PAS AANE KA HAQ TO DO

by Sayyid Randeri on March 13, 2008, 05:01:53 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2008, 05:51:58 PM »
wah wah wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob sayyid ji!!! Good creation!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2008, 06:10:04 PM »

NICE ONE
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2008, 06:43:08 PM »
wah wah wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob sayyid ji!! Good creation!!

Pooja ji!! aap ka mashkoor hun

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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2008, 06:44:32 PM »

NICE ONE

aap ka bohot bohot shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2008, 06:47:27 PM »
Sayyid

Chaa gaye bro ! Applause

Bahut khoob !
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2008, 06:53:28 PM »
wah kaya baat hai sayyid ji .. again bahoot hi achi lines likhi hai apne!!!
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2008, 07:05:04 PM »
Sayyid

Chaa gaye bro ! Applause

Bahut khoob !

Rajbir ji Aadab!
Bas aap hi se to sikha he bhyya
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2008, 07:07:02 PM »
Pooja ji! Zarra nwazi ka shukriya
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2008, 07:16:49 PM »
Sayyid ji apki hi kuch lines laker likhne ki koshish ki hai.. app jitna acha to nahi likh saki.. magar jo bhi bana.. post kar rahi hu!!

pas aane ka haq to do
Muskurane ka haq to do

na dekhna meri taraf chahe
pass baith kar rone ka haq to do

na sun.na chahe ek bhi baat meri
dil ke zakham sunane ka haq to do

na ana lout kar phir kabhi yaha
per, umeend-e-intzaar ka haq to do

Kuch nahi to yahi sahi
Apni sirf ek nigah ka haq to do!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2008, 07:31:40 PM »
Sayyid ji apki hi kuch lines laker likhne ki koshish ki hai.. app jitna acha to nahi likh saki.. magar jo bhi bana.. post kar rahi hu!!

pas aane ka haq to do
Muskurane ka haq to do

na dekhna meri taraf chahe
pass baith kar rone ka haq to do

na sun.na chahe ek bhi baat meri
dil ke zakham sunane ka haq to do

na ana lout kar phir kabhi yaha
per, umeend-e-intzaar ka haq to do

Kuch nahi to yahi sahi
Apni sirf ek nigah ka haq to do!!


Wah! pooja ji bohot umda
khas kar jab kisi ki baat ko lekar kuchh kehna ho to bohot hi mushkil hota he, or ye to bohot hi chhoti beher he apni baat puri karne se pehle misra poora hojata he, agar aap is par keh sakte ho to phir kuchh bhi mushkil nahi, bohot bohot mubarak ho!.
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2008, 07:52:01 PM »
Thanks Sayyid!!
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2008, 10:50:19 PM »
Hume taaliyaan Applause bajane ka haq to do...!! bohot khoob Sayyid !!
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2008, 10:51:06 PM »
Bohot hi khoob !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2008, 10:51:35 PM »
Sayyid ji apki hi kuch lines laker likhne ki koshish ki hai.. app jitna acha to nahi likh saki.. magar jo bhi bana.. post kar rahi hu!!

pas aane ka haq to do
Muskurane ka haq to do

na dekhna meri taraf chahe
pass baith kar rone ka haq to do

na sun.na chahe ek bhi baat meri
dil ke zakham sunane ka haq to do

na ana lout kar phir kabhi yaha
per, umeend-e-intzaar ka haq to do

Kuch nahi to yahi sahi
Apni sirf ek nigah ka haq to do!!


Very nice reply Pooja !
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