Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti..... -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #30 on: July 22, 2010, 08:25:55 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 11, 2010, 11:09:13 PM

Maafi chahunga late reply ke liye..

My salutes again to your piece Khwahish jee..Bahaut acha likha hai...EK sachai hai, dard hai, ehsaas hai...complete piece hai...Aur akhri main, apka sandesh unn chaar linon main... icon_salut

Bhai rahim,Yeh kavita Mere Dil ke bahut Kareeb Hai..

Main khud yeh kavita baar-baar padhte rehta hoon..

aapne waqt diya..aap ka tehhhhhhhhhhhh dil se shukriya bhai..


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #31 on: July 22, 2010, 09:36:51 AM »

ehsason ko shabdon me dhalkar
jo chitra sajaya hai tumne
kuch jeeti jagti tasver hai wo
jo kaagaj pe ukeri hai tumne
meri soch k sath hi
chalti hai soch bhi teri
main jo kehna chahti hun
kehdi wahi baat tumne...!!!

ye pyar mahobbat aur wafa
hai ruuh k sath jude ehsaas
jab ruuh hi na mitegi kabhi
kaise khatm hoga ye ehsaas...!!!


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #32 on: May 08, 2011, 10:42:57 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 09:36:51 AM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Anuji Inn Khoobsurat Lafzon ke Liye..

Aapka Tehhh dilll se shukriya


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #33 on: May 08, 2011, 11:15:12 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 09:36:51 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #34 on: May 08, 2011, 11:24:23 AM »

Quote from: Nira on September 04, 2009, 09:04:12 PM

khwaish ji

aaj aapki rachna ne mujhe nishabd kar diya
bahut se ehsaas pal bhar jaane kya kya kah gaye
sach koi aise haalat se naa guzare kisko bichadna naa padhe.
apna khayal rakhain
nira

Nira Ji, Aapka Tehhhh dillll se shukriya...

Aapne Inn Ehsaaso Ko mehsoos Kiya..Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #35 on: May 09, 2011, 10:55:12 AM »

Quote from: Roja on September 04, 2009, 06:14:03 PM

Wah wah... Bahut bahut accha likha hai. Jitni tarif kare kam hai. Wonderful as usual khwaish bhaiya

Aapka Bahut Bahut shukriya


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #36 on: May 12, 2011, 09:33:19 AM »

Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Randeri Saheb!!!

Aapko Yoindia mein Main Bhaut Misss Karta Hoon


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«Reply #37 on: May 16, 2011, 05:46:06 AM »

kya baat hai khwaishji... aapki har rachna lajawab hoti hai... har rachna padkar aansu chalak hi jate hain... kya kahun....

"wo raah jahan se juda ho gain teri rahen,
wahin hain aaj bhi ham kahi na dhundhi panahen.
mere aansuon ne tujhe sau asu sadayen di thin,
laut aao tumhare lie ab bhi tarasti hain nigahe...."


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #38 on: September 09, 2012, 02:38:02 PM »

Bohat Bohat Hi Khubsurat!!!! Last four lines bhi bohat aachi ban padi hai.. Sach hai..Maangne se jo mile...woh pyar nahi....

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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #39 on: September 09, 2012, 02:47:05 PM »

mere jism ke sare raungte khade ho gaye ye padhte padhte...
doob gaya tha ish do dilo ki kahi-ankahi baato me.. tearyeyed

itna pyar, itna dard, itni shiddat... aur na jane kitne ehsas bhare hue hai isme...

salute u khwaish ji... Usual Smile


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #40 on: September 09, 2012, 02:47:41 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 09:36:51 AM

Sach kahaa Aapne Anu ji..

Waqt Dene ke liye Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #41 on: September 09, 2012, 03:24:12 PM »

Khwaish jee
meri khushnaseebi ki ye post padhne ko mili. aapne tab likhi jab mai aaya bhi nahi tha yo pe.
bahut bahut badhaai is khoobsurat peshkash ke liye.
logo ne itnee taaref kar dee hai ki mera kuch kahna baimaanee hoga. likhte rhiye
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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #42 on: September 11, 2012, 04:45:53 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 25, 2009, 05:01:44 PM

Shayad Yeh Topic Kuch Alag Ho Ya Yeh kavita Padhne Mein Kuch Alag sa Lage..Par Hum Sab Wahi Likhte Hai,Jo humne Kabhi Mehsoos Kiya Ho,Yeh Kavita Bhi Uss Topic par Adhaarit Hai,Jo Maine bhi Kisi Apne Ko Iss Daur Se Guzarte Hue Dekha Hai..Yeh Topic Hai DIVORCE\SEPARATION Ke Upar..Mera Koi Apna Iss daur Se Guzar raha tha..Uske Dil ka Dard main Jaanta Hoon..Yeh Kavita ussi Ek Soch Par Adharit hai..Iss Kavita Mein Do Kirdaar Hai..Ek Aadmi ka To Ek Aurat ka..Yeh Kavita Unn Dono Ki Aapsi Baatcheet Hai,Jo Sirf Meri Ek kalpana hai Ke Bichadne Ka Baad,Kabhi Woh Phir Mile To Aapas Mein Kya Baat Karte Honge..Unki Kya Shikayeten Hongi..Aur Ab Unki Kya Majbooriyan Hongi..Uss Dard,Uss Ehsaas Ko Lafzo mein Utaarne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon...Shukriya..

