Pucha Maine Ek Din...

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Pucha Maine ek Din,
kisi Aashiq se,
Kyu Peetey ho Itni?
Kya ye Tumhari Pyaas Bujhati hai,
Muskuraker Diya Jwab unhone,
"Ek Tasveer basi Hai is Dil me,
Ye Dheere-Dheere Usey jalati hai"...
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2016, 12:28:02 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Husn ko ishq ki tasveer batate huwe log
Mar gaye zaher ki taseer batate huwe log
Yaad-d-jaana may huwe apne hi qhadmon pe nidhal
Zulf ko paaon ki zanjeer batate huwe log - poet unknown...
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2016, 12:37:07 PM »
na jaane aisa kyu lagta hai,
jab tak aap na padhe hamare lafzo ko,
tab tak sabkuch adhura sa lagta hai....

 Bahot Bahot Shukriya Rangila ji...
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2016, 09:09:12 PM »
Pucha Maine ek Din,
kisi Aashiq se,
Kyu Peetey ho Itni?
Kya ye Tumhari Pyaas Bujhati hai,
Muskuraker Diya Jwab unhone,
"Ek Tasveer basi Hai is Dil me,
Ye Dheere-Dheere Usey jalati hai"...
Yeh sab kaa sab harap kar jaati hai...
How about changing last line to this?

bahut khoob Pooja Jee Waah. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2016, 04:28:36 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2016, 08:09:51 AM »
Mast Applause Applause Applause
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