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isha_verma7

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Palkon pe aansun ko sajaya na jaa saka
uss ko bhi dil ka haal bataya na jaa sakaa

zakhmon se choor choor tha yeh dil mera
ek zakham bhi us ko dikhaya na jaa saka

jab teri yaad aayi toh koshish ke bawajood
aankhon main aansuon ko chupaya na jaa sakaa

kuch log zindagi main aise bhi aaye hai
jin ko kisi bhi lamhe bhulaya na jaa saka

bas iss khayaal se kahin uss ko dukh na ho
hum se toh haal-e-ghum bhi sunayaa na jaa sakaa

woh muskuraha tha mera ru-ba-ru magar
chehre ka raang uss sa chupayaa na jaa sakaa

tanhaiyon ki aag main hum jal gaye
magar fasasla pass ana ka mitaya na jaa sakaa (nm)


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Aryaan

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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2005, 02:48:54 AM »

Wah..Bohat khoob Isha...Excellent..


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Aryaan

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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2005, 02:38:33 AM »


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natural

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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2005, 08:03:19 AM »

Very Nice Isha............... Thanks for sharing......... Usual Smile

You too wrote very well Aryaan.... happy9


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Aryaan

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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2005, 05:33:02 PM »

Thanx a lot Natural....


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2005, 06:58:05 AM »

wah wah bahut vadiya aryaan as usual.........kamaal kar diya........and thanks for appreciating guyz!!!


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nirbhay

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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2005, 09:08:38 AM »

===> Gr8 Work Both <===

Ye Muhabaat ka manzar hai, Ya hai Aansuon ka sailab
Khwab Jo uskey dil mein hai, Kaise kar dun unhein benakab
Palkein unki jo mujhe dekh Jhuk Jaati hai, dil kash hai aandaz-e-Aadab
Dard hai ye, Ya diya hai Husn waalon ne Muhabaat ka Jawab??

Na Ikraar mein Aaya na Inkar mein aaya hamari Muhabaat ka Jawab.
Aarman dil ke lapata saare hogaye, Jab dekha kisi Or ke hath aapne Khwabon ka shabab.


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natural

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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2005, 09:28:32 AM »

Quote from: "nirbhay"

===> Gr8 Work Both <===

Ye Muhabaat ka manzar hai, Ya hai Aansuon ka sailab
Khwab Jo uskey dil mein hai, Kaise kar dun unhein benakab
Palkein unki jo mujhe dekh Jhuk Jaati hai, dilkash hai aandaz-e-Aadab
Dard hai ye, Ya diya hai Husn waalon ne Muhabaat ka Jawab??

Na Ikraar mein Aaya na Inkar mein aaya hamari Muhabaat ka Jawab.
Aarman dil ke lapata saare hogaye, Jab dekha kisi Or ke hath aapne Khwabon ka shabab.

Waah Nirbhay........... Tumney wakayi kamaal ka likha hai..... Usual Smile


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nirbhay

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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2005, 09:34:11 AM »

Thnx So very much Nattu bhai...........Actually all credit for this cuplets goes to Isha and Aryaan........total expressions were inspired by both of their work here.. happy9


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Delicate_Doll

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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2005, 02:03:48 PM »

gr8...isha...n .....nirbhay.........!!!


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nirbhay

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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2005, 03:41:36 PM »

Thnx Salma!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2005, 04:01:51 PM »

Good one Isha, Aryaan and nirbhay!!!


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Delicate_Doll

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«Reply #12 on: November 30, 2005, 08:52:54 AM »

opps meine to ek aur ka naam lena yahan bhool gai...Gr8888888888888 as ever Aryaan...!!!


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Aryaan

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«Reply #13 on: November 30, 2005, 05:26:47 PM »

Thanks a lottttt Nirbhay, Isha, Pooja & Salma...

Good One Nirbhay...


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2005, 01:12:05 AM »

good work nirbhay.......


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