Per jigar ka dard aansoo aankh ke bat te nahin.- Beete palon ke saaye-1992

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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2013, 07:34:53 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
Bahut bahut shukriya rajanji 
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«Reply #16 on: July 25, 2013, 07:36:59 PM »
just awesome ...superb...aisi khubsurat gazal ki tareef kaise ki jaye nahi maloom saheb.. yeh to umda shayar hasan sir saini sir aur taish ji kar sakenge sahi dhung se...... to hamari taraf se bas ek chhota sa rau.. jo is gazal ke liye naa ke barabar hai is qalaam par to hazar rau bhi kam pade...


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Bahut bahut shukriya soudagarji
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«Reply #17 on: July 25, 2013, 07:38:07 PM »
waah waah bahut bahut khoob ram ji.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut shukriya Touhidji 
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«Reply #18 on: July 25, 2013, 07:39:38 PM »
Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
Bahut bahut shukriya Raviji
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«Reply #19 on: July 25, 2013, 07:41:41 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
ufffffff bahut hi lajawab aur umda ghazal se nawaza hai aapne. bahut hi gehre ehsaas se saje hue sab ashaar. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi. is khoobsurat kalam par hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.


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«Reply #20 on: July 25, 2013, 07:43:22 PM »
loot liye bhai, dheron daaaaad, waaah waaaah aur waaaaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut shukriya Iqtedarji
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«Reply #21 on: July 25, 2013, 07:47:37 PM »
WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH
bahut bahut shukriya saahillji
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«Reply #22 on: July 25, 2013, 07:50:18 PM »

Saraswat Jee Aadaab...!

Janab Ilm toH tha hume ke aap aik buzurg hasti haiN... aaj aapki pic dekhkar yaqeenan khushi bhi huyi ke aap jaise qadardaaN bhi haiN YO ki site par...


Badi khoobsurat aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee... har ashaar meiN gehraai aur khoobsurti hai...

Is dilfareb umdaa aur laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...



Bahut bahut shukriya aur lakhon Duaayein Parwazji khush rahein.
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«Reply #23 on: July 26, 2013, 03:46:53 AM »
Dil  rahe  be-chain,  bojhil  raat din  kat te nahin,
Roshani  kaise  ho,  baadal  syaah to chhat te nahin.
wah wah wah....! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Ru-ba-ru aana nahi  to, kwaab  mein  aate  ho   kyon,
Kiyon mere dil aur  jigar se,   ek pal hat te  nahin.
bahut bahut khoob.....!
Door bhi hona pade, dil mein  rahein     nazdeekiyan, 
Fasle  warna  dilon  ke , sahaj  hi  ghat  te  nahin.
bahut khoob..........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Zakhmi  dil karne se pahle, dil mein  socha  chahiye,
zakhm  bhar sak te hein lekin, daag to hat te nahin.
wah wah wah wah......! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Neik  dil  insaan  nahin’  posheeda  rahte  der  tak,
be  rahm  bhi  is jahan  mein, der tak dat te  nahin.
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Yoon hi to hota nahin hai, dil ke armaano ka   khoon,
be wazeh bhi yoon kabhi,  insaani dil  fat  te  nahin.
ek damm sahi kahaa........! Applause Applause Applause Applause
Pyaar bat ta hai , muhabbat bat ti hai, bat ti khushi, 
per  jigar  ka dard, aansoo  aankh  ke  bat te  nahin.
wah wah wah wah........! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
“Ram”  Rab  ke  waste  tu  un  ka bhi  karle  yekiin
jaan  dete hain  wafa mein , nam  wo  rat  te  nahin.
bahut khoob......!
दिल  रहे  बे-चैन, बोझिल  रात दिन कट ते नहीं,
रौशनी कैसे हो,  बादल स्याह तो   छट  ते  नहीं.

रु-बॅ-रु आना नहीं तो,  ख़्वाब  में  आते  हो क्यों,
क्यों मेरे दिल और ज़िगर से,एक पल हट ते  नहीं. 

दूर  भी  होना  पड़े,  दिल  में  रहें  नज़दीकियाँ,
फासले  वर्ना  दिलों  के ,सहज  ही घट  ते  नहीं.

ज़ख्मी  दिल करने से पहले, दिल में सोचा चाहिये,
 ज़ख्म  भर सकते हें लेकिन, दाग़ तो  हट ते नहीं.

