Pinjra:Shayri-E-Dard

mistufer

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Main us chidiya ki bhanti
Jo har waqt pankh
Fadhfadati.
Kuch pal udh kar fir woh gir jati,
Pankh badhne ka kerti intazaar
Qaid se Meri tarah bahar aa chahti hai

Kyun Pankh kaat diye,
udhna bhula diya karke
Qaid har hasraton ko
YuiN hi
Mujko rulaa diya
Noch diye aarmaan sabhi
cheen liya aasmaan sabhee
dedi qaid mujhe pinjare ki
Lut gaye zahaan sabhi

Un hawayon ko chhoona
Jin mein basi khushbu
Un phoolon ko chumna
Jaise ik prabhu
Jis mein Mahak tumhare jism ki
Raas naa aaya pyaar kambhakt
Umeed thi kisi talism ki
Daal diya is qaid mein
Kya sochooN kya vyabhichaar
Kar diya bandh pinjre mein mujko
nahiN hai kya atyachaar?

Par kaun kholega pinjra
Kaun udhayega
Khuli hawa mein
Badnaseeb chidya ko.
Meri nidiya ko
Aaj main pankh chahti hoon.
___Kuch pal
tumse milna chahti hoon
Tumhari chhaat par
geet gakar khilna chahti hoon
Is qaid se phir se
bahar aana chahti hoon.
Is qaid se phir se
bhar aana chahti hoon.

nira


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Rajbir

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2009, 01:10:03 PM »

Nira,

Very very very nice Applause

Excellent !


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_Vicky_

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2009, 02:48:19 PM »

Pinjra... Waqai Didi.. Pinjra chahe Sone Ka Ho Chandi ka.. Par ek Panchi ke liye to wo Kaid Hi hota hai.. Aur Is Us Dard Ko Lafzon ke zariye Hum sab tak aapne Badi Khubsoorati se Utaaara Hai.. !!

aur Is Rachna se ek Sandesh Bhi Milta hai Humen, Ki Humen Koi Haq nahi ki Hum kisi Kisi Bhi Jeev Ko Pinjre Me Ya Unhe Baandh kar rakhe.. Wo Bhi Khule Aasmaan ke Neeche Khuli Hawa Me Aazaad Khoomna chaahte hain.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob..!!

**~** Mann **~**


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pandit

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2009, 03:35:32 PM »

EXCELLENT LINES NIRA JI...


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shayara

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2009, 03:56:48 PM »

Nira Ji,

Bohot Khoob

Shayara


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deepika_divya

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2009, 04:44:10 PM »

Bahoot Khoob Nira


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ROMEY

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2009, 04:45:41 PM »

VERY NICE


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madhuwesh

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2009, 06:57:15 PM »

Wah very nice and beautiful creation nira ji. Clapping Smiley


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Deepati

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2009, 08:01:37 PM »

Wah Wah Nira Ji, Beautiful Creation! Applause

Bahut achha likhti hain aap! Daad kabool karein!


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Talat

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2009, 08:20:07 PM »

Bohot Khoob Nira Ji Applause


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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2009, 03:25:53 AM »

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Niraji...

Band Pinjre Mein Qaid Panchi Ho yaa Apni Majbooriyon mein Qaid Insaan Ho..

Har Haal Mein Yeh sab Apni AZAADI Ke liye Hi Ladhte Hai...

Niraji,Mujhe Aapka Yeh Andaaz bahut Pasand Aaya..Jis Tarah Aapne Khud Ko Ek Pinjre Mein Band Chidiya Se Compare Kiya..Har Lafz Mein Itni sachai Nazar Aayi ke Kya Kahen!!!!

Bahut Bahut Ache Niraji..


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2009, 04:14:52 AM »

Very good indeed Nira Ji


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mistufer

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2009, 04:02:48 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on June 30, 2009, 01:10:03 PM

Nira,

Very very very nice Applause

Excellent !

rajbir
thank u ji aapko poem pasand aayi
nira


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mistufer

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2009, 04:04:08 PM »

Quote from: Mann on June 30, 2009, 02:48:19 PM

bahut ache lafazon mein saraya hai tumne hamesha ki tarha.
thank u bhai


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mistufer

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Re: Pinjra

«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2009, 04:05:58 PM »

Quote from: pandit on June 30, 2009, 03:35:32 PM

EXCELLENT LINES NIRA JI...

pandit ji
aapka bahut bahut shukriya


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