Pareshaan Hoon Main,.

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Khud Apni Mohabbat Pe Pareshaan Hoon Main,.
Suno To Ek Dard Bhari Dastaan Hoon Main,.

Kaise Taay Kiya Zindagi Ka Safar Na Poocho,.
Humsafar Na Mila Koi, Ek Akela Carwaan Hoon Main,,..

Hai Pehchaan Apni Kahin Maloom Nahi Hume,.
Khud Apne Aap SE Anjaan Hoon Main,.

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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2007, 06:30:45 PM »
wah wah wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Lil Bro...... Good work!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2007, 02:12:31 PM »
Shukriya,.
Aur Bhi Seekhne Ko Milta Jo Aap Kuch Likh Kar Jaate,.
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2007, 02:52:09 AM »
Bohat hi khoob Azeem..
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2007, 03:04:49 PM »
Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
Kaash Aap Do Line Likh Kar Jaate To Seekhne ka Maukha Milta,.
Aur Bahaar Aaa Jaati Is Thread Me,.
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2007, 01:53:43 AM »
Kaanton Se Guzar Jana Sholon Se Nikal Jana
Phoolon Ki Basti Mein Jana Tau Sanmbhal Jana

Din Apne Chiraaghon Ki Maanind Guzarte Hain
Harr Subah Ko Bujh Jana Harr Shaam Ko Jal Jana

Bachchon Hi Si Fitrat Hai Hum Ah-le-Mohabbat Ki
Zid Karna Machal Jana Phir Khud Hi Sanmbhal Jana

Woh Shakhs Bhala Mera Kya Saath Nibhaaye Ga
Mausam Ki Tarha Jis Ne Seekha Hai Badal Jana
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2007, 12:04:50 PM »
Waah Azeem...and Aryaan...aapne bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai...!! =D> =D>
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2007, 02:59:34 AM »
Bohat shukriya Talat...
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2007, 02:16:05 PM »
bahoot khoob Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: November 16, 2007, 03:44:37 PM »
Great Aryaan Bhaijaan,.
And Thank U Talat Ji,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 16, 2007, 03:45:56 PM »
Patthar Jahaan Ne Phenke Iska Gilaa Nahi,.
Ghar Likhe The Kaanch Ke Naseeb Mein Mere,.

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«Reply #11 on: November 24, 2007, 10:54:01 PM »
Bohat shukriya Pooja & Azeem...


Nice One Azeem...
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2007, 12:58:04 PM »
U Are Welcome Bhaijaan,.
And Thankx Again,.

Kaash Ke Koi Jaanta Yahan Ke Main Kitna Pareshaan Hoon,.
Naam To Hai Dilon Me Mera, Lekin Mehfilon Me Badnaam Hoon,.

Har Ek Ko Maloom Hai Kya Hoon Main, Aur Kya Guzri Hai Mujhpar.
Lekin Phir Bhi "Jaanasheen" Main Khud Se Anjaan Hoon,..

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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2007, 07:39:37 PM »
very good keep it up

apne ko kabhi kamzor na samjhna
apne ko kabhi akela na samjhna
hum  aapke sath hai
apne kabhi ruswa na karna

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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2007, 06:26:06 AM »
Shukriya Muskan Ji,.
And Nice One,.
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