Phoolon Ki Sej

by Meena on February 10, 2005, 06:44:02 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2005, 03:57:10 PM »
thanx soul ji and gaurav ji!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #16 on: February 12, 2005, 01:48:50 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
shukriya dosto!!!!  :D  aap sab ka pyar hi hai ke mai aab tak likhit hoon, meri shayari padne ke liye shukriya!  :D

aaryan ji, waheed ji, hum tum ji, pandit ji aap sab ne bhi bohot hi acha likha!

 :D



nice  work  all...........  humara pyar  humesha  rahega meena......jab tak   duniya  hoon.........  keep  writting  meena............  

Tu Meri Aankh Ka Sapna Hai Agar Tu Samjhe
Tu Meri Zaat Ka Hissa Hai Agar Tu Samjhe

Ho Nahi Sakti Judda Phool Se Khushboo Jaise
Saath Humara Bhi Kuch Aisa Hai Agar Tu Samjhe..........................
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abhishek_gaurav
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«Reply #17 on: February 12, 2005, 02:27:56 PM »
are meena ji thanx bol kar sarminda mat kiya kijiye
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Meena
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«Reply #18 on: February 12, 2005, 05:04:39 PM »
thanx waheed ji and gum ji!

aap dono ka bhi jawab nahin esp gum ji superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #19 on: February 12, 2005, 05:23:21 PM »
oh nahin na aisa nahin kehte, sab bohot acha likhta hai yaha pe!  :D
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Meena
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«Reply #20 on: February 12, 2005, 05:39:03 PM »
:D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #21 on: February 12, 2005, 05:49:47 PM »
Kya khoob likha hai sabhi ne...

Dil me tere yaadon ke jariye utar jayenge,
Teri ek muskaan se dil saare zakham bhar jayenge,

Tere pyaar ke liye ab tak jee rahe the,
Aur tere pyaar ke liye hi hum mar jayenge,

Na rona tum meri maut ke baad,
Varna is duniya ke saamne hum mazak ban jayenge,

Hum badnaam hue bahoot tere pyaar me,
Lekin isi pyaar me hum tumhe mashoor kar jayenge,

Chhup chhupkar rote rahe raaton me hum,
Par tere larazte hothon ko hum khushi se hum bhar jayenge......
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: February 12, 2005, 05:53:31 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh brillienttttttt JHL ji superbbbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2005, 05:54:59 PM »
Thank for appreciating my poem a lot ...
Thank you very very much ...
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Meena
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«Reply #24 on: February 12, 2005, 05:55:59 PM »
welcome ji!

 :D
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Arifa
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«Reply #25 on: February 13, 2005, 06:52:01 PM »
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Phoolon ki sej par jane kyu kaanten chub rahe te,
Shehenayion ki awaz par jane kyu arman matam mana rahe te,
Laga li haathon me kisi aur ke nam ki mehendi aaj,
Aise kushi ke mauk pe hum najane kyu anson baha rahe te?


WAH MEENA JI AAP KI SHAYARI KI TARIFF JITNI KI JAYE KAAM HAI!


Teri Phoolon ki sej par kaante thei, meri majboori ke,
Shehenayion ki awaz mein dard shamil tha mere dil ka,
Tere haathon ke mehendi mein naam to tha kisi aur ka,
lakin chadha jo rang teri hathaliyon par,tha woh mere khoon ka.



bohat acha likha hai meena tum ne jawab nahi



kitni yaadien sath le kar kitne rishte tod kar
betiyan hoti hain rukhsat baap ka ghar chod kar
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Meena
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«Reply #26 on: February 14, 2005, 09:01:09 AM »
wah arifaaa sis!!

toodte hai rishte ek anjan ristha chodne ke liye,
hote hai juda ke ke paas jane ke liye,
jane yeh kaisi rith banayi hai duniya walo ne aaj,
ke hoti hai betiyan sirf kabhi begane karne ke liye!  sad5
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #27 on: February 25, 2005, 06:12:30 PM »
Wow Arifaji it was cool one n u too Meenaji...
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Princess21
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«Reply #28 on: February 25, 2005, 06:15:26 PM »
NICe...Arifa and Meena Sis...
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Meena
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«Reply #29 on: February 26, 2005, 10:28:37 AM »
shukriya ji shukriya JHL ji and neha!!!!!!!!

 :D
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