Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

by mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM
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Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Tumne yun hi kaha tha aayoge,
Apne wade sabhi nibhaoge,
Kab se mahfil saja ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Usko ye aas hai tum aaoge,
Aake apna use banaoge,
Apni palke bichha ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nain.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Wo na jeeta hai aur na parta hai
Yaad kar kar ke aah bharta hai
Jane kya kya ganwa ke baitha hai
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Mann.mann
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2011, 04:58:20 PM »
Mann jee Aadab!

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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2011, 10:07:14 PM »
shama se puchha aik roz oh neer-e-mehfil,kya khuda ne tujhe baksha nahi ulfat bhara dil,jo gale tujh se mile usko jala deti hai chahne wale ki hasti hi mita deti hai,shama ne aag rakhi sar pe kasam khane ko bakhuda mai ne jalaya nahin parwane ko
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2011, 04:04:31 AM »
thanks parwazji...

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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2011, 04:05:31 AM »
thanks fdesiji....
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2011, 11:48:29 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Tumne yun hi kaha tha aayoge,
Apne wade sabhi nibhaoge,
Kab se mahfil saja ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Usko ye aas hai tum aaoge,
Aake apna use banaoge,
Apni palke bichha ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nain.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Wo na jeeta hai aur na parta hai
Yaad kar kar ke aah bharta hai
Jane kya kya ganwa ke baitha hai
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Mann.mann

Bahut khoob mann ji
Likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..
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«Reply #6 on: November 16, 2011, 12:01:14 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Tumne yun hi kaha tha aayoge,
Apne wade sabhi nibhaoge,
Kab se mahfil saja ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Usko ye aas hai tum aaoge,
Aake apna use banaoge,
Apni palke bichha ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nain.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Wo na jeeta hai aur na parta hai
Yaad kar kar ke aah bharta hai
Jane kya kya ganwa ke baitha hai
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Mann.mann

vary good maan ji
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«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2011, 12:17:12 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Tumne yun hi kaha tha aayoge,
Apne wade sabhi nibhaoge,
Kab se mahfil saja ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Usko ye aas hai tum aaoge,
Aake apna use banaoge,
Apni palke bichha ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nain.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Wo na jeeta hai aur na parta hai
Yaad kar kar ke aah bharta hai
Jane kya kya ganwa ke baitha hai
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Mann.mann


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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2011, 03:18:45 AM »
bahtu bahut dhanyawad mkvji
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2011, 03:20:31 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad sunilji
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2011, 03:21:51 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad khwaishji... wakai dhanya hue aapki daad pa kar
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