::Patthar dil ho chuka hai....::

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"Har roz wahi aasha,wahi khwaab,shayad aaj ho nayi shuruaat,
 isi intezaar mein din bane maheene,phir saal bhi guzarte gaye,

 zindagi kal jahan thhi,aaj bhi wahin hai,kuch bhi naya nahi,
 kuch nahi jeene ko ,koi khwaab nahi mehsoos karne ko hain,

 ab kisi se baat karna pasand nahi,gharse nikalna pasand nahi,
 bas ek kone mein baith ke yaadon ko yaad karte rehnaa hai,

 jaanti hoon main is tarah se nahi jee jaati hai zindagi.......,
 ise sanwaarna bhi aakhir khud ke hi haathon mein hai.......,

 par mujhme ab dam nahi,bohat koshish kar chuki hoon main,
 haar gayi main aaj apne hi dil se,apne hi khwaabon se hoon,

 wo purani batein,uska chehra aaj bhi ankho k saamne aa jata hai,
 khaamosh nigaahon se bhi bohatt kuch woh mujhse keh jaata hai,

 main kyun nahi bhool paati hoon tumhein aur tumhari yaadon ko,
 barbaad kiya hai kis kadar teri chahat ne,kabhi aakar to dekho,

 tumhe to yahi lagta hoga,main ab tak to bhool chuki houngi tumhe,
 chaha to bohat,par kya karoon,shayad mohabbat se haar gayi main,

 na koi khushi mehsoos hoti hai , na ab dard ka ehsaas hota hai,
 pathar dil ho chuka hai,ek zinda laash ban ke reh gayi hoon main,

 nahi pata tha mujhe pehle,pyaar karne ki itni badi saza milti hai,
 warna tujhe pehli nazar dekhte hi apni raah badal leti main....."
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2006, 06:26:24 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Har roz wahi aasha,wahi khwaab,shayad aaj ho nayi shuruaat,
 isi intezaar mein din bane maheene,phir saal bhi guzarte gaye,

 zindagi kal jahan thhi,aaj bhi wahin hai,kuch bhi naya nahi,
 kuch nahi jeene ko ,koi khwaab nahi mehsoos karne ko hain,

 ab kisi se baat karna pasand nahi,gharse nikalna pasand nahi,
 bas ek kone mein baith ke yaadon ko yaad karte rehnaa hai,

 jaanti hoon main is tarah se nahi jee jaati hai zindagi.......,
 ise sanwaarna bhi aakhir khud ke hi haathon mein hai.......,

 par mujhme ab dam nahi,bohat koshish kar chuki hoon main,
 haar gayi main aaj apne hi dil se,apne hi khwaabon se hoon,

 wo purani batein,uska chehra aaj bhi ankho k saamne aa jata hai,
 khaamosh nigaahon se bhi bohatt kuch woh mujhse keh jaata hai,

 main kyun nahi bhool paati hoon tumhein aur tumhari yaadon ko,
 barbaad kiya hai kis kadar teri chahat ne,kabhi aakar to dekho,

 tumhe to yahi lagta hoga,main ab tak to bhool chuki houngi tumhe,
 chaha to bohat,par kya karoon,shayad mohabbat se haar gayi main,

 na koi khushi mehsoos hoti hai , na ab dard ka ehsaas hota hai,
 pathar dil ho chuka hai,ek zinda laash ban ke reh gayi hoon main,

 nahi pata tha mujhe pehle,pyaar karne ki itni badi saza milti hai,
 warna tujhe pehli nazar dekhte hi apni raah badal leti main....."


Kya baat hai shabd nahi bache tareef karne ko........Marvalous Nidhi

Patthar dil waalon ke ghar sheeshe ke hua karte hain.....
Patthar Dil walon se Mahobbat karke Aashiq bhi Bewafai Nazar liya karte hain........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2006, 06:36:51 PM »
Thanx a lot Guarav and excellent reply.

"Dil toot-ne ke baad maine ise patthar k roop me dhaala hai,
      na ab koi mohabbat bhari nazar meri ankho ko ganwara hai,
     chod di ab mohabbat ki galiyan,na raha ab pyaar pe aetbaar,
     zindagi barbaad hui,is tarah raunda usne dil ye hamara hai."
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2006, 06:42:00 PM »
Thnx Nidhi.....Gud reply

Dilon ke chilman mein Kaatein bhi khila karte hain.....
Par huzur log dokha khane ke baad bhi Mahobbat kiya karte hain.....
Yeh sab Waqt ki maar hai....aur kaha jaaye toh aaj gale mein Dard ka pehna aapne haar hai.......!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2006, 06:42:32 PM »
Nidhi

Bahut he dard bhari hai tumhari yeh kavita  sad5

Nice Gaurav

Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2006, 06:47:32 PM »
Thanx gaurav and again a very good reply,ab iska reply kal dungi Winking lol,abhi good night tongue3.

thank u Rajbir bhaiya for reading and appreciating my work always :D .
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2006, 06:50:17 PM »
Thnx Rajbir and Nidhi...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2006, 07:54:59 PM »
Wahhhhhh BUhat khoob!! NIdhi...ANd Bshayar..!! KYa baat hai..!!

