut shukriya dost !
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«Reply #26 on: August 25, 2013, 11:03:48 AM »
Quote from: saahill on August 24, 2013, 01:31:07 PM
superb mind blowing WAH Wah

Thank you very much Saahill ji ...
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«Reply #27 on: August 25, 2013, 12:20:39 PM »
Quote from: nashwani on August 24, 2013, 02:14:41 PM
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waah waah waah zarra jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne..EKdam dil me utar gayi apki ye rachna..dhero daad..happy9

Nashwani ji .... is nazm ko tawajjo dene ka aur mehsoos karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya
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«Reply #28 on: August 25, 2013, 01:33:19 PM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 24, 2013, 02:37:45 PM
good one

Thank you !
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«Reply #29 on: August 25, 2013, 03:43:29 PM »
waah! bahut umda! daad!
Zarra ji mujhe aap ki ye cheez achi lagti hai ki aap aur sitespar bhi isi naam se rahte hain!
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