Phir se aaja merre ajnabi...:(..R..

by brokenbyluv on June 29, 2010, 06:35:56 PM
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Tujhe na dekhu tou ek pal bhi chain naa aye,
terre bin mujhe ye tanhai bahut hai sataye,
aaja merri zindgi mein phir se merre ajnabi..
kahiin tujhse doori mujhe tujhse door hi na le jaye......... sad11
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2010, 06:54:12 PM »
bahut khoob Geet ji...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause

jismon me doori hai par dil to uska tere paas aaj bhi hai,
mohabbat kiya tha tune jisse wo to paas tere aaj bhi hai,
ishq do jismon ka mel nahi hai , ye to ek jaan hai bas,
aankhen band kar dil se dekh tera pyaar tere paas aaj bhi hai...
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2010, 07:22:13 PM »
shukriya kapil ji...nice lines...
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2010, 08:11:09 PM »
Thanx a lot Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 29, 2010, 07:22:13 PM
shukriya kapil ji...nice lines...
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2010, 10:40:57 AM »
Bahot khooh BBL JI. Bahot achhi lines hain.
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2010, 12:39:40 PM »
bahut bahut shukria riyaz ji aur shihab jii apki duao k liye bhi tahe dil se shukriya...........
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2010, 01:48:30 PM »
Kya khoob likhti ho...
Bada sunder likhti ho...
Ajnabi se nata jodti ho...
Kyu ussko achhi lagti ho...


Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 29, 2010, 06:35:56 PM


Tujhe na dekhu tou ek pal bhi chain naa aye,
terre bin mujhe ye tanhai bahut hai sataye,
aaja merri zindgi mein phir se merre ajnabi..
kahiin tujhse doori mujhe tujhse door hi na le jaye......... sad11
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2010, 05:44:14 PM »
thnx koyal..jane kya dhundhta hai ye merra dil tujhko kya chahiye zindgi..
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2010, 01:29:19 PM »
Bohout acah likha hai Brokenbylove ji...
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2010, 06:29:54 PM »
thnx alot sky blue ji...
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2010, 11:58:35 PM »
Badi Hi Khoobsurati Se Haal e Dil Ko Lafzon Mein Utare Hai
Aapka Dard Hume Yahaan Mehsus Hua, Bahut Hi Khub Brokenbyluv Ji

Aankhon Mein Basi Intizar Ki Pyaas Hoon
Teri Dhadkano Se Lipta Main Ehsas Hoon.

Na Ho U Udas Zara Mehsus Karke To Dekh
Jan Meri Men To Hr Lamha Tere Pas Hoon.
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2010, 10:21:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya hum dum ji..



Tu hi tou merri nigaho mein basi pyas hai..
main janti hu merre ajnabi tu door hoke bhi merre paas hai.........
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2010, 06:54:45 AM »
Geet Ji Aapki Yeh Chaar Lines Ne Poori Ek Gazal Kaha di Hai.. Haal-e-Dil Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Dard Aur Intzaar ko Lafzon Me Behad Sanjidgi se Sameta Hai aapne.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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Dharkane Toot-ti Har Lamha Hain Intzaar Ka Kafan Odhe...!!




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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2010, 07:52:54 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2010, 07:26:27 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya mann ji aur khwaish ji....bahut khub likha hai apne mann ji shukriya ek baar phir se...
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