pya.r jisko kahein dar.d kaa naam hai

by laaiba on May 25, 2012, 09:11:50 AM
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              dil k paiiMaane mai.n heej.r kaa jaam haii
               pya.r jis ko kahein dar.d kaa naam haii

              aa.j apne hi dil ko ye samjhaya haii
              zindagee dar.d mei.n jeeNE kaa naam haii

              koun kehtaa hai mai.n bhool jayoon gi sab
              too ne jo bhee kahaa voh to ilzaam haii

              dil ki dhadkan ne to yaad uss ko kiyaa
              jis k bin adhooree meiri har shaam haii

              pyar ka ran.g chadh k utarta naHeeN
              ran.g jo utaR jaaye voh to khaam haii
         laaiba ali angel11
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2012, 09:25:33 AM »
bahut khoob laaiba ji do lines ke beech space rakkhaa karo dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2012, 10:20:58 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 25, 2012, 09:11:50 AM
              dil k paiiMaane mai.n heej.r kaa jaam haii
               pya.r jis ko kahein dar.d kaa naam haii

              aa.j apne hi dil ko ye samjhaya haii
              zindagee dar.d mei.n jeeNE kaa naam haii

              koun kehtaa hai mai.n bhool jayoon gi sab
              too ne jo bhee kahaa voh to ilzaam haii

              dil ki dhadkan ne to yaad uss ko kiyaa
              jis k bin adhooree meiri har shaam haii

              pyar ka ran.g chadh k utarta naHeeN
              ran.g jo utaR jaaye voh to khaam haii
         laaiba ali angel11


Waah Waah Waah!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Laaiba Ji..Khaas Taur Par yeh Sher..

"Kaun Kehtaa Hai mai.n Bhool jayoon gi Sab
 too ne jo bhee kahaa voh to ilzaam hai"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Laaiba Ji Maine Isse Edit karke Har Ashaar ke Beech Space Diya Hai.
Bura Lage To Gustaaki Muaaf Kijiyega..
 
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2012, 11:28:59 AM »

BAHUT BADHIYA KALAAM LAAIBA JEE

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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2012, 03:07:51 PM »
Waah ! Waah !! Beautiful !!! Deserves more  Raus  
but , alas , I can give just  one . So it's yours !!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2012, 05:51:29 PM »
majedaar..bahut acche
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2012, 06:12:42 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 25, 2012, 09:11:50 AM
              dil k paiiMaane mai.n heej.r kaa jaam haii
               pya.r jis ko kahein dar.d kaa naam haii

              aa.j apne hi dil ko ye samjhaya haii
              zindagee dar.d mei.n jeeNE kaa naam haii

              koun kehtaa hai mai.n bhool jayoon gi sab
              too ne jo bhee kahaa voh to ilzaam haii

              dil ki dhadkan ne to yaad uss ko kiyaa
              jis k bin adhooree meiri har shaam haii

              pyar ka ran.g chadh k utarta naHeeN
              ran.g jo utaR jaaye voh to khaam haii
         laaiba ali angel11

good Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2012, 11:53:52 AM »
veryy nice.
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2012, 12:20:37 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut hi vadhiya likhya
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2012, 03:13:27 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on May 25, 2012, 09:25:33 AM
bahut khoob laaiba ji do lines ke beech space rakkhaa karo dheron daad aur ek rau
aapkaa bohat bohat shukria....
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2012, 03:14:35 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 25, 2012, 10:20:58 AM

Waah Waah Waah!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Laaiba Ji..Khaas Taur Par yeh Sher..

"Kaun Kehtaa Hai mai.n Bhool jayoon gi Sab
 too ne jo bhee kahaa voh to ilzaam hai"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Laaiba Ji Maine Isse Edit karke Har Ashaar ke Beech Space Diya Hai.
Bura Lage To Gustaaki Muaaf Kijiyega..
 
aapki daad hamare liye hosla afzaee hai khwaish ji
bohat shukria taseeh e ghazal ke liye....
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2012, 03:15:08 PM »
Quote from: Anahita on May 25, 2012, 11:28:59 AM

BAHUT BADHIYA KALAAM LAAIBA JEE

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bohat shukria aapkaa...
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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2012, 03:16:02 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 26, 2012, 03:07:51 PM
Waah ! Waah !! Beautiful !!! Deserves more  Raus 
but , alas , I can give just  one . So it's yours !!!!

mai,n shuker guzar hoon aapki bohat shukria aapkaa....
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2012, 03:16:24 PM »
Quote from: shaukeen on May 26, 2012, 05:51:29 PM
majedaar..bahut acche
bohat shukria....
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2012, 03:16:45 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on May 26, 2012, 06:12:42 PM
good Applause Applause
thanks.....
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