Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

by Aryaan on February 08, 2005, 03:14:02 AM

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Aryaan

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Oh aasmaan waale zameen par utar ke dekh
Hoti hai kya judaai keh tu bhi bichar ke dekh

Tu bhi tau dekh duniya mein dardon ka silsila
Gham ki tarap se Rabb mere tu bhi tau tilmila

Pathar ko pooj pooj kar hum ne khuda kiya
Par tu ne mere yaar ko mujh se juda kiya

Teri hi neymatein hain, husn, ishQ aur wafaa
Kis baat ki mili hai mere dil ko phir sazaa

Tu bhi jahan mein aaye, kare tu kisi se pyar
Mehboob ko pukaar ke roye tu zaar zaar..


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Delicate_Doll

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2005, 10:22:16 AM »

nice n gr8888888 aryaan Usual Smile


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Talat

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2005, 10:23:23 AM »

Very Nice Aryaan happy9


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dhadkan

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2005, 10:28:24 AM »

Aryaan Just Fantastic......


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diva

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2005, 11:59:46 AM »

nice one aryaan


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Amanush...

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2005, 09:24:27 PM »

Fantastic...

Amanush...

Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2005, 09:27:36 PM »

WAH !!!! BAHOOT KHOOB ARYAN!!

JUDAI KA RANG JO KHUDA DEKH LE
KASAM SE HER RANG KO WO MILAN MAI BADAL DE
PHIR SOCHTA HAI MILAN KE LIYE JUDAI HAI JAROORI
HANS KE KAHTA HAI WO, MILAN SE PAHLE JUDAI DEKH LE!!!!!


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Aryaan

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2005, 11:20:28 PM »

Salma, Talat, Dhardkan, Diva, Amanush
& Pooja.. Nice aur Great tau aap sab hain jo itna pyar aur itni mohabbat detey hain.. aur pyar ke do bol jahan mil jayein, wahan baar baar aaane ko dil karta hai.....Aap sabka behah shukriya.... Usual Smile

Bohat khoob Pooja....


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jalpari

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2005, 01:50:05 PM »

Excellent Aryaan..... bohat ache!


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Aryaan

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2005, 04:03:04 PM »

Thanx Jalpari..... Usual Smile


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Meena

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Re: Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2005, 04:42:38 PM »

Quote from: "Aryaan"

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very very touching! as always aryaan ji aap bohot acha likhte hai!

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Aryaan

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2005, 07:15:53 PM »

Bohat shukriya Meena..... Usual Smile


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sanya310

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2005, 08:47:16 PM »

wah khoob kaha aryaan!! one of ur best unz!


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Aryaan

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2005, 02:13:08 AM »

Thank you Sanya...... Usual Smile


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Aryaan

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Oh Aasmaan Waale Zameen Par Utar Ke Dekh...

«Reply #14 on: February 12, 2005, 08:04:50 PM »

Bheeg jaati hain jo palkein meri tanhaai mein
Kaanp uthta hoon mera dard koi jaan na le
Yeh bhi darta hoon keh aise mein achanak koi
Meri aankhon mein tujhe dekh ke pechaan na le