palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai

by sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:29:56 PM
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Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.

Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.

Kaisaa naadaaN hai zaraa dekho to usko logoN,
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.

kabhi koi nahi rishtaa meraa usse rehtaa,
Kabhii ik pal me wo Mahboob banaa detaa hai.

BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2013, 11:40:13 PM »
bahut khoob ji....acha likha hai apne Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2013, 11:43:55 PM »
ek RAU ke saath dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2013, 11:44:13 PM »
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 10, 2013, 11:44:31 PM »
Bahut khoob , bahut achhi, manjhe hue shayer jaisi ghazal hai . bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #5 on: October 10, 2013, 11:58:50 PM »
wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne...

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«Reply #6 on: October 10, 2013, 11:59:55 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2013, 12:14:57 AM »
Quote from: sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:29:56 PM

Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.

kyakhoob sidraa ,

Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.

Kaisaa naadaaN hai zaraa dekho to usko logoN,
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.

Usual Smile achaa kia khoob

kabhi koi nahi rishtaa meraa usse rehtaa,
Kabhii ik pal me wo Mahboob banaa detaa hai.

bohat khoob,..

BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai

bohat khoob..!!
bohat c daad ,..................
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2013, 12:30:03 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2013, 12:44:24 AM »
Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.

Waah waah kya khoob likha hai
Sidra sahiba apne .
Pura kalaam lajawaab raha .
Mubarakbaad .

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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2013, 12:54:15 AM »
Quote from: sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:29:56 PM
Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai. Wah wah kya  masoomiyat hai bahut khoob

Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai. zara kaccha hai..abhi pyar ke is khel men...javaab naheen..daad

Kaisaa naadaaN hai zaraa dekho to usko logoN,
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai. accha hai

kabhi koi nahi rishtaa meraa usse rehtaa,
Kabhii ik pal me wo Mahboob banaa detaa hai. bahut badhiya

BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!bahut khoobsurat maqta hai mohtarma
alfaz ki jaadugari
bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur daad
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«Reply #11 on: October 11, 2013, 01:47:58 AM »

Sidra Sahibaa Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN aur khoobsurat khayaaloN ke ...

Wallah behad umdaa ashaar kahe haiN aapne, sabhi ashaar behad khoobsurat rahe jee... Is umdaa aur laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2013, 01:48:26 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut umda likha hai sidra jee..

Sabhi aashar ek se badhkar ek..

laajawab kalaam rahi..

Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2013, 02:34:01 AM »
lajawaaab, bahot khoooob...
BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2013, 02:35:50 AM »
Quote from: sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:29:56 PM
Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.
khull kar uss se kyon nahin baat karti ki aisa wo kyon kar raha hai. kya majboori hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.
haan tum uske beghair jeena nahin chaahti hogi per wo tum se door to hai per tumhein marta hua nahin dekh sakta wo tum se dil se pyaar karta hai tumharaa khairkhwaah hai main aisa sochti hoon Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kaisaa naadaaN hai zaraa dekho to usko logoN,
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.
tumhaare afsaane ka aakir hero bhi to wahi hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kabhi koi nahi rishtaa meraa usse rehtaa,
Kabhii ik pal me wo Mahboob banaa detaa hai.
mohabbat mein ye kheench-taan to rahti hi hai iske bina shayad ishq ka maza nahin Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!

ab her pal 24 ghante to saath nahin rahe ga aur bhi kaam hain zindagi mein mohabbat ke siwa. isilye jab wo nazro.n se ojhal ho jaaye to tum bewajah pareshaan na hua karo. mohaabat understanding ka bhi naam hai ek doosre ko individually space bhi dena chaahiye .tumhaare wo jo hain unke iss harkat ko sazza mat samjho Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!ek rau to banta hi hai

aur haan sidra mere comments tumhaare sher ko hain tumhein nahin hain. dil pe mat lena jab bhi mujhe behter kaam milta hai jo dil se pasand aaye main comments karti hoon. aur agar tumhein pasand na ho to mujhe bejhijhak mana kar dena .
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