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abhi thoda free time time to ek aur poem ban gayi. meri ek aur koshish pesh hai:

Pocha mujhse tanhai ne, kyu mera saath tujhe itna payara hai,
Kaha maine ke duniya ki beedh me mujhe kisi ne apnaya hi nahin,

Pocha umeed ne ke kyu rehne nahin deti tum mujhe apne pas,
Kaha main, ek toote sapne ke baad maine aur koi sapna sajaya hi nahin,

Pocha vishwas ne kyu dam tood raha hoon mai teri zindagi me pal bar me,
Kaha main ke tum to nazuk ho, tume kisi ne majbood banaya hi nahin,

Pocha mayusi ne kyu humesha mera daman pakde baithi rehti ho,
Kaha maine kisi ne koi aur tareeka jeena ka mujhe sikhaya hi nahin,

Pocha Khuda ne kyu aab tera mujh pe vishwas na raha “Meena”,
Kaha maine tumne dukh ka saya meri zindagi se kabhi hataya hi nahin!


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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2007, 01:59:35 PM »

Bahut hi Khoob... Meena..
Very Deep and True Feelings from Life Usual Smile

Very Good Work.... =D> =D>

Ek-do chhoti chhoti si typing errors thi, main theek kar rahi hoon....
I hope You don't Mind... sad5

(I am not so good in Writing sad5

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Pocha mujhse tanhai ne, kyu mera saath tujhe itna payara hai,
Kaha maine ke duniya ki beedh me mujhe kisi ne apnaya hi nahin,

Pocha umeed ne ke kyu rehne nahin deti tum mujhe apne pas,
Kaha maine, ek sapna tootne ke baad aur koi sapna sajaya hi nahin,

Pocha vishwas ne kyu dam toot raha hai mera pal pal teri zindagi se,
Kaha maine tum to nazuk ho, tumhe kisine majboot banaya hi nahin,

Pocha mayusi ne kyu humesha mera daman pakde baithi rehti ho,
Kaha maine kisi ne koi aur tareeka jeena ka mujhe sikhaya hi nahin,

Pocha Khuda ne kyu ab tera mujh pe vishwas na raha “Meena”,
Kaha maine, Tumne Dukh ka saya kabhi meri zindagi se hataya hi nahin!


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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2007, 03:13:31 PM »

Very nice Meena...bohot din baad likha dekha hai tumhara....beautiful....!! Usual Smile


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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2007, 03:35:36 PM »

Good One Meena...


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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2007, 05:57:59 PM »

Ofcourse it is good but I am late to respond. !!


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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2007, 06:01:56 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB MEENAJI...GEHRAI KE SAATH LIKHA HAI AAPNE.. =D> =D>


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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2007, 04:49:40 AM »

gr8 meena ji

mujhe gira kar ajj khud ko utha lo mehfil mein tum
aitbar jhoothla kar khud ko suna lo mehfil mein tum

waqt bewaqt koi toh khayal mera tumhein sata jayega
kuch pal aor mere dil ko jala lo mehfil mein tum

aksar dekha karte hain,mayuusi mein hamdard dhoondte logo ko
ajj phir se ek aor tamasha dikha do iss mehfil mein tum

socha kiye kabhi ahh na bhareyein teri sangdilli ki "Manasi"
par jane anjaane "Manav" ashq baha lo iss mehfil mein tum


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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2007, 08:05:10 AM »

Wonder ful feeling . meena ji.. kafi gehrai se likha hai...

manav.. wonderful lines by u tooo .. keep writing lk this...


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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2007, 11:50:23 AM »

Bahoot Khoob LIkha Hai,..
Meena Ji Aur Manav Ji,,..
Yunhi Likhte rahiye,..


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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2007, 11:54:56 AM »

Dard Ki Haddein Kuch Is Tarah Bardhi Zindagi Mein,..
Ke Zindagi Roothi Hai Ab Bhi Khushi Se Aur Mehfilon Se Anjaan Hai,..

___________________________________________---Jaanasheen---


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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2007, 02:36:08 PM »

too good meena. nice manav and jaanasheen ji!!


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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2007, 02:07:55 PM »

Thanks Deepika, janasheen and pooja .. happy to get comments from the senior members of this forum


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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2007, 10:24:10 AM »

Shukriya Pooja Ji And U Are Welcome Manav Ji,,,


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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2007, 10:27:17 AM »

Na Dard Ki Parawaah Kar Tu "Azeem...
Ke ye To Zindagi Ka Hissa Hai,..
Ye To sabki Kahaani Hai,..
Aur Har Ek Ka Khissa hai,..

_____________________-Jaanasheen-


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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2007, 09:57:39 AM »

Shika sis: shukirya aur thanks meri mistakes ko correct karne ke liye. woh kya hai jaldi jaldi me lihkti hoon na. Usual Smile

Talat, Aryaan ji, Ricky ji, khwaish ji, deepika kuddiye...thanks a lot for reading and liking my poems!!!

Manav ji and Janasheen ji...shukriya meri poem pasand karne ka aur apka likha hua bhi bohot hi acha hai!!! mai zaroor ispe jawab likhongi.


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