Pathar bana diya mujhe rone nahin diya ...

by diya786 on August 18, 2008, 07:44:12 AM
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Pathar bana diya mujhe rone nahin diya
           damaan bhi tere gham ne bighone nahin diya

tanhaiyan tumhara pata poochhti rahe
           shab bhar tumhari yaad ne sone nahin diya

ankhon me aakar beth gayi annsoon ki lehar
           palkon pe koi khwaab pe rone nahin diya

dil ko tumhare naam ke ansoo aziz the
           duniya ka dard dil me samone nahin diya

kuch yoon uski yaad chali haath thaam ke
           mele me is jahan ko khone nahin diya
{NM}
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2008, 07:47:04 AM »
EXCELLENT WORK,
DIYA JI,
KEEP GOING....
BY. K.SHAEL
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diya786
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2008, 07:49:44 AM »
THANKS A LOT SHALLY
FOR APPRECIATING AND REPLYING SO FAST..
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ANKIT RAO
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2008, 07:54:35 AM »
 Clapping Smiley

BAHUT KHOOB DIYA JI.
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2008, 11:12:28 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Kya Baat hai DIYA.. bahut Khubsooorat Alfaaz likhe Hain aapne.. Nice Sharing..!!

**~** Mann **~**
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2008, 06:22:30 AM »
nice shayring dia ji
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diya786
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2008, 10:46:28 AM »
thanks alot for appreciating vicky kaafi dino ke baad online aaye aap accha laga
ankit ji aur kaushik ji aapka bhi shukriya ki aapko yeh shayari pasand aayi... happy3
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2008, 11:04:18 AM »
Jee Diya..
aapki sharing ko Maine Best Keh diya....
Fir Maafi Chaahta Hun Diya......
Badi der se aaya..Waqt Ne aane N Diya....
der se aapki post padhi..der se comment diya..... 
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2008, 11:12:31 AM »
der se aaye koi baat nahi par shukriya ki aap aa to gaye !!!
accha laga aapkipost dekhkar...
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2008, 01:46:47 PM »
Quote from: diya786 on August 18, 2008, 07:44:12 AM
Pathar bana diya mujhe rone nahin diya
           damaan bhi tere gham ne bighone nahin diya

tanhaiyan tumhara pata poochhti rahe
           shab bhar tumhari yaad ne sone nahin diya

ankhon me aakar beth gayi annsoon ki lehar
           palkon pe koi khwaab pe rone nahin diya

dil ko tumhare naam ke ansoo aziz the
           duniya ka dard dil me samone nahin diya

kuch yoon uski yaad chali haath thaam ke
           mele me is jahan ko khone nahin diya
{NM}

Nice sharing Divya
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2008, 11:33:06 AM »
shukriya talat ji ki aapko yeh nazm pasand aayi
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2008, 02:46:02 PM »
Nice Sharing Diya Ji,.
Good One,.
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2008, 02:48:48 PM »
Dil Ko Patthar Banaa Liya Maine, Aankhon Mein Phir Bhi Nami Thi,.
Sab Rehkar Kareeb Mere, Koson Door The "Azeem" Jaane Is Nazar Ko Kis Ki Kami Thi,.

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«Reply #13 on: September 01, 2008, 07:03:48 AM »
Nice sharing diya sis..

Nice lines Azeem bhai..
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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2008, 07:56:00 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on August 31, 2008, 02:48:48 PM
Dil Ko Patthar Banaa Liya Maine, Aankhon Mein Phir Bhi Nami Thi,.
Sab Rehkar Kareeb Mere, Koson Door The "Azeem" Jaane Is Nazar Ko Kis Ki Kami Thi,.

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shukriya azeem ki aapko yeh nazm pasand aayi kuch der se hi sahi
jaya di aapka bhi bahut bahut shukriya
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