paas dil thaa jo haaRaa gaYaa,...................

by laaiba on January 20, 2013, 06:02:04 PM
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ish.q mein yun bhi maraa gayaa,
dar.d  dil mein utaaraa  gayaa,

hij.r  kaa  de k gham, yun mujhe,
phir binaa mou.t maaraa  gayaa,

uss  pe qurbaa.n  kartey to kia,
paa.s  dil thaa jo haaraa gayaa,

chal diyee  chod kar woh  mujhe
hum se yeh bhee sahaaraa gayaa,

raa.t  aankhon mein kat hee gayee,
ujda din bhi to saaraa gayaa,

laaiba ali
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 12:51:06 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 01:49:41 AM »
bahut sunder
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 06:38:16 AM »
Wow kyaa saandaar likhaa hai aapne bahnaa.
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 09:06:25 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 09:12:29 AM »
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!


YeH usi bher aur kafiye meiN kahi gayi kalaam hai naa...
bahut khoob jee.. Mera to zahen hi suNd ho gaya tha dusre
kafiye soNchte soNchte.. Usual Smile

Achchi gazal kahi hai jee daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Aise hi khoob kalaam kahte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2013, 11:23:57 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob Laaiba ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2013, 11:41:49 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on January 20, 2013, 06:02:04 PM
 
ish.q mein yun bhi maraa gayaa,
dar.d  dil mein utaaraa  gayaa,

hij.r  kaa  de k gham, yun mujhe,
phir binaa mou.t maaraa  gayaa,

uss  pe qurbaa.n  kartey to kia,
paa.s  dil thaa jo haaraa gayaa,

chal diyee  chod kar woh  mujhe
hum se yeh bhee sahaaraa gayaa,

raa.t  aankhon mein kat hee gayee,
ujda din bhi to saaraa gayaa,

laaiba ali

bahut khoob....!
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2013, 10:36:33 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on January 21, 2013, 12:51:06 AM
bahut khoob
bohat shukria,............
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2013, 10:39:27 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on January 21, 2013, 01:49:41 AM
bahut sunder
bohat bohat bohat shukria,...............
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2013, 10:40:01 AM »
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 21, 2013, 06:38:16 AM
Wow kyaa saandaar likhaa hai aapne bahnaa.
bohat shukria bhayia aapkaa,............
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2013, 09:56:23 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2013, 09:12:29 AM
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!


YeH usi bher aur kafiye meiN kahi gayi kalaam hai naa...
bahut khoob jee.. Mera to zahen hi suNd ho gaya tha dusre
kafiye soNchte soNchte.. Usual Smile

Achchi gazal kahi hai jee daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Aise hi khoob kalaam kahte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa parwaz ji ,........ ji nahin yeh our beher di thi sir ne Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2013, 01:54:38 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 21, 2013, 11:23:57 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob Laaiba ji....!!!
bohat shukria aapkaa,...........
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2013, 02:10:10 PM »
wah wah bahut khoob likha hai aapne laaiba jee. bahut si daad
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2013, 08:14:03 PM »
shukria aapkaa suman,............
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