Dil hai ajj buhat udas na jaane keun..........
Jaise koi humain pher se yaad ane Laga hai....................!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2006, 10:54:34 PM »
"Har roz wahi aasha,wahi khwaab,shayad aaj ho nayi shuruaat,
isi intezaar mein din bane maheene,phir saal bhi guzarte gaye,
Tu na aaya lekin teri rahoon mein hum kade rhe hamehsa
Ik bar hota to kya bura tha mujhe, hum til til karke marte gaye!!

zindagi kal jahan thhi,aaj bhi wahin hai,kuch bhi naya nahi,
kuch nahi jeene ko ,koi khwaab nahi mehsoos karne ko hain,
Tere intzaar mein dekh meri ankhien bhi pattar ho gyii
Aa bhi ja kafir ke teri tishnagi ab haad se guzrne ko hain !!

ab kisi se baat karna pasand nahi,gharse nikalna pasand nahi,
bas ek kone mein baith ke yaadon ko yaad karte rehnaa hai,
Na khushi ki taman-na hai koi na koi hasrat hai dil mein
Jo mila hai mujey muhoobat se bas woh gum sehte rehna hai !!

jaanti hoon main is tarah se nahi jee jaati hai zindagi.......,
ise sanwaarna bhi aakhir khud ke hi haathon mein hai.......,
Dil to chahata hai ke teri yadoon ko zhen se mita du
Lekin kya karu sitamgar iss kadar jadu teri batoon mein hai !!

par mujhme ab dam nahi,bohat koshish kar chuki hoon main,
haar gayi main aaj apne hi dil se,apne hi khwaabon se hoon,
Pehle naaz tha mujey ke haan meiney muhoobat ki hai, lekin
Sach hai yeh ke aaj bahut sharminda apne jazbaton se hoon!!



Nidhi Ji ... just an attempt to complete your shers .....   bahut achcha likha hai aapne !!!!  
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Rajbir
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2006, 11:11:26 PM »
HumTum

Marvelous ! Fantastic ! Excellent !

Bahut khoob !

Kasam se bahut achchi koshish hai aap ki

Mujhe umeed hai ki Nidhi ko bhi pasand aayega aap ka attempt :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2006, 12:06:27 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Har roz wahi aasha,wahi khwaab,shayad aaj ho nayi shuruaat,
 isi intezaar mein din bane maheene,phir saal bhi guzarte gaye,

 zindagi kal jahan thhi,aaj bhi wahin hai,kuch bhi naya nahi,
 kuch nahi jeene ko ,koi khwaab nahi mehsoos karne ko hain,

 ab kisi se baat karna pasand nahi,gharse nikalna pasand nahi,
 bas ek kone mein baith ke yaadon ko yaad karte rehnaa hai,

 jaanti hoon main is tarah se nahi jee jaati hai zindagi.......,
 ise sanwaarna bhi aakhir khud ke hi haathon mein hai.......,

 par mujhme ab dam nahi,bohat koshish kar chuki hoon main,
 haar gayi main aaj apne hi dil se,apne hi khwaabon se hoon,

 wo purani batein,uska chehra aaj bhi ankho k saamne aa jata hai,
 khaamosh nigaahon se bhi bohatt kuch woh mujhse keh jaata hai,

 main kyun nahi bhool paati hoon tumhein aur tumhari yaadon ko,
 barbaad kiya hai kis kadar teri chahat ne,kabhi aakar to dekho,

 tumhe to yahi lagta hoga,main ab tak to bhool chuki houngi tumhe,
 chaha to bohat,par kya karoon,shayad mohabbat se haar gayi main,

 na koi khushi mehsoos hoti hai , na ab dard ka ehsaas hota hai,
 pathar dil ho chuka hai,ek zinda laash ban ke reh gayi hoon main,

 nahi pata tha mujhe pehle,pyaar karne ki itni badi saza milti hai,
 warna tujhe pehli nazar dekhte hi apni raah badal leti main....."

Excellent Nidhi..kya baat hai...
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2006, 08:46:29 AM »
superbbbbb Nidhi.....so touching....
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2006, 02:35:24 PM »
wowoow bahoot khoob Nidhi, humtum ji app to khair hai hi lajawab!!!

good job Princess and BS JI!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2006, 03:17:38 PM »
Nidhi bohothi khoob...bohot achcha likha hai dear Usual Smile

Gaurav and Neha ne bhi achcha likha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2006, 06:34:14 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum is back"
"Har roz wahi aasha,wahi khwaab,shayad aaj ho nayi shuruaat,
isi intezaar mein din bane maheene,phir saal bhi guzarte gaye,
Tu na aaya lekin teri rahoon mein hum kade rhe hamehsa
Ik bar hota to kya bura tha mujhe, hum til til karke marte gaye!!

zindagi kal jahan thhi,aaj bhi wahin hai,kuch bhi naya nahi,
kuch nahi jeene ko ,koi khwaab nahi mehsoos karne ko hain,
Tere intzaar mein dekh meri ankhien bhi pattar ho gyii
Aa bhi ja kafir ke teri tishnagi ab haad se guzrne ko hain !!

ab kisi se baat karna pasand nahi,gharse nikalna pasand nahi,
bas ek kone mein baith ke yaadon ko yaad karte rehnaa hai,
Na khushi ki taman-na hai koi na koi hasrat hai dil mein
Jo mila hai mujey muhoobat se bas woh gum sehte rehna hai !!

jaanti hoon main is tarah se nahi jee jaati hai zindagi.......,
ise sanwaarna bhi aakhir khud ke hi haathon mein hai.......,
Dil to chahata hai ke teri yadoon ko zhen se mita du
Lekin kya karu sitamgar iss kadar jadu teri batoon mein hai !!

par mujhme ab dam nahi,bohat koshish kar chuki hoon main,
haar gayi main aaj apne hi dil se,apne hi khwaabon se hoon,
Pehle naaz tha mujey ke haan meiney muhoobat ki hai, lekin
Sach hai yeh ke aaj bahut sharminda apne jazbaton se hoon!!



Nidhi Ji ... just an attempt to complete your shers .....   bahut achcha likha hai aapne !!!!  


Wah wah wah kya baat hai,no words to describe how gr8 u have written,its really looking complete now Usual Smile ,thanx for writing so nice :D .
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