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Meena is back

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hello dosto...kuch log duniya me kuch zada hi emotional hote hai (including me) to kabhi kabhi ek choti si baat bih bohot dard de jati hai. bas unhi feelings me meri yeh poem hai:

Dafna do dil me jazbaaton ki bulbul ko “Meena”,
Ke duniya me iski achi udan nahin,

Khud ko pattar banao, ke koi bhi zakhmi na kar sakhe tujhe,
Par dhayan rahe pattar se nikle kabhi ansowon ka carawan nahin,

Samajh sakhta gar koi dil ke dard ko to kisi se shikwa na hota,
Til til ke koi kaise marta hai, har kisi ko iska guman nahin,

Ansoon, muskurahat, dard aur kushi...inki ehemiyat hi kya,
Daman inka pakad kar raha-e-zindagi pe chalna koi asan nahin.


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Rajbir

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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2006, 06:06:52 PM »

Meena

Aap ne bilkul sahi likha hai sad5

Rajbir


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nikki

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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2006, 10:54:46 PM »

well said sis....

iss pathar ke jahan mein
pathar dil walon ka basera hai
chalo sis kahin aisi jagah chale jo jahaan tera aur mera hai


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Pooja

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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2006, 03:39:56 AM »

kahan dhoonde hum hamara jahan
sare jahan mai, patharo ka basera hai
jo basati hai duniya, hamare dil mai
usme ho chuka bahoot andhera hai!!!

Pathar ke dil, pathar ke shaher, pathar ki log yahan
Roye bhi to kahty hai,
ansoo?
is jamane mai kis cheeze ne tumhe ghera hai!!!


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tushar_4u_im

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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2006, 07:09:14 AM »

Quote from: "Meena is back"

pathar dil hai tera tujh se kya mai sikwa karu.........

sir aapna tujhse takraker bhi kya hoga tujh per aasar.......

tu bikher gai mahubbat me nafrat k fool is kader..........

hume in foolo k sath jeene ki aadat si ho gai.............


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HumTum is back

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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2006, 04:32:12 PM »

Patthar ke sanam patthar ke kudha patthar ke hi insaan paye hai
tum shehar muhhobat kehte ho hum jaan bachcha ke aaye hai !!

"Sudarshan Faakir" sahab ki yeh gazal yaad aa gyi Meena - JI ....... hota hai yun bhi kabhi kabhi .... apne hi bahut dukh de jate hai ..... chachey unka irada dil dukhane ka nhi hota .. par bhi yh yeh nadaan dil ..batoon ko dil se lga leta hai .... emotional hona .... insaan ki fitrat hai .. jha dil hoga wha yaqeenan dard bhi hoga !!

phir is duniya se umiid-e-waffa hai
tujhe 'e zindagii kya ho gaya hai

badi zaalim nihayat bevaffa hai
yeh duniyaaphir bhi kitani Khush-numa hai

har ik apne hi Gam mein mubtila hai
kisii ke dard se kaun aashna hai

mere naqqad meri shayari to
mere tuute huye dil kii sada hai

kahan hoon "HT", mein to "HT" sa hoon
woh HT-e-Khush-nava to mar chuka hai !!

HT = HumTum


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2006, 04:41:39 PM »

Lovely meena sis, humtum and Pooja ji, well written.. Usual Smile


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Meena is back

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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2006, 06:25:33 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Meena

Aap ne bilkul sahi likha hai sad5

Rajbir

shukriya bhaiya ji!

:D


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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2006, 06:28:14 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

well said sis....

iss pathar ke jahan mein
pathar dil walon ka basera hai
chalo sis kahin aisi jagah chale jo jahaan tera aur mera hai

thanx nikki kuddiye...nice one as well

kaha tka baghe hum apno se,
gar woh nahin humare to humara kaun hai,
bas khud ko pattar bana liya aab, kisi se darte nahin,
dil me samudnar to hai par ankhon humari maun* hai!

*maun=chup


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nikki

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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2006, 06:29:38 PM »

aaj pathron ne bhi di hai duhayi
kabhi to aaya karo
kuch likha karo
kuch padh kar jaya karo
patharon ne bhi aaj awaaz hai lagayi
aap aaye bahar aayi


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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2006, 06:30:58 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

bohot ache!!

pattron ke bich rehe kar bhi humne sheshe ka dil rakha tha,
kaunsa sa pattar tood jaye hume, soch kar yeh dil roz marta tha!


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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2006, 06:32:05 PM »

Quote from: "tushar_4u_im"

nice!

:D


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Meena is back

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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2006, 06:33:36 PM »

Quote from: "HumTum is back"

humtum ji apki poem samajh me hi nahin ayi sad5

par sahi kaha apne janbuz kar koi kisi ko dukh nahin deta, par dil to dil hai na!

:D


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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2006, 06:34:24 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Lovely meena sis, humtum and Pooja ji, well written.. Usual Smile

thanx bhai!

:D


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nikki

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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2006, 06:35:22 PM »

nice one again..Meena sis...n beautifull Pooja sis

pathar ki duniya mein rehne wale
kahin tum pathar na ho jaana
sheeshe ko azmaate hain sabhi
kahin tum bhi na zurm dhaana
hamara dil kal bhi dhadkta tha
aaj bhi dhadkta hai teri khatir
yaqin na ho to kabhi bhi azmaana


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