pyaar nahi chupta:Shayri-E-Dard

gum

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Hello every1! this is the first time i am posting some thing on the web!hope u all will appreciate it and do tell me how i can improve it

JAB RAAT KI TANHAIYA DIL BANKE DHADAKTI HAI,
YADOO KE GALICHE MEIN CHILMAN SE SARAKTI HAI,
YU! PYAAR NAHI CHUPTA PALKOO KE JHUKNE SE,
AANKHOO KE GHERAI MEIN TAHRIR CHAMAKTI HAI,
KHUSH RANG PARINDO KE LAUT AANE KE DIN AAYE,
BHICHDE HUE MILTE HAI JAB BARAF PHIGALTI HAI,
SHAURATH KE BULANDI BHI PAL BHAR KA TAMASHA HAI,
JIS DAAL PAR BATHE HO WOH BHI TOOT SAKTHI HAI


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2005, 04:56:32 PM »

Quote from: "gum"

Hello every1! this is the first time i am posting some thing on the web!hope you all will appreciate it and do tell me how i can improve it

JAB RAAT KI TANHAIYA DIL BANKE DHADAKTI HAI,
YADOO KE GALICHE MEIN CHILMAN SE SARAKTI HAI,
YU! PYAAR NAHI CHUPTA PALKOO KE JHUKNE SE,
AANKHOO KE GHERAI MEIN TAHRIR CHAMAKTI HAI,
KHUSH RANG PARINDO KE LAUT AANE KE DIN AAYE,
BHICHDE HUE MILTE HAI JAB BARAF PHIGALTI HAI,
SHAURATH KE BULANDI BHI PAL BHAR KA TAMASHA HAI,
JIS DAAL PAR BATHE HO WOH BHI TOOT SAKTHI HAI

nice work gum..... keep it up and keep'em coming....


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pandit

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pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2005, 04:59:15 PM »

wah gum ji,....................
kya baat hai ji.............................?
khaas taur se last line is very nice.............................


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Meena

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Re: pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2005, 04:59:51 PM »

Quote from: "gum"

arre wahhhhhhhhhhhh, yeh to bohot hi acha likha hai apne!!! keep it up! wud like to c more of ur poems!!

:D


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pandit

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pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2005, 05:03:30 PM »

chuoaane se kaha ye dost kabhi ye pyaar chupta hai,
ye aisa mushk hai jo khooshboo deta rahta hai.(nm)................................................. ................


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waheed_rose2004

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pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2005, 05:04:30 PM »

wah!!!!!!!!!! gum......... really very nice written...... keep it up........... excellent...............


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pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2005, 05:04:55 PM »

wah....gum,bohat hi accha likha hai :D

keep writing.........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: pyaar nahi chupta

«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2013, 03:22:36 AM »

So Cute.


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