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by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 22, 2011, 03:03:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 23, 2011, 12:29:37 PM »
Wowwwwwwww   kya baat he anamika ji…..ek ke baad ek jabardast post………..mindblowing ji……bht bht umda peshkash…………….well apki ye post padkar na chahte huey bhi kuch zkham hare ho gaye he……..ye jo shabd he “me samjta / samajti  hu”  “muje ehsaas he”…..me feel karta / karti hu ………..sach kahu to ye khokhle he ………ho sakta he sirf mere liye khokhle ho………sirf naam ke he ye shabd……”filmi lines” ….muje is mamle me shayad nirasha hi mili……..well isi ko shaayd zindagi kahte he ……..kadwa he but sach he……..apki is post ne sach kahta hu gujra kal yaad dila diya………..aur usi me jakar jane kya kya lkih diya he……..jo bhi he apke samne pesh he

Sapno ko tute to hua ek arsa
Ab Shayad Bikharne Ka Waqt Aya He

Samajti Ho Tum Hume,  Esa Hum Bhi Sochte The
Magar Waqt Ne Kuch Aur Hi Dikhaya He

Mumkin He Ki Mere Ehsaaso  Ki Koi Kimat Nahi
Magar Muje To Teri Samajne Ki Baat Ne Bas Rulaya Hi Rulaya He

Shayad Ye Bhi Mumkin He
Mere Ehsaas Ko Samaj Kar Bhi Tune Najar Ko Gumaya He

Mera  Aur Mere Ehsaao Ka Koi Wajud Nahi
Muje To Waqt Ne Ye ayina Hi Dikhaya He

Kambhat Hume To Ehsasoo Ne Bas Rulaya Hi Rulaya He

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«Reply #16 on: January 23, 2011, 12:45:11 PM »
 tearyeyed................ tearyeyed
 
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«Reply #17 on: January 23, 2011, 12:57:11 PM »
kamaal hai aapka post aur dhamaal hai---Matrix ji ka reply.
bahut hi alag sa ehsaas dilata hai aapka ye post--
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«Reply #18 on: January 23, 2011, 01:29:38 PM »
thx ji KB ji.........apko pasand aya aur kya chahiye ji.........

tearyeyed................ tearyeyed
 

ye kya anamika ji....meri story sun ke itna sady nahi hona ji........

wese bhi rone se hota kya he

me itna roya but halat aaj bhi wahi he.........so be happy and enjoy.ji.once again congrats for ur post...
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«Reply #19 on: January 23, 2011, 01:38:22 PM »
pata nahi bhai aaplog RO kaise lere ho??
ek mai hun patthardil ke kabhi aansu hi nahi aate.
bas kabhi kabhar tadap uthta hu pr aaj tak ro nhi paya.
sikhao na mujhe bhi rona dhona--rone se dil halka hota hai aisa suna hai mene
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«Reply #20 on: January 23, 2011, 04:59:35 PM »
Kasak ji is kavita ka har lafz merri zindgi k hisse se juda hai...bahut khoob ji...shukriya ise likhne kaa..
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«Reply #21 on: January 25, 2011, 01:22:30 AM »
Sahi salaah hai......jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee icon_flower

thx ji KB ji.........apko pasand aya aur kya chahiye ji.........

ye kya anamika ji....meri story sun ke itna sady nahi hona ji........

wese bhi rone se hota kya he

me itna roya but halat aaj bhi wahi he.........so be happy and enjoy.ji.once again congrats for ur post...
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«Reply #22 on: January 25, 2011, 03:07:06 AM »
dil ko chhuute ehsaas ... bahut khoob likhi hai nazm .. Kasak Ji !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhti rahen aur aati rahen aage bhi ...

khush rahen ...
duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #23 on: January 25, 2011, 03:36:09 AM »
bahut sundar kasak....

bahut badiya...
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«Reply #24 on: January 25, 2011, 05:02:03 AM »
very nice anu ji bohut hi dil ko cchoone wali baat kahi hai aapne very  nice
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