palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai

by sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:29:56 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 11, 2013, 03:16:03 AM »
Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.

Kaisaa naadaaN hai zaraa dekho to usko logoN,
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.
          Waah-Waah,!!
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«Reply #16 on: October 11, 2013, 04:13:12 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah ji waah, kyaa kehne sarkaar, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Sidra ji....!!!
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«Reply #17 on: October 11, 2013, 09:13:58 AM »
wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: October 11, 2013, 05:22:21 PM »
Quote from: ahilya on October 10, 2013, 11:40:13 PM
bahut khoob ji....acha likha hai apne Usual Smile

aapka bahot shukriyaa ahilya ji.. aati rahiyegaa
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«Reply #19 on: October 11, 2013, 05:23:32 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on October 10, 2013, 11:43:55 PM
ek RAU ke saath dheron daad aur mubarakbaad

bahot bahot shukriya saini saab.. rau ke liye extra thanksss....  hello

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«Reply #20 on: October 11, 2013, 05:28:49 PM »
Quote from: Ram Saraswat on October 10, 2013, 11:44:13 PM
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.
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inthekaabi sher ke liye mashkoor huii aapki Ram saraswat jii.. aate rahiyega... hausla afzaai karte rahiyega.. shukriyaa
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«Reply #21 on: October 11, 2013, 05:30:02 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 10, 2013, 11:44:31 PM
Bahut khoob , bahut achhi, manjhe hue shayer jaisi ghazal hai . bahut mubarakbaad.

Siddiqui saahab... behad shukrguzaar hoon aapki... faqat itnaa kehna chahungee, aapki nazre inaayat hai bas... aur kya kahuN..
hmm thanks once again.

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«Reply #22 on: October 11, 2013, 05:35:38 PM »
Quote from: Saman Firdaus on October 10, 2013, 11:58:50 PM
wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne...

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bahot bahot shukriyaa tumhaara saman dear.. aati rehnaa.. khush raho
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«Reply #23 on: October 11, 2013, 05:40:21 PM »
Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on October 10, 2013, 11:59:55 PM
hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

hahahahah... aapki ittaa mazaa aa gayaa... chaliye koi baat nahi shukriyaa hamaari taraf se aapko bahoot saara. thanks alot jii
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«Reply #24 on: October 11, 2013, 05:46:41 PM »
laiba, kaisi ho dear, tumhara mere post pr aana aur is andaaz se ise pasand karna mujhe behad pasnd aaya hai... main sach kahun kitni khush hoon tumhe yahan dekh kar.. aati raahna.. aur apka khoob khayaal rakho.. khush raho

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«Reply #25 on: October 11, 2013, 05:48:14 PM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 11, 2013, 12:30:03 AM
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bahut khoob

bahot bahot shukiyaa suresh ji
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«Reply #26 on: October 11, 2013, 05:54:17 PM »
Quote from: sahal on October 11, 2013, 12:44:24 AM
Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.

Waah waah kya khoob likha hai
Sidra sahiba apne .
Pura kalaam lajawaab raha .
Mubarakbaad .

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behad shukrguzaar hoon aapki sahal ji... aapko ye ghazal pasand aaye meri khushnaseebi hai.
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«Reply #27 on: October 11, 2013, 05:55:11 PM »
Quote from: mkv on October 11, 2013, 12:54:15 AM
alfaz ki jaadugari
bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur daad

aapki nazre inaayat hai janaab, bas aur kyaa kahun... shukriyaa
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«Reply #28 on: October 11, 2013, 06:04:14 PM »
waah waah waah sdira ji bohut khub bohut umda peshkash waaah bas waaah
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«Reply #29 on: October 11, 2013, 06:16:06 PM »
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