Phoolon Ki Sej

by Meena on February 10, 2005, 06:44:02 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #45 on: March 06, 2005, 03:04:24 PM »
"Wo the mere hamsafar jab yaad aa jaye kabhi,
Dhoop me tab sar pe apne mujhko saaya sa lage,
Tumne jis andaaz me gaaya ise achha to hai,
Ek puraani dhun me bhi ye geet gaaya sa lage ..."


apki yhe lines bohot hi achi hai JHL ji!!!! superbb!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #46 on: March 06, 2005, 03:07:09 PM »
JHL ji kya baat hai ..
dard ki shayariya aap ki bahut hi kaatil hoti jaa rahi hai............?
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #47 on: March 07, 2005, 08:44:37 AM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!  kya  baat hai  meena  .........Just_Hate_Love


bahot  khoob........

yeh kis maqaam per soojhe tujhay bicharny ke
kay ab to kahe ja ker din savarny waaly the
tamam raat nahaya tha shahar barish main
woh rang utar hee jaaye jo utarny waale the......
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Meena
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«Reply #48 on: March 07, 2005, 05:07:58 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
wah!!!!!!!!!!  kya  baat hai  meena  .........Just_Hate_Love


bahot  khoob........

yeh kis maqaam per soojhe tujhay bicharny ke
kay ab to kahe ja ker din savarny waaly the
tamam raat nahaya tha shahar barish main
woh rang utar hee jaaye jo utarny waale the......


waheed ji maine kuch nahin likha  sad5  maine kisi aur ki poem ki tareef ki thi  sad5
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #49 on: March 09, 2005, 12:57:41 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
"Wo the mere hamsafar jab yaad aa jaye kabhi,
Dhoop me tab sar pe apne mujhko saaya sa lage,
Tumne jis andaaz me gaaya ise achha to hai,
Ek puraani dhun me bhi ye geet gaaya sa lage ..."


apki yhe lines bohot hi achi hai JHL ji!!!! superbb!

 :D


Bahut Bahut Sukriya Aapka Meenaji ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #50 on: March 09, 2005, 01:00:05 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
JHL ji kya baat hai ..
dard ki shayariya aap ki bahut hi kaatil hoti jaa rahi hai............?



Sukriya Bahut Aapka Pandit ...

Hamari Shayariya Kaatil to hoti hi jayegi na kyunki unki yaad jo hame bahut aati hai aur yaad aane se hamare zakham aur bhi taaza hote jaate hai ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #51 on: March 09, 2005, 01:01:27 PM »
And Thanks To You Too Bhai ...
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rohit30002
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«Reply #52 on: June 27, 2005, 11:51:51 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Phoolon ki sej par jane kyu kaanten chub rahe te,
Shehenayion ki awaz par jane kyu arman matam mana rahe te,
Laga li haathon me kisi aur ke nam ki mehendi aaj,
Aise kushi ke mauk pe hum najane kyu anson baha rahe te?



amaging meena
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Meena
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«Reply #53 on: June 27, 2005, 03:05:14 PM »
thank u rohit ji, kya baat hai sab purani purani post niklai ja rahi hai!  :D
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