Pyaase the hum ......

by Just_Hate_Love on August 29, 2005, 06:08:12 PM
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Ye gazal thodi lambi hai par ummeed karta hoon ki aap sab logo ko ye pasand aayegi ...



Pyaase the hum ye baat saaki ko bata na sake,
Saamne hi pada tha jaam par hum use utha na sake,
Maange the kuchh pal khushiyo ke khuda se,
Par wo pal hum khuda ko lauta na sake,
Humne bhi is duniya mein logo se mohabbat paayi,
Par hum un logo par mohabbat loota na sake,
Samundar ki pyaas to humne kab ki bujha di,
Par samundar mein hum apni pyaas bujha na sake,
Unhone aasani se kar liya faisla juda hone ka,
Hum ho na sake unse juda aur wo dooriya badha na sake ......
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2005, 06:19:53 PM »
wah JHL,bohat khoob likha hai dost,bohat din baad dikhai bhi diye ho Puzzled ! .Bohat pasand aayi ye ghazal Usual Smile .
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2005, 06:24:38 PM »
Hum thode dino ke liye chhutti par the ...
Bas aapse milne ka man kiya aur chale aaye ...
Thoda likhne ka man bhi kiya to phir yaado ko taza kar kuchh aake saamne pesha kar diya ...

Any ways thanks a lot ...
Ab jaldi se kuchh suna dijiye ...
Ye kaan taras gaye hai ...
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2005, 06:32:16 PM »
Good one Just_Hate_Love ji!!!

Bahoot acha likha hai apne!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2005, 07:32:23 PM »
very nice JHL !!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2005, 07:34:58 PM »
Oh WOW kya baat kahi hai.........bahut achaa JHL.........
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2005, 04:57:35 PM »
Most welcome........!!!!!!

"Aaye hain aaj barson baad mere saamne woh,
      ankho me wahi pal lehraaye hain puraane,
      kaise kahein unse kaise jiye hain ek ek pal ham,
      hamari nazron ki bhaasha wo kabhi kyon nai samajhte."
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2005, 05:04:35 PM »
very very gud sis....

kabhi humse kaha nahi gaya
unke baare mein kya sochte the hum

har baar dil tadap ke reh gaya
magar zubaan ne saath na diya

woh pyaar ka dariya the
aur pyaase the hum

yeh to kudrat ka hi situm tha
jo juda ho gaye hum..
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2005, 05:11:31 PM »
wow sis,direct dil pe lagi ek ek line :oops: and thanx Usual Smile .

"Na jaane wo kya pyaar kya wafa hai,
      phir bhi dilye mera na jane kyun use hi chahta hai,
      ek ek pal uski yaad me rota hai,bilakhta hai,
      kya hai aisa tujhme,kyun ye dil tujhpe marta hai."
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2005, 05:28:24 PM »
wow  wonderfullllllll  work  JHL  ...Nikki..........Nidhi....  superbssssssss....
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2005, 05:52:31 PM »
thanx waheed.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2005, 06:30:01 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wow sis,direct dil pe lagi ek ek line :oops: and thanx Usual Smile .

"Na jaane wo kya pyaar kya wafa hai,
      phir bhi dilye mera na jane kyun use hi chahta hai,
      ek ek pal uski yaad me rota hai,bilakhta hai,
      kya hai aisa tujhme,kyun ye dil tujhpe marta hai."


bahot dino  se nahi  apne  darmiyan  woh  shaks
udaas karke humein chal  diya  woh shaks
kareeb the  to kaha humne sungdil  usko
hua  jo  door  to  lagta hai  jaane jan  woh shaks.............................nm
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2005, 07:32:50 AM »
thanx Nidhi sweeto n Waheed...dono ne kya khoob likha hai....full of feelings n very touching..
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2005, 06:02:14 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja Nikki Isha and Waheed for appreciating this very post ...
Very nice Niddhi Nikki and Waheed ...
Keep it up all ...
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2005, 06:08:56 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Most welcome........!!!!!!

"Aaye hain aaj barson baad mere saamne woh,
      ankho me wahi pal lehraaye hain puraane,
      kaise kahein unse kaise jiye hain ek ek pal ham,
      hamari nazron ki bhaasha wo kabhi kyon nai samajhte."



Nazro ki bhasha kaise samjhenge,
Jo dil ke kehne pe chalte hai,
Kehne zarorrat nahi unko wo jaante hai,
Bina unke aap ek ek pal kaise jalte hai ...
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