palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai

by sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:29:56 PM
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«Reply #30 on: October 11, 2013, 06:17:52 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 11, 2013, 01:47:58 AM

Sidra Sahibaa Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN aur khoobsurat khayaaloN ke ...

Wallah behad umdaa ashaar kahe haiN aapne, sabhi ashaar behad khoobsurat rahe jee... Is umdaa aur laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...



parwaaz saahab ko kaneez ka aadaab.. aap sab ka saath aur pyaar mila is site se mujhe bahot accha lag raha hai.. yaqeen maniye ye jagah meri ummeed se dugnee hai, yoonhisaath banaae rakhiyega.. aur pasand kare ke liye thank you jee..

sidra
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«Reply #31 on: October 11, 2013, 06:32:18 PM »
Quote from: nashwani on October 11, 2013, 01:48:26 AM
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Bahut bahut bahut umda likha hai sidra jee..

Sabhi aashar ek se badhkar ek..

laajawab kalaam rahi..

Dhero daad..happy9
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behad shukrguzaar hoon aapki....nashwani ji aate rahen aage bhi
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«Reply #32 on: October 11, 2013, 06:33:21 PM »
Quote from: Iqtedar on October 11, 2013, 02:34:01 AM
lajawaaab, bahot khoooob...
BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahot khushi hui aapko yahan dekh kar Iqtedar ji.... aate rahiyega... shukriyaa

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«Reply #33 on: October 11, 2013, 06:37:03 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on October 11, 2013, 02:35:50 AM

wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!ek rau to banta hi hai

aur haan sidra mere comments tumhaare sher ko hain tumhein nahin hain. dil pe mat lena jab bhi mujhe behter kaam milta hai jo dil se pasand aaye main comments karti hoon. aur agar tumhein pasand na ho to mujhe bejhijhak mana kar dena .

Sheba saahiba aadaab... mujhe sach kahun to aapki kisi bhi baat ka buraa nahi lagaa aur yaqeen maniye behad accha laga aur khushi hui ke itni bareeqi se aapne meri ghazal padhee aur apni beshkeemti raay ata farmaai... shukriyaa ji shukriyaa... maafi aapko tabhi milegii jab aap mujhse vada karengi ke aage bhi aap aaya karengii.. aur apne pyare comments humko diya karengi.. thankyou jii

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«Reply #34 on: October 11, 2013, 08:21:25 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 11, 2013, 03:16:03 AM
Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.

Kaisaa naadaaN hai zaraa dekho to usko logoN,
Meraa afsaana wo mujhko hi sunaa detaa hai.
          Waah-Waah,!!

bahot shukriyaa ravi jii..
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«Reply #35 on: October 11, 2013, 08:25:19 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 11, 2013, 04:13:12 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah ji waah, kyaa kehne sarkaar, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Sidra ji....!!!

aapka bhi bahot bahot shukriyaa sarkaar... kubool kijiye meraa aabhaar... sajaae rakhna ye darbaar, aate rehnaa baaram baar... hehehehehe
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«Reply #36 on: October 11, 2013, 08:45:55 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 11, 2013, 04:13:12 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah ji waah, kyaa kehne sarkaar, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Sidra ji....!!!

apka behad shukriyaa hriday ji...
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«Reply #37 on: October 11, 2013, 08:58:31 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on October 11, 2013, 09:13:58 AM
wah wah Applause Applause

thanks nandbahu ji.
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«Reply #38 on: October 11, 2013, 09:01:22 PM »
Quote from: vb on October 11, 2013, 06:16:06 PM
Applause

thnkss vb ,......................
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«Reply #39 on: October 11, 2013, 09:34:10 PM »
Quote from: saahill on October 11, 2013, 06:04:14 PM
waah waah waah sdira ji bohut khub bohut umda peshkash waaah bas waaah

thankss Sahil ji.... pls keep coming in my posts. thanks

sidra
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«Reply #40 on: October 11, 2013, 10:36:42 PM »
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, kya baat hai, bahut umda Sidra jee, bahut hi achha andaaz hai aapka likhne ka, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye, in ash'aar ka jawaab nahiN, bahut pasand aaye:

Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.


Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.

BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!



DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #41 on: October 12, 2013, 12:12:09 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on October 11, 2013, 10:36:42 PM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, kya baat hai, bahut umda Sidra jee, bahut hi achha andaaz hai aapka likhne ka, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye, in ash'aar ka jawaab nahiN, bahut pasand aaye:

Saamna hote hi palkon ko jhukaa detaa hai,
Mere zakhmo ko wo kyaa khoob hawaa detaa hai.


Zaraa kacchaa hai abhi pyaar ke is khel meiN wo,
kaisaa qaatil hai ke jeene ki duwaa detaa hai.

BaDaa behis hai wo sidra ke zaraa dekh usey,
Mujhe lamho meiN wo sadiyoN ki sazaa detaa hai..!!



DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.


aapki inayaton se mamnoon hoon Iftakhar ji... aapka is andaaz se kalaam ko pasand karna mere liye sabse badaa tohfa hai.. aate rahiyega
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