Paas Hai Tu Phr Bhi Door kyu Lagta Hai.............

by Nikhaar on September 07, 2009, 04:32:28 PM
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Tu door hokar bhi paas tha,phr aaj kyu paas hokar bhi door lagta hai
Tere bin khubsurat zindagi ka khwaab bikhra sa lagta hai

Kal jo hua usse bhul ja,kar le thoda sa vishwaas mujh par
Baichain dil mera tera bina yaha-waha bhatakta hai

Kya tab hoga vishwaas tujhe,jab dil cheer kar apna dikhau tujhe
Aaj bhi dard ka wo aansu aankh se meri chalakta hai

Gar jaanega gaur se to tu bhi yahi dekh paayenga
Jha se shuru hota hai tera astitav,waha astitav mera dhool pakadta hai

Haan ye sach hai kal tak aehsaas na tha mujhe inn baaton ka
Juda hokar tujhse jaana maine,dil aaj bhi tujhe dekhne ko tarasta hai

Kyu hai khafaa mujhse tu,itna to bta de dilbar
Khamoshiyon ko sun kar teri,dil mera aahein bharta hai

Gar ki koi khataa maine.maafi ki abhilaashi hu
Baar baar yahi kehti hai 'Pooja'na kar shak meri baaton par
Dil aaj bhi tujhse hi pyaar karta hai....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2009, 05:02:13 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja.. Its really very touchy.. Bahoot Khoob Yaar.

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2009, 11:39:48 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nikhaar ji really touching and mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2009, 01:59:28 PM »
Wah wah Kya Baat Hai Pooja.. Dil ke Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Dhaala hai.. Dil Ka Dard Kaagaz Par Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. Padh kar Aisa laga Jaise Yeh Dard Waqai ek such Ho.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2009, 02:09:03 PM »

Tu door hokar bhi paas tha,phr aaj kyu paas hokar bhi door lagta hai
Tere bin khubsurat zindagi ka khwaab bikhra sa lagta hai

Kal jo hua usse bhul ja,kar le thoda sa vishwaas mujh par
Baichain dil mera tera bina yaha-waha bhatakta hai

Kya tab hoga vishwaas tujhe,jab dil cheer kar apna dikhau tujhe
Aaj bhi dard ka wo aansu aankh se meri chalakta hai

Gar jaanega gaur se to tu bhi yahi dekh paayenga
Jha se shuru hota hai tera astitav,waha astitav mera dhool pakadta hai

Haan ye sach hai kal tak aehsaas na tha mujhe inn baaton ka
Juda hokar tujhse jaana maine,dil aaj bhi tujhe dekhne ko tarasta hai

Kyu hai khafaa mujhse tu,itna to bta de dilbar
Khamoshiyon ko sun kar teri,dil mera aahein bharta hai

Gar ki koi khataa maine.maafi ki abhilaashi hu
Baar baar yahi kehti hai 'Pooja'na kar shak meri baaton par
Dil aaj bhi tujhse hi pyaar karta hai....


Wonderful  Applause Applause Bahut bahut khoob dear Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2009, 02:12:44 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Pooja ....Very nice work indeed !
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2009, 06:00:52 AM »

Tu door hokar bhi paas tha,phr aaj kyu paas hokar bhi door lagta hai
Tere bin khubsurat zindagi ka khwaab bikhra sa lagta hai

Kal jo hua usse bhul ja,kar le thoda sa vishwaas mujh par
Baichain dil mera tera bina yaha-waha bhatakta hai

Kya tab hoga vishwaas tujhe,jab dil cheer kar apna dikhau tujhe
Aaj bhi dard ka wo aansu aankh se meri chalakta hai

Gar jaanega gaur se to tu bhi yahi dekh paayenga
Jha se shuru hota hai tera astitav,waha astitav mera dhool pakadta hai

Haan ye sach hai kal tak aehsaas na tha mujhe inn baaton ka
Juda hokar tujhse jaana maine,dil aaj bhi tujhe dekhne ko tarasta hai

Kyu hai khafaa mujhse tu,itna to bta de dilbar
Khamoshiyon ko sun kar teri,dil mera aahein bharta hai

Gar ki koi khataa maine.maafi ki abhilaashi hu
Baar baar yahi kehti hai 'Pooja'na kar shak meri baaton par
Dil aaj bhi tujhse hi pyaar karta hai....


