patthar

by salil2002 on October 02, 2008, 03:25:04 PM
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salil2002
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na koi jaane mujhe na main kisi ko jaanu
meri pehchaan ko ab tum mita do
main ab reh nahi sakta oosse juda hokar
mujhe qatl kar do ya karwa do
main na chahon ab kissi aur ko na koi mujhe chahe
mujhe nafrat karna bhi tum sikha do
kii dooba hua hoon main dard main
magar main kehta nahin ki mujhe dawa do
tha bahut kamzor yeh dil mera
magar kab kaha tha maine kii mujhe patthar tum bana do.........
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sonalxoxo
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2008, 08:48:29 PM »
 Clapping Smiley wow...
mujhe ek minute ke liye sochna pada ke kaise kisi ne tumhe itna dard diya
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2008, 12:29:04 PM »
sonal thnks for ur appreciation..........
u r a new member?
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sonalxoxo
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2008, 05:15:54 PM »
yes I am a new member
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Sifar6567
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 03:14:24 AM »
Bahut sahi likha hai salil ji...  Thumbs UP
aisa lagta hai shabd seedhe dil ki gehrayiyon se nikale hain!!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2008, 03:51:26 AM »
Bahut achhe salil..

Pattharon ki deewaron se takraye aise,
armaan bikhar gaye kaanch ke jaise,
sochte hia aksar ye tanhaiyon mein,
tum bhi muskurate hoge in phoolon jaise...
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salil2002
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2008, 03:19:18 PM »
thnks angel sonal and sifar........
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2008, 07:42:51 AM »
na koi jaane mujhe na main kisi ko jaanu
meri pehchaan ko ab tum mita do
main ab reh nahi sakta oosse juda hokar
mujhe qatl kar do ya karwa do
main na chahon ab kissi aur ko na koi mujhe chahe
mujhe nafrat karna bhi tum sikha do
kii dooba hua hoon main dard main
magar main kehta nahin ki mujhe dawa do
tha bahut kamzor yeh dil mera
magar kab kaha tha maine kii mujhe patthar tum bana do.........


Bohot Khoob hai ye dard ki daastaan  Applause Applause

Jhilmil taare jin main chaahe the kabhi
Aankhon ko askhon ka samandar bana gaya
Sikha gaya wo mujhko jeene ka naya hunar
Dard itna diya, mujhko
patthar bana gaya
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2008, 10:47:24 AM »
Bohot Khoob hai ye dard ki daastaan  Applause Applause

Jhilmil taare jin main chaahe the kabhi
Aankhon ko askhon ka samandar bana gaya
Sikha gaya wo mujhko jeene ka naya hunar
Dard itna diya, mujhko
patthar bana gaya
shukriya talat
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