Note:Iss Kavita Mein PURPLE Colour Aadmi Ke Kahe Hue Alfaaz Hai
Aur Blue Ek Aurat Ke...

Ek Arse Ke Baad Tujhe Dekh Kar
Kuch Sawaal Se Dil mein Aate Hai!!
Be-Inteha Mohabbat Ke Baad Bhi,
Kya Do Log Juda Ho Jaate Hai...

Inn Sawalo Se Mera Bhi,
Ab Ek Gehra Naata Hai!!!
jahan par Pyaar Ki Umar Khatam Ho jaaye,
Waha Par Koi Kya Kar Paata Hai...

Yeh Agar Sach hai
ke har Khata Meri Hi Thi!!!
To Tum Jo Saza Do Woh Kabool Hai Mujhe,
bas Ek Baar Itna Keh De, Ke "Tu Ab Bhool Jaa Mujhe...."

Main Jis Raah par Chal Padhi Hoon
Udhar Koi Raasta Naa Tha!!!
Par Sach To Yeh hai Ke,
Tu Mera Hokar Bhi kabhi Mera Naa Tha...

Kuch kasoorvaar Main Bhi Hoon,
To Kuch Kasoorvaar Tu Bhi,
Par Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Bhi Kabhi Juda Naa Tha!!
Khata Hui hai Mujhse Par Kya Karoon??
Insaan Hi Hoon main!!! Koi Khuda Naa Tha....

Par, Jo Shaks Bichad Jaaye,
Woh Phir Milkar Bhi To Mila Nahi Karte!!
Phool Jo Murjha Jaaye Ek Baar,
Woh Phir Khila Bhi To Nahi Karte....

Aaene Mein Khud Ko Jab Dekha
Usme Mera Chehra Naa Tha!!!
Zakhm To Maine Bhi khaaye Bahut,
Par Koi Zakhm Itna Gehra Naa Tha....

Jo Zakhm Khaaye hai Hum Dono Ne,
Woh Guzarte Waqt Ke Saath Bhar Jaayenge!!!
Bas Afsos Iss Baat Ka Hai Ke,
Hum Tujhse Juda Hokar Hi Mar jaayenge....

Mehsoos Hota Hai Mujhe Kuch Yuh,
Ke Juda Hona Tujhe Bhi Kabhi Gawara Naa Tha,
Par Hairaan Hoon Main Aaj!!
Tune To Kabhi mujhe Phir Pukaara Naa Tha....

Maangkar Tujhse Pyaar Paana,
Mere Liye Woh Pyaar Nahi!!!
Sach To Yehi Hai Ke Aisa Koi pal Nahi,
Jab Mujhe Tera Intezaar Nahi....

Kaash!!!!Main Tujhse Phir
Woh Baat Keh Paata!!!
Tera Hoon Aur bas
Tera Hi Ban Kar Main Reh Jaata....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Pyaar,Ishq,Mohabbat!!!
Inn Ehssaso Ki Kabhi Koi Umar Nahi Hoti!!!!
Saath Ho Humraahi To Zindagi Ki Koi Raah,
Phir Mushkil Nahi Hoti....

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

im just speechless......bohat gehrayee main ja kar aap ne ihsasat ko lafzon ki mala mein piroya hai.....iss main dar.d ki heedat bhee hai or mohabat ki shidat bhee hai....yaqeenan yeh aisee kavita hai jis ki tareef karna bohat mushkil amar hai phir bhi mere khyal mein ye aapki best compose ki huyi nazm hai.......bohat c daad aapk qalam ke liye ......
shaad rahein........


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Re: Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat Ki Koi Umar Nahi Hoti.....

«Reply #43 on: March 07, 2013, 04:08:53 PM »

Is par comment karna toh mushkil hi hai khwaish ji. Bas dua karte hai yeh din kisi dushman ke zindagi mein bhi na aaye.


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«Reply #44 on: June 11, 2014, 07:35:42 PM »

Heart touching line...bahut hi umda likga h aapne jiske sath esi biti h vahi jaan skta h smj skta h ye alfaz


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