PHIR MERA DIL DARD KA MAARAA HAI.........................MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on August 12, 2010, 01:07:45 PM
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PHIR MERA DIL DARD KA MAARAA HAI
PHIR TANHAAYEE NE MUJHE PUKAARAA HAI

KHO GAYEE TEERAGEE ME ZIND MERI
TU HEE UMMEED KA EK TARA HAI

SHAB-E-MAAH-E-TAMAAM ME CHAMKA
MERI TAQDEER KA JO SITAARAA HAI

RAAT KE DAAMAN ME CHAND KA ZEVAR
KITNA DILKASH HANSEE NAZAARAA HAI

LOUT KE PHIR UDHAR HEE JAAYEGAA
DIL YE MERAA ZID KAA MAARAA HAI
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 04:31:07 PM »
THANKS AAKASH JEE!
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Radhika_2
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 08:09:52 AM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 12, 2010, 01:07:45 PM
PHIR MERA DIL DARD KA MAARAA HAI
PHIR TANHAAYEE NE MUJHE PUKAARAA HAI

KHO GAYEE TEERAGEE ME ZIND MERI
TU HEE UMMEED KA EK TARA HAI

SHAB-E-MAAH-E-TAMAAM ME CHAMKA
MERI TAQDEER KA JO SITAARAA HAI

RAAT KE DAAMAN ME CHAND KA ZEVAR
KITNA DILKASH HANSEE NAZAARAA HAI

LOUT KE PHIR UDHAR HEE JAAYEGAA
DIL YE MERAA ZID KAA MAARAA HAI

ji nice creation
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 08:14:02 AM »
mamta jiii namaskar...

yun yad ata he ki "hindyugm" ke mancha par apki gazalon se mulaqat ho chuki he shayad...khair man ka bhram bhi ho sakta he

bahut khoobsurat likha he apne...

fir kisi alhad gulab ki kashish mujhe kheech layi
khushbu me na dam tha "Abhi" katon ki taqleef mujhe kheech layi~
 
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 08:46:27 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriyaa raadhikaa jee!
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 08:56:21 AM »
Abhi jee,
        Namaskaar,
                  Aap ne theek hee kahaa .ye aap kaa bhram hee hai.mai ne Hindiyugm me apnee koi rachna pravisht nahee kee.haaN iske atirikt mai ne kuch gazal urduanjuman par avashya preshit kee haiN...aap ne meree hindi kavita bhee yaheeN paRhee hogee...usee ke bhramvash aap ko aisa prateet hua hogaa.
Aap kee prasansha mere nimitt kisee uphaar se kam naheeN.lekhni ko jaise pranvaayu mil jatee hai...iske liye mai aap kee hriday se aabhaaree hooN... punah kotishah dhanywaad.....
Mamta Bajpai 
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 08:59:38 AM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 15, 2010, 08:56:21 AM
Abhi jee,
        Namaskaar,
                  Aap ne theek hee kahaa .ye aap kaa bhram hee hai.mai ne Hindiyugm me apnee koi rachna pravisht nahee kee.haaN iske atirikt mai ne kuch gazal urduanjuman par avashya preshit kee haiN...aap ne meree hindi kavita bhee yaheeN paRhee hogee...usee ke bhramvash aap ko aisa prateet hua hogaa.
Aap kee prasansha mere nimitt kisee uphaar se kam naheeN.lekhni ko jaise pranvaayu mil jatee hai...iske liye mai aap kee hriday se aabhaaree hooN... punah kotishah dhanywaad.....
Mamta Bajpai 

izzat bhakshane ke liye abhaari hu apka... asal me mene apki pravistiyan kahin or padhi he jo mujhe yad nahi ...khair chhodiye..ek bar fir apka dhanyawad~
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 10:57:03 PM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 12, 2010, 01:07:45 PM
PHIR MERA DIL DARD KA MAARAA HAI
PHIR TANHAAYEE NE MUJHE PUKAARAA HAI

Bhut acha matla kaha hai aapne......daad

KHO GAYEE TEERAGEE ME ZIND MERI
TU HEE UMMEED KA EK TARA HAI

kya baat hai acha khyaal hai, agr "zind" ko panjaabi lafz "jind" se badal sakti haiN to sher shayad aur attractive ho jaayega, ye meri soch hai zaroori nahi Usual Smile

SHAB-E-MAAH-E-TAMAAM ME CHAMKA
MERI TAQDEER KA JO SITAARAA HAI

khoob.........

