new member vs mature member of yoindia:Shayri-E-Dard

niraj_191

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This one is for new members vs mature member of yoindia!!!!!!!
this is not the creation as i actully thought but it's 70% of that thought.

khayee thee jisne pyar main taza taza thokar
usne apne dil ko yoindia main khol kar rakh diya

guzarta tha jo galion se yar ki apni
use aapne yaha ka rasta bata diya

aata nahi tha jise apna hal-e-dil jatana
usko yoindia me aap ne likhna sikha diya

shayri ki uski kuch is tarah se dad(praise) di aapne
kafir ke seene main firse sola jala diya

kal tak jo aashiq ke nam se mashoor tha apni galion me
aaj yoindia ne duniya me use shayar ka khitab de diya

Plz Dont be surprised after reading this...

i think u can understand this as i!!!!!
read it again.


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Pooja

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new member vs mature member of yoindia

«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2006, 04:43:52 PM »

BAHOOT KHOOB NIRAJ JI!!!

Jo beeti hai app per wo hi to hua bahooto ka haal hai
is Yoindia ne banai hai kuch pahchan, warna ajnabi sa naam hai

khushi ho ya ho gum, yoindia her haal mai sath hai
nahi koi chehra yahan, sirf niks ka hi sath hai

na hai koi chal, na hi kapat kisi ke man mai
bahoot hi sucha, payara, yahan her insaan hai....


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niraj_191

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new member vs mature member of yoindia

«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2006, 06:05:32 AM »

nice reply again as usual!!!

han main janta hoon maine yoindia main niks likha hai
par aapki batein sunkar hi to maine risk liya hai


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2006, 06:08:50 AM »

Wow niraj ji bahut accha likha aapne.......and Pooja ji bahut accha reply kia........sach mein east or west our yoindia is the Best........!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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niraj_191

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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2006, 06:10:44 AM »

thanks b_s par aap bhi kuch likh dete to acha hota!!!


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new member vs mature member of yoindia

«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2006, 07:10:44 AM »

Wowowoowwow bohat hia cha likha hai niraj ji and pooja ji,mindblowing :D .


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Pooja

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new member vs mature member of yoindia

«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2006, 08:26:12 AM »

thanks nidhi, BS JI and Niraj!!!


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tushar_4u_im

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new member vs mature member of yoindia

«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2006, 08:32:32 AM »

aaj aarman hai mere chot khai hue.......
hai mausam me gam e mohabaat k badal chal hue......
wo naraz hai humse is kadar k dekh ker bhi hume andekha ker diya ...
hum aab tak hai unko aapna banai hue........


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