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Pooja..

Har Lafz Mein Dard Chipa Hai..

Bahut Gehre Aur Dil ko Chu Jaane Wale baatein kahin Hai Aapne Iss Nazm mein,

Bahut Khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2009, 05:35:10 PM »
bahut bahut bahut shukriya...
Sophi ji 
Roja ji
madhu ji
Mann ji
Celmira ji
Khwaish ji.......
Aap sabka teh dil se shukriya jo aapne iss thread ko apna waqt diya....
Bahut bahut khushi hui Usual Smile Usual Smile.....aise hi saath dete rahiyega...
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2009, 06:01:29 PM »
aapnae bahut accha likha hai nikhaar ji ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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poppoetry
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2009, 07:02:02 AM »
Shukriya Komal ji Usual Smile
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Shayaries_King
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2009, 07:31:03 AM »
Shukriya Tarif K Liye
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2009, 07:56:19 AM »
bahut achche pooja ji bahut achche
dard maloom deta hai khoob likh ahai


kabhi tere bina ,kabhi tere saath,laga mujhe tanhaayi hai aas paas
mohabbat kii na jaane yeh kaisi kasak hai,kii tu door hai phir bhi hai paas
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2009, 08:44:28 AM »
bahut achche pooja ji bahut achche
dard maloom deta hai khoob likh ahai


kabhi tere bina ,kabhi tere saath,laga mujhe tanhaayi hai aas paas
mohabbat kii na jaane yeh kaisi kasak hai,kii tu door hai phir bhi hai paas
khoob likha aapne saahil ji, Applause Applause


Paas aakar jo door rehna hai tune
Toh khush hu mai jo door rehkar hi tu mere paas rahe

Gar aehsaas nahi mohabbat k lafjon main
Toh khush hu mai jo tu mujhse wo lafj na kahe
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2009, 08:46:39 AM »
Shukriya Tarif K Liye
DOH :doh:shayad aapne ye post galti se yha kar diya SK ji
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cara
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2009, 11:36:01 AM »

Tu door hokar bhi paas tha,phr aaj kyu paas hokar bhi door lagta hai
Tere bin khubsurat zindagi ka khwaab bikhra sa lagta hai

Kal jo hua usse bhul ja,kar le thoda sa vishwaas mujh par
Baichain dil mera tera bina yaha-waha bhatakta hai

Kya tab hoga vishwaas tujhe,jab dil cheer kar apna dikhau tujhe
Aaj bhi dard ka wo aansu aankh se meri chalakta hai

Gar jaanega gaur se to tu bhi yahi dekh paayenga
Jha se shuru hota hai tera astitav,waha astitav mera dhool pakadta hai

Haan ye sach hai kal tak aehsaas na tha mujhe inn baaton ka
Juda hokar tujhse jaana maine,dil aaj bhi tujhe dekhne ko tarasta hai

Kyu hai khafaa mujhse tu,itna to bta de dilbar
Khamoshiyon ko sun kar teri,dil mera aahein bharta hai

Gar ki koi khataa maine.maafi ki abhilaashi hu
Baar baar yahi kehti hai 'Pooja'na kar shak meri baaton par
Dil aaj bhi tujhse hi pyaar karta hai....

KYA BAAT  HAI NIKHAAR JI........

TUM DOOR RAHEKAR BHI MERE PAAS THEY,
KYUN KI TUM MERE KHAAS THEY.

AAJ PASS RAHEKAR BHI MUJHSE DOOR HAI,
KYUN KI TOUT CHUKA HAI,JO DONO MEIN VISHWAAS THEY.

NA JAANE KYA GALTI HOGAYI HAI MUJHSE,
KI JAB MILE,TUM BAHUT HI NARAAZ THEY.

LAGTA HAI KISI NE MERE KHILAAF KAAN BAR DIYE HAI USKE,
KAHE DIYA HAI TERE PEET PICHE,MERE KOI AUR YAAR THEY.

AB KAISE YAKIN DILAAOUN USEY,
JO MEIN KHWAAB DEKHE THEY,WO TERE HI THEY.

RO RO KAR KAHETI HAI "POOJA" MAT KAR SHAK,YAKIN KAR MERI BAATON PAR,
AAJ BHI MERI DHARKANO MEIN TERI HI AAWAAZ HAI, EK BAR AAKAR SUN TO LEY.










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