PAGLI

by bekarar on August 26, 2008, 04:14:41 AM
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pagliyon ka shareer unka khud ka nahi hota,
kahte hain unka mastishk nahi hota,
isliye unki hansi ka mat-lab,
jaroori nahi hansi ho,
unke rone ka matlab bhi jaroori nahi,
ve ro rahi hon,
pagliyan azeeb jeev hoti hai,
wo auraton ki bhanti prateet hoti hain,
lekin unme aurat jati sa virodh nahi hota,
unhe akele paakar un par,
siyar ki tarah jhapta ja sakta hai,
wah thoda chilla sakti hai lekin,
wah dhawni "bachao-bachao" ki nahi hoti,
matr unme mastishk hi nahi hota,
shesh poora shareer auratpan se bhara hota hai
unme bhi garbhashay hota hai,
lekin wah bhi mada janwar ki tarah
bachchon ke pita ko bhul jaati hai
wah bhi auraton ki tarah hi
nou mahine navjaat ko garbh me paalti hai
in nou mahino ke douran
unme matratatv bhav jaag hi jaata hai
apne paida hue bachche ke liye
maine ek pagli ko dekha hai apne bachche ko
chaati se chipkaaye hue

ANIL JOSHI
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2008, 05:54:55 AM »
Waah... Bahut bahut bahut khoob.. Applause

Bahut sanjeev si kavita le kar aaye hai aap Sanjeev ji.. Usual Smile
Sach hai, Dard hai, aur Kataash bhi hai... Bahut umda peshkash..  Applause

Hum sab tak isko pahunchaane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya... notworthy
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2008, 06:06:34 AM »
shukriya shikha ji....ye kavita waise sachchai se prerit hai....anil joshi ji ki ye kavita "kadambini" me prkashit hui thi ...
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2008, 06:15:22 AM »
VERY NICE SHARING BEKARAR
BROTHER,
KEEP SHARING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2008, 08:18:38 AM »
ALFAZ NAHI MIL RAHE IT WAS BEAUTIFUL
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2008, 09:36:02 AM »
VERY NICE SHARING BEKARAR
BROTHER,
KEEP SHARING...
BY. K.SHAEL

shukriya shally
tumhe pasand aya.....

ALFAZ NAHI MIL RAHE IT WAS BEAUTIFUL

shukriya sajid ji....
mujhe bhi ye kavita bahoot pasand aayi aur man hua ki ise aap logon se share karun
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2008, 10:20:05 AM »
Wah nice sharing sanjeev jiju mujhe alfaaz nahi mil rahe
jaise ke lag raha hai ki kavita nahi kuch sach ho raha hai
mere samne simply superb sharing ji!! g88 

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2008, 01:38:21 PM »
Bekarar bhaya,
Aap ka yeh peedha bhara upahaar buhat hi hrday ko bhaavuk kar kar gaya, satya se sampuran prastuti ne man ko vyaakul kar diya.
Wah. -
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2008, 03:17:24 PM »
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bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!!! bahoot he achi kavita apne hum sab ko padne ke liye di!! dil se shukaria!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2008, 03:38:03 PM »
Wah nice sharing sanjeev jiju mujhe alfaaz nahi mil rahe
jaise ke lag raha hai ki kavita nahi kuch sach ho raha hai
mere samne simply superb sharing ji!! g88 

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maine pahle hi likha hai ye kavita sach se hi prerit hai.....to aapko sach lagna hi tha...bahoot bahoot shukriya aapne pasand kiya....

Bekarar bhaya,
Aap ka yeh peedha bhara upahaar buhat hi hrday ko bhaavuk kar kar gaya, satya se sampuran prastuti ne man ko vyaakul kar diya.
Wah. -

bas ise sanvedansheel logon se bantne ki ichcha thi aapka comment padh-kar laga ki ye uddeshy poora hua

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bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!!! bahoot he achi kavita apne hum sab ko padne ke liye di!! dil se shukaria!!

ek sachchai aap tak pahunchani thi aur ek dard bantna tha...mera kaam ho gaya..aapne is dard ko samjha..
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 04:17:51 AM »
Bhai sanjeev yah kavita Maine Teen Martabaa Padhi Fir bhi Kuch Samaz Me Na aaya
Paheli baar aisa hua Hai..
Aur
kuch PanktiyaaoN Se Thoda sa Samaz Saka jisme Sachchaee Nazar aayee
Fir bhi aap ne sharing kiya hoga to wo bahdiya Hi Hoga
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 05:59:00 AM »
bhai raza,
aapki saafgoi ke hum kayal hain...isliye is kavita ke arth ko samjhane ki koshish kar raha hun......

ye kavita ek pagal aurat ya ladki par likhi gai hai....jisme dimag to nahi hai...par badan auraton jaisa hai...aur us pagal aurat ko bhi agar wo aakele me mil jaye to samaj me sabhyta ka natak kar rahe hawas ke bhookhe bhediye uski asmat se khelne se nahi chukte.....
lekin us pagal ko to pata bhi nahi chalta ki uski asmat se khela ja raha hai....fir wo maa bhi banti hai...aur saare pagalpan ke bawjood usme mamta jaag hi jaati hai..kyunki maine dekha hai ek pagli ko apne bachche ko chaati se chipkaye hue.
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2008, 06:18:58 AM »
Bahut badiya sharing ki hai aapne sanjeev bhaiya... with good explanation. Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2008, 08:36:00 AM »
Shukriya Bhai
Dar-asl Main Ek Hi Lafz se Confuse Ho gaya Tha " Pagli "
Fir Kuch Shabd Bhi paheli bar padhne me aaye
Aur aapne Explanation Diya To Maine Fir Se Padhi Yeh Kavita
Isme " Pagli " Aur " Mamta " Lafz B'khoobi Dil ko sahih Maano Me Khinch Lete hai
Qa'ma Haqq hoo " La-Jawaab "
Sharing
Bhai

 
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2008, 08:55:06 AM »
Bahut badiya sharing ki hai aapne sanjeev bhaiya... with good explanation. Applause



shukriya roja.....

Shukriya Bhai
Dar-asl Main Ek Hi Lafz se Confuse Ho gaya Tha " Pagli "
Fir Kuch Shabd Bhi paheli bar padhne me aaye
Aur aapne Explanation Diya To Maine Fir Se Padhi Yeh Kavita
Isme " Pagli " Aur " Mamta " Lafz B'khoobi Dil ko sahih Maano Me Khinch Lete hai
Qa'ma Haqq hoo " La-Jawaab "
Sharing
Bhai

 


chalo mujhe tassali ho gai ki ye baat aap tak pahunch gai....kai baar ROMAN english me confusion ho jaata hai....shukriya raza bhai
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