नेक दिल  इंसान नहीं,  पोशीदा  रहते  देर  तक,
बे  रहम  भी  इस जहां  में, देर तक डट ते नहीं.
                                     
यूं ही तो होता नहीं है, दिल के अरमानों का खून,
बे वज़ह भी यूं कभी,  इंसानी  दिल फट  ते नहीं.

प्यार  बॅटता है , मुहब्बत बॅटती है, बॅटती  खुशी,
पर  ज़िगर  का दर्द, आंसू  आंख के बटते  नहीं.

“राम”  रब  के वास्ते तू उन का भी कर ले यक़ीन,
जान  देते  हैं  बफा  में , नाम वो  रटते   नहीं.
 


ram sahab perfect .......! ek rau .!

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«Reply #24 on: July 26, 2013, 04:35:39 AM »
ram sahab perfect .......! ek rau .!

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Bahut bahut shukriya Sebaji
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«Reply #25 on: July 26, 2013, 05:59:05 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #26 on: July 26, 2013, 06:38:40 PM »
bahut khoob
Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #27 on: July 26, 2013, 07:58:17 PM »
Namaste Sir
Dil  rahe  be-chain,  bojhil  raat din  kat te nahin,
Roshani  kaise  ho,  baadal  syaah to chhat te nahin.

Ru-ba-ru aana nahi  to, kwaab  mein  aate  ho   kyon,
Kiyon mere dil aur  jigar se,   ek pal hat te  nahin.
 
Door bhi hona pade, dil mein  rahein     nazdeekiyan, 
Fasle  warna  dilon  ke , sahaj  hi  ghat  te  nahin.

WAH WAH WAH
ADBHT SANGAM..ALFAAZ AUR EHSAASON KA..
GHAZAB KI RAWAANEE HAI..YEAR 1992..
BEETEY PALON KI KHOOBSURAT DAASTAAN..JO FIZAAON ME HAMESHA GOONZTI RAHEGI.

AUR PHIR
ye do shaar to..kya kahne
Pyaar bat ta hai , muhabbat bat ti hai, bat ti khushi, 
per  jigar  ka dard, aansoo  aankh  ke  bat te  nahin.

“Ram”  Rab  ke  waste  tu  un  ka bhi  karle  yekiin
jaan  dete hain  wafa mein , nam  wo  rat  te  nahin.

BAHUT BADHIYA,,ghazab ki adaaygee
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«Reply #28 on: July 26, 2013, 08:53:06 PM »
Namaste Sir
Dil  rahe  be-chain,  bojhil  raat din  kat te nahin,
Roshani  kaise  ho,  baadal  syaah to chhat te nahin.

Ru-ba-ru aana nahi  to, kwaab  mein  aate  ho   kyon,
Kiyon mere dil aur  jigar se,   ek pal hat te  nahin.
 
Door bhi hona pade, dil mein  rahein     nazdeekiyan, 
Fasle  warna  dilon  ke , sahaj  hi  ghat  te  nahin.

WAH WAH WAH
ADBHT SANGAM..ALFAAZ AUR EHSAASON KA..
GHAZAB KI RAWAANEE HAI..YEAR 1992..
BEETEY PALON KI KHOOBSURAT DAASTAAN..JO FIZAAON ME HAMESHA GOONZTI RAHEGI.

AUR PHIR
ye do shaar to..kya kahne
Pyaar bat ta hai , muhabbat bat ti hai, bat ti khushi, 
per  jigar  ka dard, aansoo  aankh  ke  bat te  nahin.

“Ram”  Rab  ke  waste  tu  un  ka bhi  karle  yekiin
jaan  dete hain  wafa mein , nam  wo  rat  te  nahin.

BAHUT BADHIYA,,ghazab ki adaaygee
Bahut bahut Dhanyabaad aur Ashirwaad, "Chiragh" se dunia bhar mein ujaala ho.
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«Reply #29 on: July 27, 2013, 12:18:20 AM »
Bahut bahut Dhanyabaad aur Ashirwaad, "Chiragh" se dunia bhar mein ujaala ho.
Dobara padhne aaya to aapka comment anjaane me dikha mujhe.
It's really big day for me.
your blessings..will be always with me.
I will try my best to prove words true..
with regards

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