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«Reply #15 on: February 01, 2006, 07:21:23 PM »

bohot achhe meena and everyone else!!


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«Reply #16 on: February 02, 2006, 04:51:41 PM »

Really very touching meena sis,good work humtum and nikki sis as always.

"Ae khuda tu kyun nahi mujhe patthar bana deta hai,
dil ki is duniya me maine aansuon ko hi kyun paaya hai,
bohat ki koshish maine dil ko apne patthar ka roop de dun,
par kya karun,khuda ne ise shayad tootne ko hi banaya hai."


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«Reply #17 on: February 02, 2006, 06:20:55 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

nice one again..Meena sis...n beautifull Pooja sis

pathar ki duniya mein rehne wale
kahin tum pathar na ho jaana
sheeshe ko azmaate hain sabhi
kahin tum bhi na zurm dhaana
hamara dil kal bhi dhadkta tha
aaj bhi dhadkta hai teri khatir
yaqin na ho to kabhi bhi azmaana

thanx kuddiye and gud one again!!

pattar ban rahi hoon mai,
aab na koi rokho mujhe,
umeedon ka aina toot gaya aaj,
un tukdo me hi tum dekho mujhe!


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«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2006, 06:21:24 PM »

Quote from: "sanya310"

bohot achhe meena and everyone else!!

thank u sanya sis!

:D


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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2006, 06:24:40 PM »

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thank u kuddiye, bohot acha likha tumne. btw tuamra avtar bohot pasand hai mujhe :D

tood na sakhe is nazuk se dil ko mere,
isslyie usko aaj pattar ki deewar se maine gera hai,
mat tootdna koi is deewar ko aye logo,
uske andar to bas ansowon ka dhera hai!


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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2006, 06:41:02 PM »

Meena

Bahut achcha likha hai...

Very serious stuff

Rajbir


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«Reply #21 on: February 03, 2006, 05:48:38 PM »

shukriya bhaiya ji!

:D


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«Reply #22 on: February 08, 2006, 09:13:35 PM »

thanx Sanya sis, Nidhi dear n Meena sis...u ppl have written very nice


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«Reply #23 on: February 09, 2006, 05:14:15 AM »

wowoow her ek ne kamal likha hai.....very god job meena!!!

Khud ko pathar kaise kah du
dard ab bhi mahsoos hota hai
uske anne ki umind nahi baki
najaro ko bhir bhi dhokha hota hai!!!

Duniya ki har baat ki, daleel is dil mai hota hai
khud ko khud hi dhoke ka, yah manjar ajeeb hota hai
yaandein ab bhi uski, ansoon mujko deti hai
is pathar se chashmo ka nikalna, yah manjar khoob hota hai!!!


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«Reply #24 on: February 09, 2006, 07:45:12 PM »

thank u nikki kudiye and gud one pooja didi! :D

"Meena" tera wajood aaj bhi hai aur humesha hi rahega,
pattar kehna tab mujhe dosto, jab anhkon se mere pani nahin bahega!


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«Reply #25 on: February 09, 2006, 07:59:59 PM »

Pooja and Meena

Kuch kehne ki zaroorat hai kya... :wink:

Rajbir


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«Reply #26 on: February 09, 2006, 08:06:03 PM »

han hor ki!

:D


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«Reply #27 on: February 11, 2006, 06:12:25 PM »

Quote from: "Meena is back"

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

thank you kuddiye, bohot acha likha tumne. btw tuamra avtar bohot pasand hai mujhe :D

tood na sakhe is nazuk se dil ko mere,
isslyie usko aaj pattar ki deewar se maine gera hai,
mat tootdna koi is deewar ko aye logo,
uske andar to bas ansowon ka dhera hai!

Thanx sis,and thanx for liking avatar too :oops: :oops: .Excellent reply,bohat khoob Usual Smile


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