~~"PATHAR KA DIL"~~

by k.shael on July 03, 2008, 08:27:08 AM
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KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO TUNE
BANAYA HAI,
JAISE MITTI KA JISM AUR PATHAR KA
DIL USME PAYA HAI,

DARD NAHI HUA DEKH MERA GAMM USE,HASTA
HUA MERE GAMM KO BHADANE AAYA HAI,
HAMNE TO SHIDDAT SE KI THI MOHABBAT
JANE KYUN ISS JAISA PATHAR DIL INSAAN
PAYA HAI,

KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO,

BEWAFA HOKAR BHI WAFA KI BAATE KARTA HAI,
BEGUNAH HOTE HUE BHI HAMI PE ILJAAM AE
JUDAI DALTA HAI,AACHE SE AATI HAI USE
CHALNI CHAALE TABHI TO EK PAL ME SHEHAD
SE MITHA AUR AGLE HI PAL JEHAR UGALTA
HAI,

KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO,

REHMAT TERI KI MEIN SHUKARGUJAR HO, KI TU
WAPIS USE MERI ZINDAGI MEIN LAYA,MUJHE USKE
MASOOM CHEHRE KE PICHHE CHIPPE USKE ASLI
CHEHRE SE ROOB.RO KARWAYA,

KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO,

HAR BAAR MILTA RAHA WO MUJHE ISS TARAH
JAISE TUNE USE SIRF MERE LIYE HO BANAYA,
PAR ISS BAAR MILKAR LAGA AISE JAISE USS BEWAFA
NE KAYI AURO KO BHI APNE DIL ME BASAYA,

KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO,

EK-2 KARKE USKI ASLIYAT MAINE AAJ JAANI,
USKA WAJOOD AAJ MERI AANKHON KE SAMNE AAYA
JISE DIL SE POOJTI RAHI MEIN HAR PAL AAJ USKE
DIL KA HAR RAJ MAINE JAANA,

KHUDDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO,

KEHTA THA KISI ROZ KI MERI ZINDAGI TERE LIYE
HAI PAR AAJ TAK USS ZINDAGI KA EK PAL BHI KABHI
MUJHE NA THAMAYA,HAR PAL PASS HOTE HUE DOOR RAHA
HAR PAL PALKON PE RAKH KE THUKRAYA,

KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO....
AAJ USKA ASLI CHEHRA MERE SAMNE AAYA....

BY. K.SHAEL
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2008, 08:37:21 AM »
Shally

Kisi ki asliyat ko jaanane ke baad he aisa kalam likha jaata hai ! Applause

I liked these lines very much:

"KEHTA THA KISI ROZ KI MERI ZINDAGI TERE LIYE
HAI PAR AAJ TAK USS ZINDAGI KA EK PAL BHI KABHI
MUJHE NA THAMAYA,HAR PAL PASS HOTE HUE DOOR RAHA
HAR PAL PALKON PE RAKH KE THUKRAYA,

KHUDA KYA KHOOB USS BEDARD KO....
AAJ USKA ASLI CHEHRA MERE SAMNE AAYA...."
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2008, 08:48:12 AM »
THANX RAJBIR JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2008, 11:45:15 AM »
Bohot Khoob K. Shael !!! Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 11:55:58 AM »
THANX CELMIRA JI....
BY. K.SHAEL
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 01:34:47 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Shally apki kavita ki ek ek line aise lagi jaise mere dil se nikali ho... bahoot khoob!!
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k.shael
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2008, 08:28:04 AM »
THANX POOJA DI,
AAPKO MERA KALAM PASAND AAYA YE MERE LIYE
KHUSHI KI BAAT HAI, DI MAINE TO APNE DIL KE
JAJBAAT JAHIR KIYE HAI IS KALAM ME LAGTA HAI
MERE JAJBATO KE SAATH-2 AAPKE JAJBAAT BHI JAHIR
HO GAYE....
DI MERE KALAM NE AAPKO DARD TO NAHI DIYA?
BY. K.SHAEL
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unlock ali
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2008, 08:07:20 PM »
tearyeyed WAAAHHH SAHAL SAHEB KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI..LIKHNA TO NAHI AATA MUJHE BUT YEH JO AAPNE LIKHA HAI LAGTA HAI KI AAPNE MERE LIYE HI LIKHA HAI. DIL KO CHHO GYA AAPKA KALAM
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2008, 05:40:31 AM »
bohut khoob shally kaafi acha likha hai
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2008, 06:20:10 AM »
THANX SOOOO MUCH,
ALI JI,
& KAUSHIK JI,
ALI JI SORRY FOR CONFUSION I'M
A FEMALE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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Muhammed
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2008, 06:05:31 AM »
BEWAFA HOKAR BHI WAFA KI BAATE KARTA HAI,
BEGUNAH HOTE HUE BHI HAMI PE ILJAAM AE
JUDAI DALTA HAI,AACHE SE AATI HAI USE
CHALNI CHAALE TABHI TO EK PAL ME SHEHAD
SE MITHA AUR AGLE HI PAL JEHAR UGALTA
HAI,

Bahot Hi Khoob Shael Sahiba.
Aap Ki Ye Lines Duniya Ka asli Cheharaa Hai.
Ye Duniya Koi Kyaa Jaane..?
Shahad Dikhe Jahar Pilaaye...!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2008, 03:36:33 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on July 07, 2008, 08:28:04 AM
THANX POOJA DI,
AAPKO MERA KALAM PASAND AAYA YE MERE LIYE
KHUSHI KI BAAT HAI, DI MAINE TO APNE DIL KE
JAJBAAT JAHIR KIYE HAI IS KALAM ME LAGTA HAI
MERE JAJBATO KE SAATH-2 AAPKE JAJBAAT BHI JAHIR
HO GAYE....
DI MERE KALAM NE AAPKO DARD TO NAHI DIYA?
BY. K.SHAEL

dard dete hai hum khud ko apne ahsaaso se
kisi ke kuch karne se, kuch hota nahi
yaad aa hi jaati hai apne gumo ki kabhi kabhi
yakin maano, koi yaha kisi ke liye rota nahi
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Roja
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2008, 03:53:26 PM »
Well writtern Shael and Pooja di
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2008, 11:34:46 AM »
THANX ASHRAF,
POOJA DI & ROZA JI,
SHUKRIYA KALAM KO PADNE AUR SARAHNE
KE LIYE,
BY. K.SHAEL
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