Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

by khwaish on August 25, 2009, 05:01:44 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 27, 2009, 05:19:06 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 25, 2009, 09:56:49 PM
Wah wah Khawish ji,bahut khoob,kitna bhi tareef karu phir bhi kam hogi.
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«Reply #16 on: August 27, 2009, 09:34:54 PM »
Samajh main nahi aata "Waah" karun ya "Aah" karun..

Bohot khoob Khwaish bhai. bohot achhi tarah is dard ko samjha or samjhaya aapne.
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«Reply #17 on: August 30, 2009, 12:15:34 PM »
Bahut bahut khoobsurat.. samajh nahi aa raha hia kin alfaazon mein tarif karun, bas padhte padhte laga jasie kahin na kahin mere dilki zubaan thi, mere haalaaton ka aayina. kisise apne se bichhadna itna dard deta hai, us dard ko aapne bahut khoobsurti aur simplicity se lafzon mein piroya hai..

Just awesome.. yehi dua hia ke Allah kisi apne ko kisise juda na kare....

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«Reply #18 on: August 30, 2009, 12:27:26 PM »
Quote from: aaina on August 26, 2009, 11:24:14 AM
khwaish sahab mashallah se bhut hi acha likha hai aapne feelings to baharhaal har kisi ke pass hoti hain ye mehsoos karne ke liyn ke kya ghalat hai aur kya sahi, magr himmat kam hi log juta paate hain aaina dikhaane ki ya daikhne ki, congrats ke aapne apna kaam bakhoobi nibhaya daad hazir aapki is ehsaason se bhari paishkash par qubool kare.n

Bahut bahut Shukriya Aslam Ji...

Teh Dil se Shukriya Aapka Jo Aapne Waqt Nikala Aur iss kavita ko Padha,Aur sach kahan Aapne,Jazbaat To har ek paas Hote hai,Bas Meri Bhi Yehi Koshish Thi ke Inn Jazbaaton ko Lafzo mein Utaar Sakoon..Shukriya Aslamji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: September 03, 2009, 07:54:28 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on August 26, 2009, 04:10:22 PM
Waah Khwaish ji... MashaAllah bahoo Bahoot khoob likha hai Khwaish ji... APNE jAZBAATON KO AAPNE BAKOOBI lAFSO MEA UTARA HAI.... BAHOOT KHOOB !

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Sophi...

Thanks A Lot For Always Appreciating!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: September 03, 2009, 08:01:15 AM »
Quote from: Dhaval on August 26, 2009, 04:53:36 PM
KhwaahiSh jee:

namaste!

aapki yeh teHreer uN meiN se aik haii jiss ne mere dil par gehraa asar ChhoRaa haii! yuuNhi liKhate raheN.. bazm ki raunaq baRhaate raheN! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval



Bahut bahut Shukriya Dhaval Ji...Aapne Iss Kavita Ko padha,Iske Dard Ko Samjha, Yeh Jaankar behad khushi Hui..

Umeed Karta Hoon,Aap Aage Bhi yuhi Saath dete rahenge..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: September 03, 2009, 04:49:47 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on August 26, 2009, 05:21:47 PM
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khwaish bro,
bahoot hi swabhavik tarike se aapne kavita me batchit ke bhavon ko pragat kiya hai.....jo ki kavita ke shuru se ant tak apne bhavon ko saath lekar padhne wale ke antarman tak utarta hai....
beshkeemti rachna ke liye koti koti lakhon lakh wah wah

bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad Sanjeev Bro Aapka...

Aapse Kuch Tareef Ke Bol Sunne Ko mil Jaaye To Humein Aur Kya Chahiye...

Aapne Iss Koshish Ko Padha,Samjha, Aur Saraha,Yeh Jaankar bahut Khushi Hui Hai..

Thankyou Soooooo Much Sanjeev Bro  Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: September 04, 2009, 05:40:09 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 26, 2009, 08:22:37 PM
ji bilkul jald hi main bhi kuch dard apni zindgi ka aap sb k beech pesh karungi...

Aapki Likhi Hui Poetry padhne Ka Intezaar Hoga Geetji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: September 04, 2009, 06:14:03 PM »
Wah wah... Bahut bahut accha likha hai. Jitni tarif kare kam hai. Wonderful as usual khwaish bhaiya  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: September 04, 2009, 09:04:12 PM »
khwaish ji

aaj aapki rachna ne mujhe nishabd kar diya
bahut se ehsaas pal bhar jaane kya kya kah gaye
sach koi aise haalat se naa guzare kisko bichadna naa padhe.
apna khayal rakhain
nira
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«Reply #25 on: September 09, 2009, 05:49:16 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 27, 2009, 09:34:54 PM
Samajh main nahi aata "Waah" karun ya "Aah" karun..

Bohot khoob Khwaish bhai. bohot achhi tarah is dard ko samjha or samjhaya aapne.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Randeri Bhai Aapka..

Aapne Iss kavita Ke Dard Ko Samhja,Yehi Bahut Hai...

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka,Jo Aapne Iss Kavita Ko Apna Waqt Diya..
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«Reply #26 on: October 02, 2009, 03:24:00 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on August 30, 2009, 12:15:34 PM
Bahut bahut khoobsurat.. samajh nahi aa raha hia kin alfaazon mein tarif karun, bas padhte padhte laga jasie kahin na kahin mere dilki zubaan thi, mere haalaaton ka aayina. kisise apne se bichhadna itna dard deta hai, us dard ko aapne bahut khoobsurti aur simplicity se lafzon mein piroya hai..

Just awesome.. yehi dua hia ke Allah kisi apne ko kisise juda na kare....



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Angel!!!

Iss Poetry Mein Shayad Har Ek Ko Kahin Na Kahin Kuch Apni beeti Si Lagti Hai Kyonki Zindagi mein Kai Baar Rishte Yuhi Tooth the Hai..

Sach kahan Aapne,Kabhi Kisi Ki Bhi Zindagi mein Aisa Koi Mukaam Naa Aaye..
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«Reply #27 on: January 22, 2010, 03:49:43 PM »
Quote from: Roja on September 04, 2009, 06:14:03 PM
Wah wah... Bahut bahut accha likha hai. Jitni tarif kare kam hai. Wonderful as usual khwaish bhaiya  Applause Applause Applause

Thankyou Soooooo Much Behna..Thanks A Million For Appreciating
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«Reply #28 on: March 10, 2010, 03:21:31 PM »
Quote from: Nira on September 04, 2009, 09:04:12 PM
khwaish ji

aaj aapki rachna ne mujhe nishabd kar diya
bahut se ehsaas pal bhar jaane kya kya kah gaye
sach koi aise haalat se naa guzare kisko bichadna naa padhe.
apna khayal rakhain
nira

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Niraji..

Aapne Yeh Kavita Padhi Aur Iske Dard Ko Mehsoos Kiya..

Iss Kavita ko apna waqt dene ke teh dil se shukriya aapka icon_flower
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«Reply #29 on: March 11, 2010, 11:09:13 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause  Clapping Smiley Maafi chahunga late reply ke liye..

My salutes again to your piece Khwahish jee..Bahaut acha likha hai...EK sachai hai, dard hai, ehsaas hai...complete piece hai...Aur akhri main, apka sandesh unn chaar linon main...  icon_salut Applause Applause Applause Applause
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