RAAT KE DAAMAN ME CHAND KA ZEVAR
KITNA DILKASH HANSEE NAZAARAA HAI

acha khyaal hai........

LOUT KE PHIR UDHAR HEE JAAYEGAA
DIL YE MERAA ZID KAA MAARAA HAI

kya baat hai bhut hi piyara ehsaas kamal ka sher hai, mashaAllah se bhut acha likhti haiN aap Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyadah



aslam
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2010, 08:17:36 AM »
Aslam saaheb ,
              Aadab o Namaskaar,
                                Meree khushqismatee jo aap kee nazar mere kalaam se guzaree.mere liye ye intehaayee masarrat kaa sabab hai keh aap ko pahlee martabaa apne thread par dekhaa.aap kee housla afzai mere liye kisee tohfe se kam naheeN.
mai chaahooNgee keh meri har koshish aap kee nazar kee chaaNv se guzare......'zind ' lafz mai panjaabee kaa hee lenaa chaah rahee thee par talffuz me galat thee...aap kaa mashwarah sar aaNkhoN par....mere kalaam ko apnaa qeematee waqt dene ke liye behad mashkoor o mamnoon hooN...ye nawazish banaaye rakheN.......

Mamta Bajpai
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2011, 01:41:36 AM »
Aaj taqreeban 9 maheene baad apne is kalaam par dobaarah nazar gayee ...tamaam khaamiyoN ke baad bhee Aslam saaheb ne jis dariyaadili se meri houslaa afzai kee uskee mai behad shukrguzaar hooN......
ek baar phir se apnaa ye kalaam pesh karooNgee magar islaah ke baad.......
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2011, 01:50:25 AM »


Dard ne phir se dil ko maaraa hai
tanhaai kaa hee ab sahaaraa hai

kho gayee teeragee me jind meree
tu hee umeed kaa sitaaraa hai

shab e maah e tamaam me chamkaa
meree taqdeer kaa jo taaraa hai

daaman e shab me chaaN d kaa zevar
kitnaa dilksh haseeN nazaaraa hai

lout kar phir udhar hee jaayegaa
dil ye meraa zidd kaa maaraa hai
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2012, 04:55:36 PM »
Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!


Bade dino se aapke darshan nahi huye... aur na hi koi kalaam
aapki taraf se aayi... ?
Sab khairiyat toH hai... ?

Aaj youN hi aapke kalaam ki yaad aayi toH yeH kalaam padhi
badi khoob aur umdaa gazal kahi hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad gazab ke hai... aapki fankaari meiN
aik ajeeb si kashish hai jo khiNch laati hai... Usual Smile

Is umdaa gazal par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 12, 2010, 01:07:45 PM
PHIR MERA DIL DARD KA MAARAA HAI
PHIR TANHAAYEE NE MUJHE PUKAARAA HAI

Behad khoob matla hai jee daad                   

KHO GAYEE TEERAGEE ME JIND MERI
TU HEE UMMEED KA EK TARA HAI

Kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob                   

SHAB-E-MAAH-E-TAMAAM ME CHAMKA
MERI TAQDEER KA JO SITAARAA HAI

Kia kahne jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob                   

RAAT KE DAAMAN ME CHAND KA ZEVAR
KITNA DILKASH HANSEE NAZAARAA HAI

Masha Allaah kia kahne jee " Raat ke daman meiN chaNd ka zevar"
behad nayaab khayaal ataa kiya hai bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Sher bhi behad umda raha daad daad daad Usual Smile                   

LOUT KE PHIR UDHAR HEE JAAYEGAA
DIL YE MERAA ZID KAA MAARAA HAI

WaH jee waaH Masha Allaah bahut khoob bada achcha
sher hai behad umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile                   
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