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Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Hath badhaye chahe jitna Chand ko fir bhi chhu na paen. Aansu nikal pade aankhon se Itni khushi kahan se laen. Utna hi le pate hain ham Jo mathe par likha hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai......
Kabhi kabhi tanhai main Khud se kar lete hain baaten. Rote rote bhi kati hain Hamne lambi lambi raten. Koi sune hamesha hamko Yesa sada nahin hota hai.......
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Chalte chalte is raste par Mile bahut se log magar. Jisko dhundho wo mila jae Nahin yese sanjog magar. Jo chahen wo hi pajaen Ye jeevan main kam hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai....
Kasame sari sachchi niklen Wada koi kabhi na toote. Prem kare lagan se sachchi Sathi apna kabhi na roothe. Mat ghabrana kabhi bhi "mann" tu Sachcha prem amar hota hai.....
Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2011, 10:19:37 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2011, 10:21:12 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya madhuji...
sath rahie....
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2011, 10:25:28 AM » |
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Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Hath badhaye chahe jitna Chand ko fir bhi chhu na paen. Aansu nikal pade aankhon se Itni khushi kahan se laen. Utna hi le pate hain ham To mathe par likha hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai......
Kabhi kabhi tanhai main Khud se kar lete hain baaten. Rote rote bhi kati hain Hamne lambi lambi raten. Koi sune hamesha hamko Yesa sada nahin hota hai.......
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Chalte chalte is raste par Mile bahut se log magar. Jisko dhundho wo mila jae Nahin yese sanjog magar. Jo chahen wo hi pajaen Ye jeevan main kam hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai....
Kasame sari sachchi niklen Wada koi kabhi na toote. Prem kare lagan se sachchi Sathi apna kabhi na roothe. Mat ghabrana kabhi bhi mann tu Sachcha prem amar hota hai.....
Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
kya poem hai bahut shanddar bahut jaan daar nnaaaaaaaaice one manjum ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2011, 10:30:49 AM » |
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bahutbahut shukriya khamoshji.....
yun hi sath dete rahie.....
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2011, 10:53:52 AM » |
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Good one !!
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2011, 10:55:14 AM » |
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bahut bahut shurkiya ishuji....
sath rahie....
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2011, 11:03:38 AM » |
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very very touching poetry manjumji nice [/quote] Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Hath badhaye chahe jitna Chand ko fir bhi chhu na paen. Aansu nikal pade aankhon se Itni khushi kahan se laen. Utna hi le pate hain ham To mathe par likha hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai......
Kabhi kabhi tanhai main Khud se kar lete hain baaten. Rote rote bhi kati hain Hamne lambi lambi raten. Koi sune hamesha hamko Yesa sada nahin hota hai.......
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Chalte chalte is raste par Mile bahut se log magar. Jisko dhundho wo mila jae Nahin yese sanjog magar. Jo chahen wo hi pajaen Ye jeevan main kam hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai....
Kasame sari sachchi niklen Wada koi kabhi na toote. Prem kare lagan se sachchi Sathi apna kabhi na roothe. Mat ghabrana kabhi bhi "mann" tu Sachcha prem amar hota hai.....
Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2011, 11:40:18 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya tamnnaji...
sath rahie......
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2011, 01:00:08 PM » |
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boht acha manju ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2011, 05:00:56 PM » |
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bahut hi khoob...behtrin peshkash manjum ji......bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2011, 05:04:49 PM » |
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bahooooooooooooot khooooooooooob majum ji dhron daad
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2011, 05:45:13 PM » |
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Manjum ji,Bahut achhi takhleeq.Mubarakbad qubool karen...Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2011, 05:31:20 AM » |
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meine pyar ke manoj hum nahi samjh paate hai hum to her pal use khush dekhana chahate hai Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Hath badhaye chahe jitna Chand ko fir bhi chhu na paen. Aansu nikal pade aankhon se Itni khushi kahan se laen. Utna hi le pate hain ham To mathe par likha hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai......
Kabhi kabhi tanhai main Khud se kar lete hain baaten. Rote rote bhi kati hain Hamne lambi lambi raten. Koi sune hamesha hamko Yesa sada nahin hota hai.......
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
Chalte chalte is raste par Mile bahut se log magar. Jisko dhundho wo mila jae Nahin yese sanjog magar. Jo chahen wo hi pajaen Ye jeevan main kam hota hai....
Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai....
Kasame sari sachchi niklen Wada koi kabhi na toote. Prem kare lagan se sachchi Sathi apna kabhi na roothe. Mat ghabrana kabhi bhi "mann" tu Sachcha prem amar hota hai.....
Kuchh de kar pane ki chah Prem nahin sauda hota hai.. Jisne manga badle main kuchh Fir wo prem kaha hota hai.
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