Phir Na Ye Dil Toot Jaaye,.

by Jaanasheen on January 23, 2009, 12:20:35 PM
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Mohabbat Hui Hai Mujhe, Dil Ke Tootne Ka Darr Bhi Hai,.
Saji Hai Aaj Dil Ki Duniya, Magar Ghamon Ka Wo Manzar Bhi Hai,.

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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 05:56:38 PM »
Nice lines chote bhai

Pyaar kiya agar hai to na dar mere bhai
Pyaar mein ek taraf kuan hai ek or khai
Bas sambhal kar rakhna har kadam bhai
Zindagi teri achchi tarah se beet jaai
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2009, 06:53:29 PM »
Chote tumhari nayee post ho to one liner maza nahi deti Ghayel ke bhai ho likho to ghazal one liner to hamre liye mamuli guftugu hain..........
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2009, 07:26:56 AM »
Nice lines chote bhai

Pyaar kiya agar hai to na dar mere bhai
Pyaar mein ek taraf kuan hai ek or khai
Bas sambhal kar rakhna har kadam bhai
Zindagi teri achchi tarah se beet jaai

Shukriya Bhaiya Ji.
And Nice One Bhai,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2009, 07:29:11 AM »
Chote tumhari nayee post ho to one liner maza nahi deti Ghayel ke bhai ho likho to ghazal one liner to hamre liye mamuli guftugu hain..........

Theek Hai Bhaijaan,.
Inshallah Koshish Karenge,.
Bas Aap Duaa Karein,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2009, 07:39:03 AM »
Dil Mera Jurdaa Hai, Kahin Phir Na Toot Jaaye,.
Thaama Hai Jiska Haath Maine, Kahin Wo Na Choot Jaaye,.

Yun To Ab Mohabbat Ka Safar Kar Raha Hoon Main,.
Ek Shaks Ke Zariye, Puraane Zakham Bhar Raha Hoo Main,.

Yun To Bani Hai Ab Wo Dil Ki Malika, "Doston,.
Kahin Wo Dil Na Tord De, Ye Sochkar Dar Taha Hoon Main,.

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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2009, 08:00:28 AM »
Dil Mera Jurdaa Hai, Kahin Phir Na Toot Jaaye,.
Thaama Hai Jiska Haath Maine, Kahin Wo Na Choot Jaaye,.

Yun To Ab Mohabbat Ka Safar Kar Raha Hoon Main,.
Ek Shaks Ke Zariye, Puraane Zakham Bhar Raha Hoo Main,.

Yun To Bani Hai Ab Wo Dil Ki Malika, "Doston,.
Kahin Wo Dil Na Tord De, Ye Sochkar Dar Taha Hoon Main,.

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ishq bhi hai aur darta bhi hai
kyun mohabbat ko aajmata hai
jo toota dil to yaar saath hai
humein sheesho ko jodne ka hunar aata hai
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2009, 08:12:43 AM »
ishq bhi hai aur darta bhi hai
kyun mohabbat ko aajmata hai
jo toota dil to yaar saath hai
humein sheesho ko jodne ka hunar aata hai

Nice One,.

Sheeshon Ko Jordna Shayad Aata Ho Tumhe,.
Magar Daraarein To Dikhaai Deti Hi Hain,.



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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2009, 08:31:45 AM »
Nice One,.

Sheeshon Ko Jordna Shayad Aata Ho Tumhe,.
Magar Daraarein To Dikhaai Deti Hi Hain,.




yoon mayoos na ho mere dost aur gham ki baat na kar
meri duayein hain saath tere tu beete lamhon ko yaad na kar
kii aaj khud aayi hai khushiyaan dastak dene tere dar par
qabool kar oonhe dil se aur dard kii parvaah na kar
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2009, 03:08:56 PM »
Shukriya Majid Bhai,.
Amd Nice One Again Salil Bhai,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2009, 03:17:13 PM »
Dil Mera Jurdaa Hai, Kahin Phir Na Toot Jaaye,.
Thaama Hai Jiska Haath Maine, Kahin Wo Na Choot Jaaye,.

Yun To Ab Mohabbat Ka Safar Kar Raha Hoon Main,.
Ek Shaks Ke Zariye, Puraane Zakham Bhar Raha Hoo Main,.

Yun To Bani Hai Ab Wo Dil Ki Malika, "Doston,.
Kahin Wo Dil Na Tord De, Ye Sochkar Dar Taha Hoon Main,.

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Another good one Chote Bhai
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2009, 03:18:40 PM »
Your presentations are also so nice Salil Ji N Shihab Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2009, 03:23:18 PM »
Salil and Jaanasheen bhai Aap dono ne bahut accha ek doosre ka saat diya hai.
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2009, 03:30:22 PM »
Shukriya Rajesh Bhaiya,.
And Roja Behna,.
Baqs Duaa karna,.
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2009, 07:36:12 AM »
Salil and Jaanasheen bhai Aap dono ne bahut accha ek doosre ka saat diya hai.
Your presentations are also so nice Salil Ji N Shihab Ji
thnks roja di and rajesh bhai
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